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 Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2004 16:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I Have a plan. First I am going to write the next chapter to this because I think that i will write that and people will be able to see chapter 11. Kurama: What after that. Me: That is simple *I Hug Kurama like there is no tomorrow.* Kurama: What is that for. Me: Because you are like my favorite Yu Yu person and I decided I need to show you some love. Yoko: I am likeing this. Me: What where did you come from? Yoko: hehehehehehehe Me: ok your scareing me, *runs away from Yoko*
 Title: Case of the Twenty Dollar Bills DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2004 14:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay there's like something totally wrong with mediaminer it won't show me any updates after chappie ten With You, and this like totally sucks I want to read the story. Yumi:*sarcastically* oh yeah like if you whine and pout the chapters will appear. LV:no of course not, but if I whine and pout this guy gives me 20 dollars*pouts again and is handed twenty dollars* Yumi:who is that guy? LV:I don't know but as long as he just keeps giving me money he can stay *waves at the man in the trenchcoat and hat* Yumi:for all you know this guy could be a serial killer. LV:nope he signed this here contract *holds up contract* Yumi:*Yumi reading contract* I strange guy in the long trenchcoat solemly swear that I am not a serial killer *sweatdrops* Vaoh I don't think this is smart. LV:cheer up won't a twenty dollar bill *hands Yumi twenty dollars* Yumi:*inspects the money* uh Vaoh this money is um fake. LV:*looks down to indeed find the money is fake and turns to the guy* why you little *beats strange guy down* Yumi:*after Vaoh is done* let's see who this guy really is *pulls off his hat* LV:gasp in horror (yes I said it aloud) Yumi: Vaoh do you know this guy? LV:he is none other than my arch enemy Mr. Snickerdoodle. Snickerdoodle:yes and I would've gotten away with it if it weren't for you meddling kids and that stupid dog. Yumi:what dog?*turns a great dain is standing behind her* LV: where did the dog come for? Yumi: not a clue. LV: Update soon Ill read it somehow.
 Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2004 17:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was finally able to read the new chapter today and that makes me so happy. *claps* That was a great chapter though i have to say I got confused with the characters Aven and the one i made up. *grins* thats kinda bad and i made him up. Maybe you can explain it to me in an email or something. But i really liked the way you changed it and the chapter was great i loved the stuffed that happened like the whole stabbing Yus part even though that was bad. *shrugs shoulders* im wierd like that. S16: so Kurama how did you like the chap. Kur: It was great but-. S16: what kura-chan. Kur: Well why won't anyone sit in my lap. S16: well duh silly cause you didn't ask *sits on kura lap* now is that better. Kur: Yes much but if you could stop wiggling. S16: oh im sorry kura-chan it's just ive never sat in a guys lap before.*blushes* Hiei: This you have a problem with but when you got to feel a guys butt you give no second thought. S16: oh shut up hiei. S16: Please update soon while me and Kura-chan cuddle. Eskimo kisses *rubs noses with kurama* Hiei: please don't make me barf. Buh-Bye ^__^
 Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL i wrote htomail. Sorry about that I ment HOTMAIL. *dobles over with laughter, jk not that funny* but it's all good that you do this over hte reviews. I don't care. Yeah it is hotmail.com well later
 Title: Hey
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 23:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to use reviews for this but i wanted to make sure that the email got to you and if it didn't I'll try again cause i think you might have been trying to spell hotmail but it said htomail ill send it to both just in case well see ya later. Buh-Bye
 Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
no i didn't get your e-mail. That makes me sad :'(. Well it sort of made me happy to know that you sent me an e-mail this whole time i thought you had forgotten to me. but it makes me sad that I didn't get your e-mail
 Title: hey
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 01:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ive been trying to read the new chapter for two days now and it hasn't shown up. oh and did you get my email its the one from missmagicbun04. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
 Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2004 13:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^
