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Reviewed By: CriscoKittie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story, now my only request it that you up date as soon as possible! ~ CriscoKittie
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Reviewed By: Gloria Underhill On: August 09, 2004 16:46 PDT
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I'm really enjoying this story, I especially like how you're handling Kagome "knowing" InuYasha even if she doesn't consciously remember him. I want to let you know of a perception that I've gotten, in case I'm mistaken. Now I know that Kagome has basically just started to come to terms with her crush, or whatever, but it seems to me that she still feels overshadowed by the woman that forgot InuYasha. (I got that from the tear scene). That's fine if that is where you're going. I just wanted to tell you that and encourage you to keep writeing.
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Reviewed By: Caphriel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 12:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write well. Although there are occasional errors in spelling and grammer, they aren't serious enough to affect the story. The premise for your story is unique to my experience. However, one of the devices in chapter 19 wasn't. Mrs. Higurashi having heard the story of Inuyasha, or something similar, is fairly common, and I was a little dissapointed to see it appear in what is otherwise an original story, more so because it doesn't, as of yet, seem to serve any purpose but filler conversation. Please don't think that I don't like your story. It is one of my favorites. I like your writing style as well as your plot idea. So, I'll just wait for the next chapter. ~Caphriel
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Title: One of the Best fanfics EVER
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 12:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH GOD! I'm SO glad this your fanfic was on the fearured fanfic list, or else I thinki never would have found it! It really is great, I love the way you wrote. Its sad that Kagome doesn't remember Inu Yasha though...but they have really sweet moment together! This is an awsome fic, its a lot better than most I've read. I'd put it up with my first five favorites! I just really love your story! Can't wait for you to update! I'll make sure and tell people about your awsome fic! Please updates really soon! I cant wait for your next chapter. If you have more stories I'll be sure to read them! Great story, cya!
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Title: (throws confetti) yay!
Reviewed By: Kumaru On: August 09, 2004 11:56 PDT
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CONGRATULATIONS, SUERIC!!!!!!!! (pinches sue's cheeks teasingly) I"m so proud of you!!!! (sniggers) Really though, you deserve it. This is the best InuYasha fanfic I've read :) Maru
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Reviewed By: WarriorDrgnMage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 11:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just so you know I found your fic via the Featured fic page. I must say it lives up to the honor I truely am enjoying this. I hope Kagome remembers Inu Yasha, Sango and Miroku soon, but it would be amusing if she remembered Kouga first! ~Lucille Hannah~
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Title: Dog!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 09:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I just read your newest chapter (ch 19) and I loved it! I love the dog! Keep the dog! lol. So sweet. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm obsessing! And I dunno why but I had a feeling that Kagome's mom would remember!
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Title: Charming!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 08:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember if I've reviewed this story yet, but I saw it recommended on another forum, and I wanted to let you know I'm really enjoying it so far. And Kagome's Mama remembers, even if Kagome doesn't! This story is so sweet and romantic. I wonder about who or what the white dog really is, though... thanks for updating so frequently!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 18:46 PDT
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We're just waiting to pounce you later on when you do something mean in the story that causes the readers (ahem, us) to be totally shell-shocked.......::grins::
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Reviewed By: HAILY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 22:29 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I love this story. Keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: KatGrrrrl99 On: August 07, 2004 20:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!! :)
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Title: Purity
Reviewed By: Taylor@accessInuyasha.zzn.com On: August 07, 2004 19:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved ur story it made me cry , laugh , and scream in shock , laughter , and horrer so ples wright more!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ME On: August 07, 2004 11:54 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job with this fic--it was recommended to me several times, and I finally got a chance to read it--I thought it was going to be too angsty for my taste--but I was very pleasantly surprised--it's a 'good' angst ^_^ not heart-wrenching, and I'm SO glad Inu didn't have to live through those 500 years--I find THAT depressing. This is so well-written with great characterizations--I just love it!! Now comes the hard part---waiting for updates--I SO like reading most of the story (if not all) in one sitting--I get so impatient for updates!! ^_^so here's hoping you'll update soon, although it looks like you have a tendency to make them relatively quick *keeps fingers crossed* ........and, YES!! they finally kissed!!!!!
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Title: Yes Yes Yes
Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so much! Its so perfect and the way you write it reminds me of the anime so much. You matched thier chacateristics right on the dot. I love it sooo much and I can't wait to see what happens! You defintily earned a spot in my favorites! Keep up the tramindous work.
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: BakaInuGirl (ff.net) On: August 06, 2004 14:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! 'The Kiss' was awesome! I wonder what Higurashi-sama has to talk to Kagome about?? I heart your story! Hope you don't keep the next chapter hostage for too long! Update soon! B.I.G.
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