| "Like a Dog After a Bone" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Synthea On: April 03, 2008 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, ususaly i just read the fic and don't comment. i love the way you express inuyasha's charachter, i have read few other stories where a well known charachter has been portrayed so well! a few time you yoused homonyms instead of the word you meant but that was easy enough to work through. thank you so much for this little piece of lemmon, and story.
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Title: WOOT
Reviewed By: I&K4Ever On: October 25, 2007 19:54 CDT
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YOU HAVE TO MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! LMFAO THE LAST LINE WAS THE BEST!
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I think Inu was pretty darn in character! Great job! Another chapter would be nice...=P Keep up the good writing!
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Reviewed By: inukaginlov On: January 21, 2007 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u should totally wright another chapter!! love the story line!!!
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very well written.
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Reviewed By: fireofinuyashasNSImarsoutcastonFFN On: November 06, 2006 22:33 CST
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All I have to say is that the last line was classic.
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Title: Awesomeness!
Reviewed By: I.G. On: September 25, 2006 09:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:17 CDT
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association! Your award can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2006awards/Best-Lemon-3rd.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 23:28 CDT
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Congratulations, this story has been nominated for Best Lemon at the Feudal Association. Voting continues until the 22nd of September and membership to the group is open! Feel Free to join us! http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com ~Dark Avenger (aka The Daimyo)
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 13:52 CDT
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This was a great fic.I think you should add another chapter on what sango and miroku were doing at the time!
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Reviewed By: InuHanyouRaeRae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That... Was... PERFECT! I've never read anything like it before. I loved the way you wrote it. People need to write more lemons like you do. You added story onto it instead of just mindless sex. I have only one thing to say. BRAVO!!!
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Reviewed By: kt On: August 22, 2006 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, no I LOVE this fic. Its so perfectly written...Can I give this fic 100?
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Inuhearskag On: May 03, 2006 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man did i love this lemon!..you should totaly wright a nother chp. you no it would be fun....i would love to keep reading this as a story..plz wright more!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Rion Lune On: April 11, 2006 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish they would have let me put a number higher than 10 because this was the best story I have ever read! (and I have read A LOT of stories) I dont think you should add anything to this story. Its perfect just as is. But I do think you should keep writing. You have a talent in finding the EXACT words to describe their feelings. As I was reading I said to myself "If I were trying to describe the Kikyo/Inuyasha/Kagome love triangle, this would be the PERFECT way." No not perfect. Perfect pales in comparison. There isnt a word to describe it.
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Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all let me say: Wow. I loved it. It was funny and romantic and sexy and everything! I love how you made InuYasha's human/demonic sides fight in his head. I think InuYasha is brazen enough to say those things, so, well done! And I also think that eventually, Kagome would have had enough and start saying those things too lol..Way to go..I look forward to reading more InuYasha stories like this from you in the future.
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