| "Quest" Reviews/Comments [ 162 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: August 16, 2005 17:57 EDT
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NO!!!!! no he must live to protect the baby and Vegeta...Where is Vegeta why is he not there? Where are the boys? They would feel the power, did they save Ren? Oh please tell me this is all a bad dream...oh (Cries) so sad....upi date soon Well done
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Title: Gah!
Reviewed By: YukiEIri On: August 13, 2005 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! *grabs shotgun* Die you little bastard! *shoots Krillin repeatedly* Oh, I hope you kill him off slowly an painflly, roast the little piggy. *shakes fist* Lol, keep up the great writing hun , waiting for your next chapter ( impatiently :P )
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Title: Bwahahaha
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 02:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short and sweet. Krillin is freaking crazy. Love the insanity. Update soon!
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Title: Arrrrrrrrgh!
Reviewed By: Xero Sky (not logged in) On: August 10, 2005 23:44 EDT
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Why? Why won't you kill that little twit? *cries* The Piccolo/Nail thing was lovely; you've matched the green man up with the only partner that actually works for me. Good build up and nice crazy dwarf action, leading to a horrible cliffhanger. I like how 18 disapproved of his growing obsessions, yet didn't warn any of the saiyajins -- very in-character for her. You must be pleased, evil queen!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: August 10, 2005 23:11 EDT
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Thanks for letting me know I will check off and on then just to make sure. Grate chapter poor Piccolo...man is Goku going go balistic....Vegeta too I am sure The Kais must pay! I hope eighteen remebers so she can warn the other and help Awaiting you=r next chapter LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Gohans_onna (not signed in) On: August 01, 2005 15:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwahahahaha. "The brats seemed to like it, even though it was harder for them to get away with crap with six parents watching." That totally made me die. I like your long chapters. You kick ass and I can't wait for another update!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 31, 2005 01:48 EDT
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Well a small one is better then non loooking forward to next chapter LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: July 14, 2005 21:49 EDT
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What you mean...they just matedhad wonderful hot sex now you want them to fight? Gee how Sayain can you get. LOL Looking forward to the next chapters... Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Raylana On: July 14, 2005 12:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF, Tissues?? Oh my god, this is gonna have a happy ending, right? ......Right? ;__; I couldn't bear a sad ending after all they've gone through ;_; That we've gone through together, cause I'm always sharing their pain when I'm reading this wonderful piece!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 23:51 EDT
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I'm not sure I'm comfortable with their bond. There was so much talk about then being one and sharing and being an "US". With all the sharing of ki and memories etc where are the two individuals which fell for each other. I would hate to have them become some bland vanilla uni- saiyan. It worries me some. I trust you though. Great lemon by the way.
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Title: Beautiful...
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 01:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! OMG...I started reading your story like two weeks ago, and totally fell in love. Unfortunately I didn't know you were on mm.org and read it on your website, else I would have reviewed every damn chapter because of its excellentness. I love this story, I can't get over it! I think I almost fell out of my chair when I saw that you updated, I almost screamed "YES! BWAHAHAHAHA!!!" Anyhow, lol, this chapter was beautiful...I love how you got inside Vegeta's mind, I really felt what he was feeling, and almost started to cry at one point because of the imagery. I am so happy you finally got them mated, I can't wait to see what you have to write after this. I see in your author's note that you have about 10 or so chapters left, depending on what your mind feels like doing at the time, but it doesn't matter to me! Pump out 398573 more chapters if you can, lol! I would still read it! You are a great author. I have read all your other stories too on your website, they are so cute. I just can't wait for something, ANYTHING, to be updated and posted. I love you!!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 29, 2005 23:49 EDT
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Wow, about time! Now they can fight together to keep any enemy away. I am glad Vegta cane be happy for alittle while update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 23:18 EDT
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I've been waiting and waiting for this update. It was beautiful. I'd just like to say I'm crying. That's all. -El-
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Reviewed By: HSaiyajin On: June 20, 2005 01:59 EDT
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WHAT?! Are you planing on giving me a flippin heart attack?! Gaaah! [WO]MAN! Ur going to drive me crazy with stuff like this! ... Good plot so far though... good job Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 15, 2005 01:33 EDT
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Why? Why can't they? please tell me it because Goku already know what too do? Or is it a one time thing? Not fare it seams every time Vegeta make a few steps forward something wants to push him back...please up-date soon must know if they will be ok...LadyKATT
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