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Reviewed By: Toonami Faithful [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 22:00 CST
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this story is so awesome! please update soon! and i liked how Yusuke felt guilty... hehehe makes him want Roxy even more! >:D well, anyways great story! (McDonalds theme song: i'm lovin' it!)
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Reviewed By: Nenagh On: November 06, 2004 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noo! Not more cliffies! Darn you Charles Dickens! (Inventor of the cliff-hanger. Random fact for the day!) I like the Scooby-doo marathon! I do those all the time! ^-^ I loved how she was singing the "liar liar pants on fire" song and what she was thinking next to what she was saying! That was perfect! Can't wait for more of the story! Please update soon! ^^ Ja!
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Title: Geat Story!
Reviewed By: BlueEyedDemon90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O. Wow this is a GREAT story! I've seen it posted up and wanted to read it, but I never had time! ^______^ Really good plot and very original! I liked how u added Keiko to the mix...a lil trouble never hurt anyone, eh? lol Awesome story and PLEASE update soon!! Oh, and tell Hiei that that was nice for saving Roxy's fish!! VIVA LA GOLDFISH!!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 19:34 CST
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Isn't it funny how some girls (i.e. my friend) hate Keiko for being with Yusuke, but at the same time, think they make the cutest couple? (Which they don't, by the way. Kuwabara and Yukina are cuter together.) But anyway, after that pointless bit of- um- stuff- YOU'RE BAAAACK! *huggles* ^^ I wuv you! Well, not really. You left us with a cliffhanger. XP BUT I can live with that. I'm just in a bad mood because I have a ton of homework. ALGEBRA IS EVIL! SENT BY THE RUBBER CHICKENS TO ANNIHILATE THE ZINZIBARIAN WAY OF LIIIIIFE! *bangs head repeatedly against wall* *_* Oro... >_< So, where was I? Ah yes! Boy, I feel sorry for Roxy. Having old drunk guys hitting on her- bleck. *twitch twitch* Disgusting. Utterly disgusting. But then again, Roxy can handle herself. Especially after Genkai's training. BUT IT'S STILL DISGUSTING! Well, I gotta go. Ja ne minna-san!
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Reviewed By: animefreak11 *not logged in* On: November 03, 2004 18:29 CST
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yaaaaaaaay!!!!!! ^____________^ chapter chapter sweet chapter!!!!! mwahahahahhaha >.> anyway UPDATE SOON! ^_~
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Title: Yay! You updated! ^_^
Reviewed By: KanolaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie~I can't wait until the next chapter! >< Don't make me wait long....I might die from curiosity~>You know what they say : Curiosity kills the cat....and sometimes a person or two.< I really hate that stuff and the evil teachers that assign it just to be mean and take away my life!!!! ....well...bye! And I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 14:09 CST
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How could Yusuke do that to her?! Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 22:26 CST
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this is a good yusukexOOC fic. one of the best i've read. i love how you brought Keiko into the mix. i really was wondering about her. it shall be interesting when Roxy see's Yusuke again.
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Reviewed By: Twilight Myst [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! You updated!! ^_^ This chappie was good! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Seara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 06:48 CDT
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Oh, btw.... if you ever need Kurama Hiei or Yusuke picts for any reson just tell me... I got quite the collection.*celibrates new chappie again*
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Reviewed By: Seara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 06:44 CDT
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YAYAYAYAY!!!! KWEEEE!!!! ^_^ WONDERFUL CHAPPIE!!!! Hiei saved the gold fish ^-^ heheh. It bites that you're ending this story soon, but I'll live if you start a new story! Hay, btw I found a really neat picture of Hiei Kurama and Yusuke all changing into their demon forms, with Kuwabara hanging out in the background.
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Reviewed By: animehasmylife [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:18 CDT
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yay! no delete!! continue!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh2 4 On: October 05, 2004 21:31 CDT
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Yay! you weren't deleted! (Happy dance!) Thanks for updating once more! I can't, my story is gone...>( (Still annoied) Anyway, I like how you don't have us meeting the team and leaping into the guys arms, that doesn't make for a very intresting story! ^^ Please update again sometime soon! ^^ Ja!
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Title: End of story....soon!?!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: KanolaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!!!!!!!! You can't end the story within' the next two chapters....it must go on forever!!!!! Muwahaaaa...hahaa.....oh no, my evi laugh is broken~that's your fault! How am I suposed to have a good evil laugh when I just found out my favoritest story of all times is going to end in the within' the next few chapters! NO!!!!!!! I'm all sad now :( You can't end it....don't even say the words end of story! They break my wittle itty bitty heart :'( NO!!!!!!!!!! No, no, no, no, no!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffle* I don't like stories that end~you can't end your story or I'll.....I'll.....I'll sic my.....wah! I don't have my pocket wolf anymore so I can't threaten people with 'em *growls* Fine, I'll sic my hoard of evil spiders on you >.< And if you're not afraid of spiders then how about my herd of crazy evil turtles! ......Well......I'm going to go eat breakfast because I love your story so much that I didn't eat until I read your newly updated chapter! Only to have my heart broken because your ending it soon.....but on another note......I liked this chapter and you better update really really really soon ^_^ Byaz!!!!! ~*~Keyta~*~
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Reviewed By: Pita911 On: October 01, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! great story so far! very original! Its going good so far. keep it up!
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