| "Shinigami's Stage; Behind the Jester's Mask" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
huh. Not sure if I like this or hate it. It's ... got the bones of something that could be much better. I like that you brought Solo back, but so far you haven't really covered the how. I would try putting in a little more backstory, and way more detail. Lots and lots of detail. If you want an example of a truly great fanfic try Sunhawk's Ion Arc and Road Trip Arc. They're so great. I bow to the awesomeness that is Sunhawk. So here is where I trot out my pet peeve: Editing is good, proper grammer and spelling is good. The misuse of synonyms = bad. Please use a grammer/spell checker. Seeing: bee and knowing you meant: be too often gets kind of irritating. I'm not saying this isn't worth reading, but it could really use some work. I like the premise. I'll keep reading it.
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Title: PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: jade17oni [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 15:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm begging you on hands and knees to update this! I only just read it recently but I think its turning into a wonderful story! I love the twins! And 'Heelo' is simply wonderful with Chi!
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Title: What's Next!?
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 14:49 CDT
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So I came across yoru story and loved it. What happened to Duo? I have to know! I hope he is ok. I think he has like different personality which explains the mask. And what is his connection to Chi? How are they intuned so well? And was in that shot?... And I have so many more questions. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shinimegami21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I abso-fucking-ly adore this fic. It's one of the best I've read in a long time. I hope you update soon because I want to see what Duo and the band sing. And I want to know what happened to Duo and when he found Solo again. And what happens in the end? I mean does Heero really marry that bitch Relena? Sorry, I just really hate Relena. Who does Duo get with? Please, I beg you, update soon!!
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Title: Please update!
Reviewed By: cat21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 09:40 CDT
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this story is absolutely brilliant, it's very original and i love the twins! please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: hfsodiuafhuisda On: June 20, 2005 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really good! There are a few minor spelling problems but otherwise its great!
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I enjoyed this immensely and love the plot to bits. Poor Duo and Heero. This story has so much potential and I see you have re-released it on Fanfiction.net, is that why you haven't added another chapter here in a long time? Perhaps you should get another chapter written here, even if you get more reviews on the other site we here would still like this story to be continued here. Some refuse to go to Fanfiction.net for their own reason and I wish to see more of this story. Choice is yours though.
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Title: shinigami's stage
Reviewed By: cat21 On: May 07, 2005 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is unlike any other Duo runsaway story that i've read. the story has kept me guessing and on the edge of my seat all the way through! please could you post the next couple of chapters soon??????
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Title: shinigami's stage
Reviewed By: cat21 On: May 07, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is unlike any other Duo runsaway story that i've read. the story has kept me guessing and on the edge of my seat all the way through! please could you post the next couple of chapters soon??????
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 12:39 CST
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How can anyone be grounded from a website?? Anyways, if you need a beta just e-mail me, I can help you out if I can, I also know a few people who wouldn't mind doing the same thing to be your secound beta just in case I would miss anything, contact me its all good... take care. And hope to see an update soon
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Reviewed By: TeshiKeiKenda (to lazy to login) On: November 08, 2004 12:30 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O OOOOoooooo.......I can't wait to read what happens next! Hurry up! ^^ Please?
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Reviewed By: youngersister On: November 07, 2004 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Solo is really wierd compared to the meting but your right Dou does seem like a girl.
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Reviewed By: youngersister On: November 07, 2004 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looooooove the scrpt 'typo'!!
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Reviewed By: youngersister On: November 07, 2004 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood story wirte more stories I loooooooooooove the story wirte more stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: youngersister On: November 07, 2004 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story from the intro and if you want more ideas Dou is a prankster (with mask) and without it he'd probily be a scared and worried person, on the verge of going crazy, and Heero is a lone wolf and very quiet.
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