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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 17:47 PDT
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Gosh..your last chapter really just tugged at my emotions. Actually, your last few chapters have honestly been amazing -conveying so much feeling with very concise words and imagery. I still can't get past Inu's irrational worry about having children. Not to downplay it...but Doesn't he realize that as Sessh put it..if anything was to happen to him and Kagura, Inu would become the kids' guardians..thus making him a parent anyway? Inu wants to spare his children the pain he himself suffered...but everything about his childhood is so different from what is going on now...I mean, in some sense he does want to have children..he just doesn't want them to suffer. So it's not that he opposes the idea of having pups...but the consequences of doing so. Argh..I still feel so frustrated b/c I feel that Kagome shouldn't have to give up the idea of children to be with Inu.
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Reviewed By: jenwee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 17:28 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont usually like most of da inu/kag fics .. but this is awesome .. i like the twist of inuyasha not wanting kids .. and all the things he had to go through to get kagome back Dammmit .. hahahaha das hilarious =]
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: August 22, 2004 15:45 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These recent chapters I really don't have words for them. I love them it so good the pain and sadness feels so real that it make me want to cry or it takes my breath away. I wait for them to have kids but you have to feel for Inu. The voice of a child has me scraching my head sorta ( I have an idea just not sure) So PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: Chapter 32 &33
Reviewed By: Eleature (member) On: August 22, 2004 14:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't really express the impact these two chapters has had on me. It was really angsty and I was barely able to keep from crying. It was an excellent chapter. Keep up the great work. YOu're a brilliant writer.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 14:03 PDT
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They have to have kids !! Awh thats not fair !!! lol this was a good chapter update soon !!
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Title: So Sad!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: moonsiren06 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 13:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG its so sad! i love it though but i wish they could have stayed in the feudal era. but other then that it was so good! i loved it.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: August 22, 2004 12:49 PDT
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damn it inu wats the matter with u... man this chapter left me so sad i almost cried
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Reviewed By: Haunt On: August 22, 2004 12:38 PDT
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Whoot. o.0 Wow...intense. That was really intense. Poor Inuyasha....it must have really hurt him to tell her that he didn't want pups. Hurt him enough to make him cry. Poor puppyyy...///Now, about Dammit. I'm very glad to find out that she's friends with Kagome now ^^ *pats Dammit on the head* Hmmm...oh, yeah. I didn't really understand 'the voice was that of a child' in chapter 33. What voice? The one that told him not to make sacrifices?
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Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: GREAT JOB!
Reviewed By: Riley On: August 22, 2004 11:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These last chaps have brought tears to my eyes, great job! keep it comming...
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: August 22, 2004 10:46 PDT
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sniff it's so sad... I'm still crying *sob* your fic is really good, can't wait to read what next!
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 10:21 PDT
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^^ i can't wait to see how this affects everybody! update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 10:20 PDT
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Wow. Great chapter. So much sadness. I honestly don't know if I could do what she did. I have always wanted kids. And to suddenly not have them. Is very depressing. But he could always change his mind if he think it will be safe. Besides I think Toga wants some cousins. lol cools beans. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 08:29 PDT
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Now this is a curveball I have not seen in any other Inu fanfic thus far...Inuyasha doesn't want kids. Sigh..now the lemon is definitely going to take longer to get to. But, if his main reason is that he doesn't want to inflict the painful childhood he experienced upon his own kids, well, that's already something that can easily be avoided. Afterall, nobody knows that demons exist anymore...thanks to the concealing spells. And he can look to Sessh and Kagura's kids as an example of how youkai blooded kids can make it in Kagome's time. The situation is no longer the same one he faced as a child...besides that, he and kagome along with their families would be around for his kids. Again, entirely different situation than what he faced. But this is a serious issue that won't go away without honesty and compromise. My god, Inu has gone through so much to get kagome back...and now he's willing to end things because of his fears. I'm going to tear my hair out!
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 08:24 PDT
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awwwww.... and that's all i have to say right now. ^^ update soon! --Netiri
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