| "Like a Dog After a Bone" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: DemonKirara00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i am a HUGE fan of your work in general, but this one was great! there should be more writers like you out there. thanks so much for writing a good fic!
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Reviewed By: Makeshift Wings 88 On: August 13, 2004 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!! Inuyasha being unusually affectionate and Kagome screaming sits in the hotsprings... it was awsome!! I really loved how much tension you put in Kagome's relationship with Kouga and how she finally got him to tell her he loved her. The lemon was really well writen as well. I have read most of your stories at fanfiction.net, and I'm actually shocked that more people havent reviewed. I think more people review at the other site, but oh well. Awsome story!! ~Makeshift Wings P.s. Love the ending!! "I'm telling Kouga first!!" Very adorable!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: m1nt ch0c0l4t3 On: August 09, 2004 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo, whoz got mad skills at writeing lemons!!! hahaha!! cute funny sweet... =]
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 23:32 CDT
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i really liked this fic! it was well written and really cute lol. great job
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Title: Like a dog after a bone
Reviewed By: WaBdAoFdOoM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD GOOD FAN FIC MAN...um, im new so how do you like get to the next chapter, i wanna finish readin that fic.....for pages right??????? but anyway, good fic
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE LEMON
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Reviewed By: Renne-chan On: July 13, 2004 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best Inuyasha lemon fics I've read! Funny, cute and romantic, and didn't deter from the characteristics of the characters. You are such a talented writer!
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Reviewed By: gitrdun On: June 14, 2004 21:23 CDT
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do you even have to ask? MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! better yet, make ten.
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Title: OH God
Reviewed By: Runishie (not signed in ) On: June 13, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated you 8 on creativity because there i alot of storys out there with Kagome going into heat but it was by far one of the best ones I've read. I've learned a valuable lesson from all this . . . never read a lemon with your sexy slave in your lap. *Rubs soreness* GRRR Honestly! Great fic
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Reviewed By: Aki T On: June 13, 2004 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic!!!!! Truly a well-written, well-formed, well-thought-out piece of work. I loved reading it and I hope you continue to write works like this; not just with fics, but with writing in general. You captured the spirit, the characters, and the plot perfectly. Great job! --Aki T
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude... The reason you have so many comments is because that was sooo fucking good. Pardon my language but it was needed. That was... so my fantasy! *laughs* Wow, this is so funny... Through the whole thing in the beginning I was thinking 'this is like the perfect 'love/hate' relationship with all the deep sexual tension and painful need that I long for' and then Inuyasha's position he decided in... was just perfect. It was just... perfect. Gah, that was incredibly good. You now have my favorite one-shot lemon. Gahhh, sorry, I can't get over just how perfect that was to me... I'm gunna go check if you have more ^^
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Reviewed By: Youkai Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best one-shot's I've ever read! It was original; never a dull moment. I loved the ending the most, though, just because it seemed like something Inuyasha would actually do in the series. Great job, and keep writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: INUKING On: June 06, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz get back to me if you decide to use my idea. use review board. my aim is Invinclbe34. GREAT STORY
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Reviewed By: INUKING On: June 06, 2004 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good ending and very good story. What you should do is make a sequel with M/S but at the begining have inuyasha telling Kouga what he did.( stupid wolf)
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Reviewed By: Phoxy_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Even I liked this one, and I'm not easie to please. ^^ (that and I dont' read things like this that often) But I liked it and it really brought out great detail and discription to all the situations. Needless to say this is sooo one of my top fave stories. Don't stop writing! ~Later, the phox
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