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Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: September 01, 2012 17:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic so so SO much!! Thank you for such a wonderful story!! |
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 07:30 EST
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I started reading this two-part saga a while ago and kept going at it on and off and it was sort of sad to finally reach the end. I'm very glad I didn't have to wait as you wrote the chapters, though; those cliff-hangers would have killed me! You set things up well, resolve them nicely and manage to introduce concepts and explanations along the way that make me think again about the characters and series as a whole. Thank-you muchly for such an enjoyable read.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 07:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Beautiful. I put a lot of the pieces together from the first half of your story before reading Quest and I love how this went. It's easily become one of my favorites. I can tell a lot of thinking, imagination and heart went into this. (love the lemons by the way). You did a great job *APPLAUSES*
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 01:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...that was such a good story! *Sappiness EVERYWHERE* I think it would have been a cool idea (if you would have had another chapter or something, because you mentioned Bulma being alone) of Vegeta/Goku having a kid with her, just like Chichi and Vegeta with Tama? I dunno, for some reason that came to my mind. It was sad hearing about her being alone, but oh well! You did a really good job...I know how hard it is to finish a story this long, and I'm proud of you for doing it! Not too many people finish writing a story this long...and you're left hanging forever! YOU GO GIRL! But anyhow...I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us! I bet it's another excellent story! Oh yeah, and nice new website too!
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Reviewed By: lord_of_the_pies [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 14:07 EDT
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They were right then about about Tama being Rouba then, judging by the letter? Nice little detail- not sure quite why, but I really liked it, it fit in well with the ending. The idea of Vegeta getting all those Saiyan artifacts back is great as well; as was his reaction. And with Lord Enma's reformation of Otherworld, I can't help but wonder where all the saiyans might end up. Fantastic ending- happy without being overly cloying, and it ties up the loose endings. I hope to see you writing again soon.
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Reviewed By: lord_of_the_pies [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 11:16 EDT
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(For chapter 46) The ki vision ability Goku had was great, and you described it wonderfully along with the dragon and the phoenix. It is good to see he got the transformation as well. Great scene. And I bet Piccolo will be having fun with Nail. (Loved the bit when he came back.) *goes off to read chapter 47*
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Reviewed By: lord_of_the_pies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 15:17 EDT
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Phew, and I thought the explosion of the Kai's planet was going to span over many multiple chapters. Liked seeing what was happening down the Earth end of things while Vegeta smushed the Kai's- busy, wasn't it? Piccolo deserves a nice long holiday after all of this. I see Dende is still developing- looking back, he has changed hugely. Looking forward to find out how Piccolo's plot finishes in this last few chapters- poor guy; you kinda made me feel sorry for him, losing Nail like that. And of course, the two Saiyans.
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Reviewed By: Xero Sky (not logged in) On: September 21, 2005 02:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really wish I could draw now... You have so many vivid scenes in this fic that I can see just perfectly in my mind's eye: Vegeta covered in blood, his dragon moving across his skin. Kakarrot growling and biting. The boys trying to be beacons for Vegeta to fix on. Piccolo's bewildered grief. Gotenks gleefully killing Cell. *happy sigh* I am, of course, a complete Vegeta X Goku fangirl, and your fic has been one of the brightest spots in our fandom for the last year and more. I have always been delighted to see new updates, and although I'll miss this fic, I can't wait to see what else you have for us. OMG! SO FUZZY! *dies happily of mush*
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 21, 2005 01:24 EDT
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I see you do. You like making me worry. Now will they be allowed to live in peace...no life not that easy is it? Please tell me they will have some happieness... See Ya LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: lord_of_the_pies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 15:20 EDT
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You know, I could mourn the sizeable chunk of my life this fic has taken away for me to read...but it was soooo worth it. ~wriggles fingers and makes weird noises- literally~ Fantastic so far (I came in quite close the end it seems though)- there have been so many awesome moments in this. I love the progress you put Vegeta though throughout this fic- overcoming the brainwashing, and then his mistrust. Also, I particularly enjoyed reading about the mating ritual, hearing about their tattoos, and the descriptiveness was wonderful- and their prior trip back in time- I really found your representation of the Saiyan culture and world captivating. Yet again, a good set of lemons- from your ki drunk Saiyans, even to the liquid latex Chichi wore one (That stuff looks so awesome, it was great to see a lemon with it- and yes, I enjoyed reading it) ~eyes the puddle of King Kai~ Great violence in this chapter- but now, having caught up, I truely feel the pain from your evil cliffhangers, and commend you. (me lurves a good cliffie does me- makes the next chapter all the better). The representation of your SS4 sounds great... *toodles off to deviantart to finally take a look*
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Title: Evilness!
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: September 12, 2005 00:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Nice and long and the yumminess of seeing all those Kais DIE! Bwahahaha. Me like.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 11, 2005 01:15 EDT
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Yes it dose thank you. My heart tells me who might be the victems...if Goku dies I hope some how he can be brought back or Vegeta can go with him, surly there are some high ups that might help? or are they all as hateful as the them? Looking forward to next chapters LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: August 31, 2005 02:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BWAHAHAHAHA. Freaking right! Lovin' the death! Keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: August 31, 2005 02:11 EDT
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worry yes very, not oly for Goku but where are the boys? Renz is gone but where is Goten and Trunks? Can Vegeta make it? (Cries) Life is crule to let them bond them ripp the two apart...(smirk) Mind you if they both died and had thier bodys and power...Goku have no trouble getting to any of the kais and KILL them ALL!!!!!! Update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: August 18, 2005 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BWAHAHAHAHAHA. Did both Goku and Rezu just get killed? OH SHIT KRILLIN IS GONNA DIE BWAHAHAHAHA!!!
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