| "Flying Away" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: tsuki On: July 25, 2003 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please updeate |
Reviewed By: kee On: June 09, 2003 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hope u update soon, very soon, very very soon |
Reviewed By: none On: March 09, 2003 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
he's right,If your going to insult something,DO IT RIGHT!!!!!!
And Ash/Pan are a preety good couple. |
Reviewed By: Mewtwo On: February 27, 2003 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
What are you talking about????????Ash and Pan make a good couple!!!!!!!!!!!!
PS:It's thank,not think |
Reviewed By: Brandon B On: February 25, 2003 15:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Think goodness you aren't going to make it a Ash/Pan.... had me scared there for a while. |
Reviewed By: Youkai Youko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 19:51 CST
Comment/Review:
ALRIGHT!
Great story.
Now, I want she's having a mew! |
Reviewed By: none On: December 31, 2002 01:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Why doesen't anybody wright a fanfic were ash is 18.So,Pan is only a few years younger so they can go out |
Reviewed By: Ash On: December 28, 2002 13:58 CST
Comment/Review:
You got to get Ash&Pan together!Without that it want be a story!!!!
PS,Make Ash a full saiyen |
Reviewed By: the secret saiyen On: December 23, 2002 00:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I THINK ASH&PAN ARE THE CUTEST COUPLE THERE IS!!!!Get Ash&Pan in a pic together kissing |
Reviewed By: None On: December 22, 2002 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get Ash&Pan together!!!!!!!!I have been into crossovers for a long time.And I have never seen a Ash&Pan before!!!!So please put Ash&Pan together on a date or something!!!!!!
ps:Did you ever notice Ash does not look a thing like his mother.So,I think that Ash is a full blooded saiyen.And say that Ash lied about his age!Put that he is realy 18.Because a 13 year old boy and a 16 year old girl out on a date would just not look right!!!! |
Reviewed By: None On: December 22, 2002 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will someone tell me what the romance was,because I didn't see any!
PS Get Ash&Pan together!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: December 04, 2002 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Yugioh is right!!!Get Ash and Pan in love and make Ash a full blodded saiyen |
Reviewed By: the hidden fighter On: December 04, 2002 19:08 CST
Comment/Review:
FROGET TRUNKS!!!!!!GET ASH&PAN ON A DATE TOGETHER!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: saiyen On: December 04, 2002 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This gives me a whole new idea on pokemon and dragon ball GT |
Reviewed By: Yugioh On: December 04, 2002 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Get together Ash&Pan together as boyfriend and girlfriend.And make Ash a full blooded saiyen!!!It will make the story WHAY more romantic and cool |
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