| "Like a Dog After a Bone" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kudos to you. Awesome lemon. Good work.
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww....one of the best lemons ever!!!.....props to yu!
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Reviewed By: Taka TK On: June 02, 2004 15:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was most definitely and pleasently suprised by how great this story turned out to be! I'm so used to these kinds of scenarios being lame and redundant, but you really made it unique and interesting. Good on ya! The vivid descriptions really helped and I laughed sooo hard at the ending!! hmm...anything else? *cough* hott lemon *cough* ...Well, you apparentely have a lot of talent when it comes to writing so don't waste it, write more!!! ^_^ (oh, and thank you so much for paying attention to spelling and grammar! It makes all the difference!)
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Reviewed By: cryingnymph On: June 02, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very much enjoyed this story, and I applaud the way they actually stayed in character *for the most part (^^)
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Reviewed By: vivi66(not signed in) On: June 01, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL add another chapter if you will, it was one of the WAY better HEAT senarios. i loved reading the discriptiveness of it.
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf On: June 01, 2004 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf On: June 01, 2004 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 09:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
:-D I liked it! If you feel you can write another chapter, please do! It was a good lemon and his frustration beforehand was pretty amusing. and fun. :-)
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Title: put me threw the wringer
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
over all it was wonderful, but I know I've read the "heat" senerio so many times, that for the most part I just don't read them anymore. I liked Inuyasha's inner struggle while starying at Kagome's ass, I half expected him to pull a Miroku and cop a feel. I bet that would be a funny story.
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Reviewed By: Najiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really good! And you were very good at being descriptive of more than just the fun parts ^_^
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 22:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhh, Lara, I always enjoy reading this one. I just love your lemons. Thanks for posting it again. --wj
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Reviewed By: Magicgurl On: May 31, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice work! i hope u would continue dis cuz its good!
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kool! This is really good. i feel like a hentai..oh well
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