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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 18:41 CDT
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Oh my god this fic is great. I just can't believe it. At first I thought Roxy would be a MS but she's not. I can't believe it. I just LOVE this! And OC is fecking awesome. I just got back and it was sooooo good- but we were staying at some cheap hotel which sucked. BUT we were right on the boardwalk and I walked down to Trimpers and rode Himalaya about five times (love that ride) and then went and got a sundae at Dumsers and played DDR at Sportsland. Why am I telling you all this? *smacks forehead* Back to the fic, back to the fic- omg poor Maya. *bites lip* I think I'm gonna cry. I loved chapter four, and I loved the whole 'family dinner' scene. ^^ When she told everyone that Shuiichi was her boyfriend I laughed out loud. I know this review is getting kinda long, so I must say, update soon and I will read and review asap when you do. Ocean City ROCKS and so does this fic. ^^
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Reviewed By: Ichiko Ran [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 17:47 CDT
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She can't die! Roxy should like turn into demon form and steal the mirror that Kurama stole and then Yusuke once again has to retrieve it and the same thing that happened to Kurama's mom and the little life saving thinf should happen! She can't die! Atleast not uet! Her and Kurama of Hiei should hook up first or something! Why! By the way I dont have a clue on what Yusuke in demon form looks like.
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Title: ok....its spelled right now ^_^;;
Reviewed By: CraziTMNTfan On: August 24, 2004 22:13 CDT
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hehe i just read it over and it still kicks ass! lol i spelled it wonrg ^_^;;; my bad....haha BITE ME! LOL its great ya later i bet you dont know who this is? lol
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Reviewed By: rocklover On: August 24, 2004 20:57 CDT
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please update soon!! i like your fic a lot!! you could respond to reviewers at the end of the chapters! later!
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Reviewed By: animehasmylife [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 18:34 CDT
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i don't mind you replying to my reviews.... the thing with Maya was sooooo sad...... *sniff sniff* don't end now!!!!! fine *pout* yopu already did. than hurry and post another chapter..
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Reviewed By: Nenagh 24 Back again! On: August 24, 2004 16:46 CDT
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That's soo perfect!! Of course your work is stunning! (Looks at you strangely) Have you ever read any other self inserts and then went back and read your own? That would answer your question!! ^-^ I wish there was a bigger smiley face!! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Anime_addicted(once again, too lazy to sign on) On: August 24, 2004 16:20 CDT
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Don't say that!!!! It was a great ending... even though maya is dieing, and your about to cry. i liked it, it was written well, and angst totally rocks. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Seara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 12:40 CDT
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I would love to help out anyway I posibly can!!!! ^-^ It would be my honor!!! I have a pict of Yusuke's demon form! Would you like me to e-mail it to ya? I don't know how he acts in his demon form, I've never seen it other than the 1 picture I have, but I think it would definately be cool to have that in the story! I have no problem with the ancwering reviews, but maybe in case some people don't like it you could put them after the chapter. That way it's easyer for people who don't want to read your responces to your reviewers doesn't even have to look at them. Where the chapter is a little sad, it's still awsome! Oh, and if you want, feal free to e-mail me at: saraneth@msn.com
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Reviewed By: Erika M On: August 24, 2004 10:26 CDT
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Cna you update soon? Please? I loved where you left off. And I absolutely love your story. Be sure to update soon. Anybody who says anything bad about this story should have their ass kicked BIG TIME!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 09:39 CDT
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That was sad that her friend died. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Ichiko_Ran On: August 19, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have knocked the shit out of the bitch man! It sucks to have no parents. My friend has no parents. Her mom died because she got way too drunk and she never knew her dada. I was over her house the other day. HSe's actually doing pretty good. Then the other day I was over my other friends house. She is exactly like Maya exept she's only one year older than me and she is a brunette. I'm on probation. It sucks. Anyways update soon. Can't wait till the next chapter! Bye byez ~Ichiko
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Reviewed By: rocklover On: August 18, 2004 20:17 CDT
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Please update soon!! Your fic is very good!! Later!
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Reviewed By: animehasmylife [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 17:14 CDT
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too good!!! continue as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Seara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 15:23 CDT
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Ocean City was great, it rained most of the time, but it was great anyway. Me my mom and my dad where all trying to fit under one itsy bitsy tiny umbrella. I was in the middle so I sayed pritty dry. Then we came to our sences that it just didn't work and mom got another umbrella and dad got out his rain coat. ^^And BTW Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles ROCKZ!!!! ^^ *gets strange looks from a few of my friends but ignores it* And congrats on another wonderful chappie, It's ok if ya miss the deadline to get it out just as long as ya get it out ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. Please update soon.
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