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Title: Praise the author!
Reviewed By: Kalopsia On: September 21, 2022 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story was so captivating. I was thoroughly entertained and overall
just a really interesting and well written story. Thank you for
sharing this. I applaud your brain. I'm also kinda a sucker for
some smut so I especially liked those parts. Hot damn! I'll make
sure to come back to this every now and then. Great stuff!
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Reviewed By: Sup On: May 15, 2017 13:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
Chapter 29 = goosebumps. I need this to be a movie! Somebody
animate this!!!
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Title: Yippee I'm a princess
Reviewed By: Scele On: February 05, 2013 01:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I have never laughed so damn hard in my life at a fanfic when I read Bulma saying "Yippee I'm a princess". You have a superb gift. One I wished so badly I had. |
Reviewed By: Rachel7654 On: February 21, 2012 17:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far the best Fic I have ever read. ...this is my 3rd time reading it :) Chapter 23...I cry everytime!!! I hope that you will go on to publish a book. ...and let everyone know when you do! |
Reviewed By: .,.,.,. On: December 30, 2011 08:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is the third time I read this story and its still amazing. Vegeta is so very much in character and the plot is full of good action and gore. I still dont like Bulma's personality here. She's a cold blooded killer just like Vegeta only in a weak human backstabbing way. I actually enjoyed when she got hurt I hated her so much. But that didn't take away from the awesomeness of the fic. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2011 06:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my second time reading this fic. I can't believe that you don't have more reviews than this. You are one of my favorite authors and your stories are so original. I love this story. |
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2010 06:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep rereading your fics, they're so awesome! But I just had to share this little bit of info about the degree of burns. You said she suffered second degree burns, but then stated the burns charred her bones. By that fact, that would have to be at least a fifth degree burn, or even a sixth. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Burn#By_degree more info here! Just a small detail that I thought I'd point out. Other than that, your fic rocks my world.
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Reviewed By: Violet62. On: August 10, 2010 05:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Against All Odds is so beautiful.Tempestt, you are the best ! Please continue your wonderful work, I am looking forward to seeing the rest of Fixation, the sequel of Free My Soul, and more of your beautiful fanfics.
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Reviewed By: Miaka-chanFF On: May 18, 2010 10:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh. Once again another one of fanfiction that's SOOOO underrated by the people here. I'm glad I clicked and read it despite the chapter : review ratio. Amazing story, ate up every minute of it. Can't wait to read the sequel, which I'm doing right now after I'm done writing this. :)
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Reviewed By: Can't_Resist_Temptation On: March 10, 2010 11:34 PST
Comment/Review:
You are amazing. Effin' amazing. I am bowed over by your writing, and there aren't a lot of people that I say that about.
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 20:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
Absolutely stunning. You are such a talented write Temp. Have you ever thought of writing some original material to publish or are you all about the fanfics? If you ever do write a book, do let me know :). Beautiful plot, unbelievable characterization I mean you kept Vegeta's badass attitude even after he admitted to himself that he loved her. I've seen a lot of authors who totally screw that up. As usually wonderfully creative. I'll have you know this is only the second fanfic to ever make me cry. When Vegeta killed Bulma and started crying in his space pod I lost it. I lose many hours of sleep reading this fic XD. Love you temp, keep up the great work.
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Title: Beatiful
Reviewed By: jambacute [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I can't give you enough credit for this story. it made laugh (gotta love the dark homur in this story) it made me cry and cry somemore. [ chapping] I have read som chapter on fanfiction when i notice you censcor some of the parts. i was "you got to have the story on mediaminor" and guess what it was there. I really enjoy the read. it too me three whole days to read (with breaks in between) anyways this is a great story along with Lab Monkey. i should say that you are one of my top authors up to date. Please continue the good work. It is very hard to find good writers these day.
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Reviewed By: jambacute [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 16:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
ohh whoe is meeeeeeeee! how saddddd (tears in my eyes)!!!!
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Title: the gate of judgement
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm nt flaming just stating that "The Gates of Judgement" is actually called the check in station. love the story so far
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Reviewed By: surmise On: August 07, 2009 23:03 PDT
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Yep, expect a review on every one of your B/V fics. :] This was the first fanfic that I read by you! EE, GRAVITY ROOM XD But besides that, this pretty much ended it for me with other authors, as many have said in the other reviews. I'm extremely glad I read this and you're just amazing. :]
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