| "Heaven or Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 21:11 CDT
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really good! i don't read much H/K but I really liked this one.
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Reviewed By: darkdemoness17 On: April 02, 2005 20:34 CST
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man that was awsome please write another another one soon.
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Reviewed By: darkdemoness17 On: April 02, 2005 17:28 CST
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! man it was too sad but it was still really good.
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Reviewed By: darkdemoness17 On: April 02, 2005 16:34 CST
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good chappy, question though is this the same karasu that kurama had to fight in the dark tournament?
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Reviewed By: darkdemoness17 On: April 02, 2005 16:08 CST
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i relly like it i'm with you on the whole hiei/kurama thing they make a cute couple.
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Reviewed By: darkdemoness17 On: April 02, 2005 00:17 CST
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very well done i really like so far keep it up ok.
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Reviewed By: darkdemoness17 On: April 01, 2005 23:47 CST
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VERY GOOd your doing well so far.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: August 25, 2004 09:03 CDT
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*claps* nice ending ^_^. I like how you brought Youko and Kurama back together again ^_^.
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Title: YAY?!
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: August 23, 2004 19:17 CDT
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THAT WAS THE BEST FRICKEN STORY I EVER FRICKEN READ?! PLEASE DON'T DELETE?! I MUST SHOW TO FRIENDS..OR AT LEAST PRINT IT OUT XD BEST WISHES AND PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER.. LOVE Jin
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Reviewed By: Hieis Shadow(dont wanna sign in) On: August 15, 2004 05:33 CDT
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hahahahaha. sad. can't wait for the last chapter
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Title: *kills karasu and muroko* O.O what?
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: August 03, 2004 17:44 CDT
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*still killing the two* YOU *stab* SHALLN'T *stab* HURT *stab* KURAMA *stab* OR HIEI'S *stab* LOVE?! *stab stab stab* MUWAHAHAHA DIE YOU TWO SICKOS?! *gets out da BIG bazooka and blows em up* XD MUWAHAHAHAHAHA-what? O.O??? oh that..^__^U *hides bazooka* nothing nothing...just continue da story XD have fun..just alittle promise forfilled ^__^ uh...O.O ok..I leave now..*drags bodys away* ^__^ UDS!!!
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Title: Karasu=Ass
Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell No! You marry Kurama to Karasu girl and there will be HELL TO PAY!!!!! That ass is not an angel and you know it! He is nothing but a soulless demon and would be a better husband for Mukuro!!! LONG LIVE HIEI AND KURAMA!!!!!!!!! Author i have one request. UPDATE SOON!!!!! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: rebekah On: July 27, 2004 15:36 CDT
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update soon please
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Title: Yah!
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: July 25, 2004 13:31 CDT
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take your time on the next chapie I ish looking forward to it XD so happy writing XD this fan isn't leaving your side!!!
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Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the new chappie. A hundred years apart from the one you love is WAY too long in my opinion. Yumi: it's way too long in anybody's opinion. Lady Vaoh: true, true, anyway I hope that everything goes well, it might with Kurama but I'm not too sure about Hiei, I mean his father is the KING OF HELL!!! Yumi: doesn't that kinda make him your master. Lady Vaoh: remember this is a AU, not real life my employer wouldn't even take six hundred years for a war they'd pretty much just blow it ALL up. Yumi: 0.0 really? Lady Vaoh: *nods* Yumi: scary. Lady Vaoh: update soon I have to know what their fathers say. Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Title: *crys*
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 20:07 CDT
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I luaghed well not really..but I did cry and this is going great so far..even though youko had to die...well sadly that is the way the rock rolls...or the cookie crumbles..w/e but..keep going I ish like the story!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 16:20 CDT
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T_T T_T I feel so sad now.... it reminds me of Pochahontas(sp?).... T_T it's just so sad...
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Title: I shall avenge Hiei!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!! OH NO their going to kill Hiei, well *rolls up her sleeves and grabs her ax* not if I have anything to do about it. Yumi: um Vaoh you can't just interrupt someones story. Lady Vaoh: why not? Yumi: because it's rude. Lady Vaoh: but they're going to kill Hiei. Yumi: Vaoh what site are you on? Lady Vaoh: Mediaminer. Yumi: and what exactly is on mediaminer? Lady Vaoh: FanArt and Fanfiction. Yumi: okay let me underline the word FICTION!! Meaning it's not real and Hiei (in real life) is NOT going to die. Lady Vaoh: really? well look at that you learn something new everyday. Yumi: *sweatdrops* Lady Vaoh: well anyway that was a great chapter but if I might say so Mukuro is a evil B*@#!, parental blocks I can't curse. Okay mom I didn't say it. Lady Vaoh's mom: *gets up and leaves* Angry Mob of Hiei Fangirls: KILL MUKURO AND AVENGE HIEI!!!!! Lady Vaoh: well bye we're off to kill and painfully torture Mukuro. Please update soon. Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: July 09, 2004 23:50 CDT
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*dances* good chapie go you! still asking for a lemon but still good so plz update asap!!! kool happy writing :D
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Reviewed By: HieiAndKuramaLover#? On: July 03, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is soooooooo goooooood!!! Cute, clever, and original! ^__^ Please write quickly and update soon!!! Keep up the good work!!!
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Title: Hey :3
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_not_logged_in On: June 28, 2004 22:09 CDT
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great chapter if I did say so myself :3 this fan is still at your side so take your time ne? oh and this one requests a yoai if that is alright ^-^ good luck with the next chapie and I'll be rootin :D
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