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Reviewed By: Kiwiwfruit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so beautiful!!! and i love it!!! i cant believe it was charlie! JERK! i love the fish thing, on chapter ten, Hie the heartless asshole we all love, saved a fish. it was so funny and cute!!! does he even do cute? Saddness4eva, my sister a mm.org member says...." this is too good. this girl you, is just like my character SHOTOYAMI ON FF.NET. BOTH ARE KICKASS HARDCORE!!!"
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 18:24 CST
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that was a wonderful ending! i loved the whole kidnapped scene & then Yusuke came and saved her. that was just perfect! i'm kinda sad that it's over, but the ending was great so i'll be okay. great story!
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Reviewed By: Seara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEEEE!!!!! ^_________________________^ someone up there must love me! I get my computer back (-_- for the 4th time in a row somethings been wrong with it) and you've updated! I am officially in my happy place! I think that was deffinatly a wonderful ending! I'm sad it's over though. But if you start another one I think I'll live.
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Title: LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: KanolaGirl (not logged in...) On: December 07, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter soooo much ^_^ I'm really sad that this story is over...really really really sad....but is was also a really really really good ending! I'm glad that your story wasn't deleted ^_^ Oh and also in the first a/n, when you list the thingys, you have A) and then 2)....I'm not trying to be all gramical girl or anything but...A) B) or 1) 2) ^_^ lol Okay...I really sound like a stupid gramical girl there....anyways~Great story! Tell me if you start a new story please ^_^ If you could e-mail me that'd be awsome but if you can't then...I'll find some possible way to find out ^_^ Anyways my e-mail is nec3490@yahoo.com so cya until your next story! (hopefully you'll have one...and soon! ^_^ )
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 19:12 CST
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That was fucking awesome! you should really write an OC/Hiei fic. I have a sneaking suspicion you are one of the few people out there who can write Hiei and make him IN character. I am obsessed with Hiei in case you didn't know.
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 17:16 CST
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Ninety-three reviews (not counting this one). Ninety-three reviews, and you deserve every fucking one of them. (And I don't usually curse, so you KNOW I liked it.) The last chapter was just- just- POW! Totally unexpected, you know? The whole Charlie thing, that is. I almost fell of my chair- I mean it, I was staring at the screen for a couple seconds like 'HUH?!?' Then it sunk in and I wanted to kill Ame... but Maya beat me to it! Maya's back! YAY! ^^ That fight scene with Roxy and the men was really well pulled off, I got an adrenaline rush just reading it! (Well- maybe not really. It's a metaphor... I think. Good scene anyways!) The whole thing with the gun was cool too- my face lit up when I read it. Tee hee. ^^ Reminded me of Indiana Jones (Raiders of the Lost Ark), when Miriam shoots the guy in the bar... yeah. *cough* I feel a little bad for Roxy though... she didn't get to kill Charlie OR Ame. Which reminds me- CHARLIE! OMG! CHARLIE! That came out of NOWHERE! I think I already mentioned that, but whatever. And then the love confession scene thingy! "I love you, you asshole!" Heh, leave it to Roxy to say something like that. And there was nothing wrong with the ending! It was really pretty! The way you finally showed us what the title of the story meant... this story is a beautiful thing. *sigh* And now it's over. Ah well. It was great! Thank you soooo much for writing it, and I'm just glad I wasn't stupid enough not to read it. IT WAS AWESOME. And I mean that!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was a really cool story. I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 20:48 CST
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O_____O holy cow!!! the end?? already?????? T_____T but but... *sob* nah that wasn't sucky!!!! ^^ that was good me likies!!!!!!! but... can't believe its the end... ;_; anyway... yeah.... no more saying update soon.... *snif*
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Reviewed By: Jessica (yyhpunk) On: December 06, 2004 20:43 CST
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i like this chapter. i'm yyhpunk me too lazy to sign in so. mne ways i like it!! me like too much. gotta make a sequal!
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Reviewed By: Jessica (yyhpunk) On: December 06, 2004 20:42 CST
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i like this chapter. i'm yyhpunk me too lazy to sign in so. mne ways i like it so far. continue!
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Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I DON'T WANT IT TO END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! lol. i loved it!!! I would say that i love you to... but i'm not a lesbo,so...yeah. Anyhoo... That was so great!!! I loved it so much!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Twilight Myst [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! *dances around* That was awesome!!!!!! I loved it!!! And that ending didn't suck, it rocked!!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Gurlwhohatesglobal On: December 06, 2004 15:17 CST
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THIS CHAP WAS REALlY GOOD!! where's the next one? i guess the week idea got flushed down the craper eh? haha jk jk update TODAY!
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Reviewed By: Seara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 09:12 CST
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*sweat drops* in the last review, I ment computer... not copter *sweat drops* heheh
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Reviewed By: Seara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 09:10 CST
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As I said when I e-mailed you, my copter died *pouts* (I'm on my grandma's computer now) The good thing though is I got to read your new absolutly wonderful chapter. The bad news.... *crys* all 200 and some of my YYH pictures are gone! 1 of them where irreplaceable too... *sighs* oh well, I can still read your story so that's good at least. Though it's killing me wondering how you'll finish this fict! I've honestly never finnished a fict in my life, that I've written, as of yet. Well, I can't wait for your next chapter. Ja ne!
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