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Reviewed By: Yugi On: December 04, 2002 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
4 words GET ASH&PAN TOGETHER!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kiki On: November 18, 2002 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think what should comke out of the egg is a Eevee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write Soon
BYE |
Reviewed By: Keiki On: November 18, 2002 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think what should comke out of the egg is a Eevee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write Soon
BYE |
Reviewed By: Brainsmon On: November 06, 2002 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well great fic chapter so far, I hope you get pan spilt from the others for a while(I don't hate ash and Co but I want to see pan on her own journeys) with matt thornberry(maybe a small romance,with him calling her panny to) and a thrid new charater,plus this idea if you want to use it:
In new arena,
Pan:hey guys(matt and new charater looks at the logo on the poster)the whole thing is at top of a huge MT
A pokemon tourament ever 4 years,
poff oak:pan this will be a trainer's dream to win
Matt: Ok panny,I will win this
Pan: in your dreams
The battles greater, the comaption stronger
Rez(Guy dress in brown with bones on his belt) Go Marowak, come on little girl
Pan: all right neb go
alex(good looking guy in a magican costume)Go Alakasam. Matt go(what pokemon? I said onix)
only one will win,
pan: neb get up
the Neo managa cup
I think pan show have a eevee?"blue"
well good luck
will matt goes to girls like brock? and they should be some guru pokemon triva where guru asked the readers questions about pokemon or what they just read in the chapter,think of it as omkae?
well later |
Reviewed By: Ash On: October 23, 2002 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is Rad, I can't wait to read the next few chapters. Write and update more soon. |
Reviewed By: Critic On: October 23, 2002 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
You FUCK!!!!
Write More, OR DIE FUCKING!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Shader On: October 07, 2002 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this though please go easy on old team rocket its not their fault their morons. Oh and i think you should make a chapter where lets just say.......... TRuNKS GOES INSANE AND BLOWS ASH UP!!!!!!! i like it but still pan and trunks should date or trunks and marron either would be okay |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon On: October 04, 2002 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story will you please write more soon!? And I think that Mew would be cool. |
Reviewed By: Grymalkin On: October 04, 2002 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good story if you would just keep writing!! you really should keep writing this its damn good. As for your question, Mew or Mewtwo would be good, it's something new and exciting. Just keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey:) this story is awsome:)
I can't wait to read the next chapters.
I truly love this story. Its the only crossover of this nature that actually is good:)
Peace
Gloria stone |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: September 12, 2002 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
On the screen it said that you updated. But there are still the same chapters posted. Did you add another chapter, because I can't find it. |
Reviewed By: chibi vegeta On: August 20, 2002 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story you have going here. you should make a chapter where Ash dies. please write more chapters, and oh yeah, Ash should die. |
Reviewed By: tidus On: August 20, 2002 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed reading this fic, please hurry and write more ok ! |
Reviewed By: sphinx_raider [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the best poke'mon crossover I've read! *Go Pan!" I think you should get an eevee from her egg. -_-o I dunno ur adress |
Reviewed By: akira On: July 21, 2002 11:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
when are the next chapters coming up?
Cause i want plenty to read because it's damn exiting |
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