 Title: The Adventures Of Tron and Lady Vaoh!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2004 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter yet the fluffiness of it all made me upset that I lack a boyfriend *sighs*a cute boy shows up* but anywa- Tron: um I'm looking for a Lady Vaoh. I heard she could get me some embarrassing pictures of Yoko. Lady Vaoh: You can't just walk up in here while I'm doing a review besides your obvious cuteness. Who are you? Tron: I'm-*feels a hand on his butt* what the hell? *looks down* S16: *sweatdrops and then looks at her hand accusingly* bad hand bad. Kurama: I thought I told you to go to your room? *drags her away* S16: *while being dragged* NOOOOOO!!! must touch so soft. Lady Vaoh: *blinks then turns to her lawyers* All questions of one Sango16 being my sister have been confirmed. She isn't, and shall forever more be cut from my will. Lawyers: got it. Tron: like I was saying I- Yumi: A MAN!!! LOVER BOY COME KISS ME IN THE HYENA!!! *tries to run to Tron but is suddenly ZAPPED!* Lady Vaoh: gotta love those invisible force fields. Sorry I price my blackmail items very high I doub- Tron: 10 million. Lady Vaoh: *blinks* well Mr. Mysterious you got yourself a deal, but who are you? Tron: I'm Tron, I was trying to top Jpatt's blackmail pictures. Lady Vaoh: really? *evil grin*Whispers* Hey I'll give you half of this cash if you let me have Tron. Tron: what was that? Lady Vaoh: nothing. So do you want the TUTU one or the one of when I caught him and Hiei in an odd position. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
 Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2004 22:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^
 Title: Great chapter!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2004 20:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a really good chapter and i loved the fluff i think it was just enough. Not smothering yet just soft enough. Hiei: You do know that what you said made no sense whatsoever. S16: who asked you. Anyway I must say i am flattered that you have read some of my stuff. I thank you and i will be updating on the story soon i always write at least half of the story before i post and im just being lazy on updating. S16: I have failed you miserably and im sorry. Hiei: onna what are you talking about? S16: I promised to make a villian for jpatt and i haven't done so. Hiei: so why don't you stop talking about it and do it. S16: What a great idea hiei-san *huggles hiei* thank you!! S16: I promise to have a villian to you by tomorrow i have just been a little busy. Hiei: you are such a liar. S16: shh shup up hiei. okay so hes right i just forgot but i will make a villian for you. soooo thats who tron is!! *scratches head* sooo tron is a guy that you know *scratches head again* *whispers* Is Tron cute? *looks around neverously* Kurama: What did I tell you about trying to pick up guys? S16: awwww but kurama i just. Kur: no buts so please apologize to the young man S16: sorry Tron *hugs tron and gropes but* Kur: Go to your room now. S16: Aww but Kurama i just wanted to feel. Kur: Now!! S16: But I-. Kur: Now!! S16: oh well i guess i have to go now oh and sorry Tron but if it makes you feel better you are very soft. Please update soon and keep up the great job. Buh-Bye ^__^
 Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2004 03:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
You guys crack me up so bad
 Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2004 03:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
^____^
 Title: WHO THE HECK IS TRON!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2004 01:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Lady Vaoh here, that last review at 2:25 was mine and not my sister's. I was on her account after she got off the computer and forgot to switch to my account. S16: once again she is ADOPTED. Lady Vaoh: REALLY!?!?! NOOOOOO!!!! S16: DOOOOORK, any way I won't to know who Tron is cause he's just like this other character from a story I read. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
 Title: GO HIEI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2004 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love the knew chapters, but if I was Jordan I wouldn't have even bothered with a stick I would have grabbed a huge rock and then it would have accidently land on Kayko's head, you know all by accident. *wink*wink* S16: your a complete dork. And what are you wearing? Lady Vaoh: *is wearing a white cheerleader skirt with a black shirt with a white H on it* oh this I'm celebrating the fact that Hiei finally showed up. *is suddenly holding white and black Pom Poms* Alright!!! Hiei Hiei, he's our man if he can't do it no one can GOOOOOOOOO HIEI!!!!!!!! S16: *sighs* Once again I think she's adopted. Yumi: wait wasn't Hiei like evil in this chapter? Lady Vaoh: so? Yumi: so? he's evil!! Lady Vaoh: Ooookay? Yumi: EVIL MUCH!!! Lady Vaoh: okay when isn't he? *resumes cheering* Yumi: *stops to think* S16: she has a point. Lady Vaoh: *is soon joined by the little pink monkeys dressed like her and they start to do the Mocarana while yelling GO HIEI!!!!* GO HIEI, GO HIEI!!!!!!!! S16: anyway if my sister had a brain she would be telling you to update soon for more Hiei. But unfortunately she doesn't. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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