| "Anything Good" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: hey!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in.. again) On: July 13, 2005 00:07 CDT
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Hey, good story. I read your first story to this one first but I decided to leave a review behind for this one, I liked this one more just because it was less raw and more passionate (I can't spell v.v) I'm a sucker for stories such as these. I liked it though. Oh I liked the ending, it was kawaii ^.^ I liked the the whole father-son thing at the end, I'm a sucker for things like that too. Anyways, it was good. Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero... P.S. I hope to see more updates from you sometime soon.
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 07:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I haven't read any sex scenes so intense since I last read some Penthouse Forum letters (and not so long ago either... sigh). You are so much more descriptive then I am in your lovemaking details: actually touching on details that I purposely ignore or avoid (Grafenberg ejaculate, mutual masterbation, prostate manipulation, etc.). You have found your niche and I revel in your incredible detail. By the way, the frozen pizza homage was a nice touch... HaHaHa. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 20:34 CDT
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I loved Vegeta and the frozen food - almost like he couldn't be bothered. How many times have I expressed how much I like your Vegeta? Very in character, I think. Nice study of his reactions to the whole Majin thing (Post Traumatic Buu Disorder - love it).
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Vegeta does your Pizza Moo? Masn that was a rather quaint intelectual sweet peice of story I tried really really Frikin tried to use my perverted insideious twisted hentai pof a brain to put vegeta in a real good (read Happosai with Devils from Overfeind style) way But my conceinse couldn't(read do it and die!) do it. I enjoyed this Shadow Megatron
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Reviewed By: christabeleve61 On: June 25, 2004 11:07 CDT
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Loved Bulma's epiphany of "I'm the dumbest genius I know!" Great lemon.
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: June 25, 2004 04:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I'm really starting to love the gentler side of Veggie ^_^ It's just cool to see what all those get-togethers are leaing up to.
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Reviewed By: Denmark de la Croix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this. despite my dislike for hetsex, i think this really works. the narrative is so smooth. the sex seems to just tell itself--i believe this happened. i love the pizza punchline. best yet in my opinion.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 16:55 CDT
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Excellent Lemon. Poor Vegeta. I feel sorry for him. He is having to deal with so many conflicting emotions.
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