| "Flying Away" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tiffany On: July 18, 2002 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i hope you update soon. I love reading your story and can't wait to see what happens to pan. Please keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: turtel1 On: July 09, 2002 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
when is the next chapter coming up?
please let it be much cause i wone read
a good story |
Reviewed By: digiboy On: November 07, 2002 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So pan and mewto going to fight I wonder what going to happen |
Reviewed By: lala On: July 03, 2002 10:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
it would be cool if the egg wasn't really an egg, and it was something else that mews are born from. i can't see pan and ash together cause i always like pan/trunks fics. and since we don't know anything about ash's dad, and he has the features of a saiyan, make it turn out that he's half saiyan or somethin. good story so far |
Reviewed By: akira On: June 22, 2002 06:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing it's one of the best story's ever
here on mediaminer.
p.s.:try to make pan a pokemon champion that will
be so cool. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: May 16, 2002 06:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
for your question i say Mew. and im loving this fic and im so glad you updated and if you call Ch. 3 shourt you must like Ch.s that are around 30 or so pages long.
love this fic must read more,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Ballistic On: May 13, 2002 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is overall a good fanfic. I like DBGT much more than Pokemon, but I thought this was a rather well written fanfic. In my own opinion, it went a little too far into the pokemon style of a story. Would Pan really like training Pokemon to fight? I would have thought that Gohan's environmentalist nature would have rubbed off. Like I said, it's just my opinion. All in all, your story is a good read, and I believe it is a very good idea for a story.
PS: Sorry I kind of copied your idea. In my own opinion my story isn't as good as yours, but I'll try to make it better. Hope you don't mind some competition! j/k. |
Reviewed By: Dragoon On: April 29, 2002 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I devour stories like a fat man in a buffet style restraunt. Despite that, I savored this one. Poke'mon stories are my favorites.
As it is, I think that the new hatchling needs to be a 'Celebi.' Since this doesn't have a 2nd evolution, I beleive it needs to become something like a Mewtwo type version of the squirt with an ornate style of flower growing out of its back, along with multiple vine-whips just snakeing out at all angles giving it the look of a sun made out of plants, but less round. The head would be covered in leaves (as in hair) and would be similar to that of a SSJ powering up. Roll it all together into a nice neat package that is always hovering, anywhere from 2 inches to 2 feet off the ground, and you have one awesome peice of Poke'mon. Depending on the name, it would be called Celation (celebi=celebrate:Celation=Celebration). As for the name, I leave that in your capable hands.
Damon Maddox
Age 17
Dragoon |
Reviewed By: Lina On: May 22, 2002 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dunno. I just really like it and i ahvn't really spotted n e mistakes. I really just wanted to say that i like this and that i think that the pokemon that should come out of the egg should be moltres, assumming that was the pokemon Pan saw when she was going to the Pokemon world. If you already have plans for that pokemon later on I think it should be a Dratini or Eevee because they are just so darn cute! Plus the fact that Mew is supposed to be one of a kind. N E ways, i really have enjoyed the fic so far and please keep writing!Font Color |
Reviewed By: Lina (again) On: May 22, 2002 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
sorry i just wanted to add one more thing. if youread this can you please e-mail me? my e-mail is pantherocker@comcast.net. Title the e-mail fanfic or something because I may regad it as junkmail. :-) |
Reviewed By: unregistered On: February 25, 2002 19:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Mew and Moltres are incapable of making eggs according to the guides for Pokemon Gold/Silver and Crystal. Make it a Dratini because its maximum form is Dragonite, and dragons are cool. |
Reviewed By: Princess_Serenity1234 On: February 23, 2002 21:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello! Hey that a great stroy you know! And you are going to put Ash and Pan together?!?! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: January 07, 2002 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont realy like pokemon but this fic is kick ass! plz update soon. and one more thing are you going to get Ash an Pan together???????????????? |
Reviewed By: Zeldafreak (Vikki) On: December 31, 2001 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
It is REALLY COOL!!! I LOVE POkemon and DBGT! I'm glad you put them together! Keep it up! I love it!! |
Reviewed By: BikoNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2001 19:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Kewl!!!! *_* I've wondered about Pan going into the Pokemon dimension! Is there gonna be Ash&Pan??? I'd love to see that! Please update soon! Ur fic is awesome!! ^^ |
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