| "Ryou and Bakura" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: ProjectShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I likes it!!!!!!! Hurry and update!!!!! *dies of anticipation*
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 04:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
*BLUSH* You're welcome, I hope you enjoy your vacation!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 10:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
*wipes away drool* Love the lemon scene, it was awesome. Have an awesome summer!
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Reviewed By: ImaginarySpirit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, me again, i loved the lemon, this story is great;) you're a great writer!:D
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 17:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lemon scene, I demand a lemon scene!! *coughs* Anyway, good fluffy scene, very kawaii with the nightmare and stuff. Ja ne!
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Title: fgtgtggggg
Reviewed By: Nina Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
trtg gvfhbfb dfdg.
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Title: you should put one.
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should put a lemon in the story.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 01:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok...I can se the effort put forth in this fanfic. However, you do need to get it BETAed... if you would like, I could do that foryo and help shape this up a bit. It was a noble try, but it needs some work.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 22:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
YES! Lemon gooood... I'm liking this so far, keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: mage of black flames On: June 07, 2004 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep on writing!!this is awesome, keep up the good work.you better keep writing, you wouldn't want to make satans wife cry, would you
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Reviewed By: ImaginarySpirit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey nina, it's me. i love this story you're doing a great job, keep writing, i'll support you throughout it like you've done for me, thanks;)
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great start! More soon?
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 17:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
One tip: Can you seperate time and scene changes with ***** or something like that? It makes it a bit easier to read. Other than that, it sounds good so far! Keep going, 'kay?
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