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Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic On: August 20, 2004 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. could you please let me know when you will update this story? my email is tessie_fanfic@yahoo.com i love it! but one questions, in the begining you said rin was there. did you mean his rin from the show or one of his kids? other than that i loved it! tessie
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was right I thought Dammit had a crush on him lol well please let him and Kagome be together and let Dammit actually warm up to Kagome please !!! lol Update soon !!!
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: August 20, 2004 18:13 PDT
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It's sooo good! ^^ But I'm a bit confused about the dog... (Dammit) I just don't understand why he seems to hate Kagome so much! Oh well... I feel stupid. lol. anyway, update soon! (why am i saying this? you always update soon!)
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Reviewed By: Jenny D On: August 20, 2004 18:06 PDT
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Very very good! I've been checking back everyday since the 10th when I found your story and I've been so thrilled that you post so quickly...nothing is more frustrating than to get enamoured of a piece (and I am enamoured of yours) only to have it fizzle or die- yours just pops! thanks for the work!
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: August 20, 2004 17:35 PDT
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^^ i can't wait to see how Kagome reacts! update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: shananana On: August 20, 2004 15:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww, this is sutch a kawaii chapter, with a little hint of wacko dammit included! heh, or should i say, FEH! haha, well i love it!! i cant beleive you have almost 210 reviews! but hey this is a great story! cant wait to see waht kagmoe says! write soon!!!!!!
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Title: w00t!
Reviewed By: BakaBokken (not signed in) On: August 20, 2004 15:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heehee... more lovely mush! *melts again* Yes, before you ask, I'm taking ANOTHER break from work just to read this chapter! LOL. I'm glad I chatted with you via AIM on this, or else I'd be pretty confused! LOL! Hehehehe... I feel so special! lol... Well, enough "lol"'ing, I'll just leave off with another "great chapter" comment, like, "I love the descriptions", and "I don't hate Dammit", and... I guess that's all! Just remember, Gollum scares me too, if you know what I mean, but I can't help but like him! ~_^ Anywho, ttyl! Jaa! ~Baka
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Title: Purity is Awesome
Reviewed By: ManOfMystery On: August 20, 2004 14:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Purity really is an awesome story, sueric. I love how you managed to take characters based on a very popular manga and make them your own, while at the same time, in my opinion, staying true to how RT intended them to be. Your writing is great. I don't have to try to picture what's going on at all while reading a chapter. You do all the work for me with your descriptions. Sesshoumaru, a family man?! I love it. And that Toga is awfully cute. He's at his best when he is with Uncle Yasha. I see both his mother and father in him too. I can't wait to see Kagome and Inuyasha take that final step. If it just wasn't for that darn Dammit. Anyway, keep up the good work sueric. You really are a talented writer.
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Reviewed By: Haunt On: August 20, 2004 12:53 PDT
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*kicks Dammit until the dog turns black and blue* GODDAMMIT, YOU STUPID DOG, WILL YOU STOP THREATENING KAGOME?! She hasn't done anything to you! And 'she hur-rt Lor-rd Dog' is a load of BULL!!!! Wow. This chapter was very intimate. *Shiver* Although Dammit gives me the CREEPS. Just what the hell is this dog's problem?? In any case, another beautiful chapter. I looooove it! Keep up the wonderful work!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 12:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job this story just keeps getting better and better!
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 11:37 PDT
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^^ like i said before, only a child could cause so much trouble and still remain innocent. really nice! keep up the good work! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: InuDBZLuv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 01:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story!! I was very impressed at the character build and the storyline is great!! I stayed up until 4am to read up to chapter 29!! Keep up all the great work!
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Title: DAMMIT!!!!
Reviewed By: SUGAR MURER KILL KILL On: August 19, 2004 23:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM GONNA KILL DAMMIT AND PUT 'HE WAS ASKIN FOR IT' ON HER GRAVE AND NO ONE IS GONNA STOP ME.Is Inuyasha blind and deaf or somethin.I mean here the dog is THREATENING his soon to be MATE and he does nothing about.Come on!!!! It almost makes me want to hurt him too. Note the word almost. What is that bitches (pardon my cussin but technically she is one) part in the story except for its annoyng habit of getting in the way.What is she Kkyo or somethin.Its just AGRHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Update soon. Love it.bye
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever, (it keeps saying im not logged in...wether that true or not, lol ) On: August 19, 2004 22:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH cant wait for the next chap! That was sooo good! update soon! the kids are soo funny
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Reviewed By: Sessshoumarugrl*not logged in* On: August 19, 2004 21:09 PDT
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Whats up with the dog ?? Why does she hate Kagome so much ? update soon !!
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