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Title: great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 00:27 CDT
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Hey those were really great chapters and your welcome. How can anyone not like this story i love it. *looks up at voahs review* oookaaayyyy i claim no rights to her i think she was adopted. Voah: i heard that. S16:Oh hey sis i didn't say that stuff. Voah: yeah right *chases S16* S16: oh help me *runs behind yusuke* save me Yus:why should i S16: because you don't want people to know that... Yus: okay okay but you swore you wouldn't tell anyone. S16: I won't if you save me. Yus: sure okay whatever. Voah walks up to yus and punches him out. S16: oh well i will have to find another protector *runs to find someone else* Well please update soon i can't wait to find out what else happens and what other things the pink monkeys tell my sister. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 12:32 CDT
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Title: LITTLE PINK MONKEYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am like so sorry for not reviewing apparently someone forgot to put your story on my favs list *glares at her minions* but anyway, I would love to drop in for a little chat. Name: Vaoh Personality: I am evil, powerful, when angry covered in silver and black flames, Hiei is my one true love, known to threaten people with my demon armies, and also known for small episodes of insanity, other than that I'm lay back. Sango16: *scoffs* small? I think I need to remind you of the time you knocked out Yoko, dressed him in a tutu, and took pictures. Lady Vaoh: that was for your birthday party, and I only did it because the little pink monkeys in my head said that he wanted to be a ballerina. Sango16: and I prove my point. Lady Vaoh: anyway *glares at here sister* loved the two new chapters they were hilarious, I think Kayko is going a little cookoo, someone needs to keep an eye on her. Minion: *puts an eye on Kayko's shoulder* Kayko: *screams and faints* Lady Vaoh: *rolls her eyes* funny, but that was so not what I meant. Well any way seeya next chapter I can't wait. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta for Now
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 00:34 CDT
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Oh thank you So much Sango16, i was thinking about taking it down cause i didn't knwo if anyone really liked it anymore. Because of you I am going to start writing the next chapter. And thank you so much for helping me think of a villin a need a few of those cause I am like a retard when it comes to making up evil people. And thanks again for such a nice comment ^______________________________^
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Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 19:42 CDT
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Those were two really great chapters. I liked them so much. yeah you go girl get your man you know you want him so fight for him. I never thought id say this but keiko can go find someone else. Yay theyre going to get the other guys. I hope everyone is okay. you need villans. Ill have to think about it ive never been good at thinking up characters but i will try for ya give me a day or two. Thanks for answering my question. Please update soon because these fics are my brain food for the day and trust me i can use all the stimulus i can get. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 01:33 CDT
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 01:28 CDT
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Yay you updated that was great I really liked the chapter. Okay a tree demon stuck them in trees i have to say i find that kinda funny. yay everyone's back but where's bo,yuk,hiei. I still can't figure out the pairing but im still sticking with yus/jo i think theyd be cute together. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^_^
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Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 22:12 CDT
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Hehe yeah I did get the name from the song by new found glory, i was listening to the song and I am bad at titles so i used it. If you look all of my titles are bits and peices from songs. NFG's Layers: Now we will have to sue you for everything you own Me:AHHH Disclaimer quick Disclaimer:She owns nothing Me:That was close Anyways if you want I could put you in my little convos before and after the fic, i need someone to help me out handeling all those guys can get rough -_- Tell songo16 i said HI and thanx for replying.
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Reviewed By: jo-jo On: June 13, 2004 22:04 CDT
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Title: HI YOKO ^_^
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story yet I can't figure the pairings. I've been reading this story for a while and never reviewed before so hear it is. I love it it's funny. I would have to agree with my sister (Sango16) this should be a Yusuke/Jo. Oh and if you have anymore problems with Tron and the Yu Yu gang send them to me and my evil demon armies. Yoko should know who I am and most likely he still wants to kill me, but I am stronger. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! Sincerely a new reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now P.S. Did you get the name of this story from New Found Glory's song?
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Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 16:54 CDT
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 03:21 CDT
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I really like this fic i think it is really good. poor yusuke people get hurt cause of him. I have to know what happened to everyone. okay you have to pair yus/jo of course but no one else is in the story so far so i couldn't really say. Please update soon i would love to know what happens next. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 21:44 CDT
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hehehe no Jordan wasn't captured by tron that was my friend who was over and we were joking around i havn't thought of a name yet so until then i dunno
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Reviewed By: dUdE I LoVe yOuR FiC!! On: June 02, 2004 18:22 CDT
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OOOO POOR YUSUKE!!! everyone who tries to help him ends up hurt!!! well besides that its a really cute fic! but i still dont uderstand hwo you were captured by Tron...
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Reviewed By: demonwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 17:38 CDT
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it seems like a pretty good story, but hey its only the first chapter. plz hurry and update. ^_^
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