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Reviewed By: LawlietLov On: October 30, 2011 16:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man I just loved your story! :) |
Reviewed By: Gundamwinggirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As soon as I read the first paragraph to this story I was truly hooked. You played out Vicious character perfectly and I could just hear his voice in my head, voice and all, and picture him standing there, waiting. This was a very wonderful fic and was even better because it was so well done. Maybe you could do a piece like this on Spike to let us see his thoughts on the other "ravenous beast".
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Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vicious is an awesome character and you portrayed him perfectly! I liked this very much and is one of the best first-person one-shots i have read.
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 00:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From the first moment I read the opening paragraph, I was hooked. You had Vicious' voice down that I could just hear the growl that his voice actor gave him. There were no grammar errors to yank me out of the story which shows a lot of caring on your part. This fic deserves a lot more recognition than it has and I am going to nominate it for Featured Status. It deserves it. This is Vicious. This is Bebop. Not the great pile of slop that I had to traverse to fic this gem. I applaud you.
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