| "The Gohan and Fred Show" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: Time is out.
Reviewed By: Omega-X On: March 22, 2005 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story Kevin, but time is up, you will have to die now, i am sorry, but you should not defy the God of the 11 elements.
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Title: Times up!
Reviewed By: Omraga-X On: March 20, 2005 17:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Your tiem is up kievin, you have one more day, Then you die! the only way to save yourself is to either, detroy me or inteview me for a job position, as i don't see the latar happening, then i'll see you next chapter.
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Reviewed By: T-H-E-W-R-I-T-E-R-190 On: March 08, 2005 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font color="orange">Font Color I love your fanfic. please update it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: T-H-E-W-R-I-T-E-R-190 On: March 08, 2005 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font color="orange">Font Color I love your fanfic. please update it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The_Zombi_Killer On: March 08, 2005 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that's the funniest stuff I've ever read! Write more! Bring back Miguel! Do something!
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Reviewed By: Anime Dark Destoyer Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Raised eyebrow with emtionless Mask one eye Green one eye Blue appear to be soulous Holding a drigger plushi* This Has peaed My interist I wish to be A Host *Hair is Dishwater Blonde i wear my hair in a braid its tied at bottem wqith a black bandana to mid back wearing a jean jacket blue a shirt that says shut up i ran out of asprin in red letters and the background is black green army pants type things and black sneakers has 3 peircings in my ear 2 onm the right and that earing is connecttion between the 2 holes has a dangling chain with a tiger Going Down and the other ear is just a dangling Tiger and last but not least has a Lab top with her* Wright soon Or I will simply just Take you Outa existence *shrug's like it's nothing* I hope for your Case You write soon this is cool fic so keep it up
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Reviewed By: Fallens Lovin Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh You can Also just Call me Kasy ^-^ for referance
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Reviewed By: Fallens Lovin Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
*gigle's at Auther* Awwww This is coolio YOU should write more soon it's sweat I wanta Join in it to *tilt's head smiling cutely hugling her plushie dranzer tis 16 but has innocense in her eye's wearing Bikini top (with d-cup's) and hip huggers that slide down a bit to show 2 straps that go to the Bikini Bottem and wears sneakers tan Bikini black pants Baby blue eyes Pale Skin Lavender hair either in ponytail* OHHHHH PLEASEEEEEEEE update soon IT'S sooooo cool ^-^ I can't wait to see another Chapter
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAHHHHH he's ALIVE *huggle's auther and then pout's* NO Orgy DARN you and ^-^ good apoligy yep that is SOOOOOOOOO Me *grin's evilly* COME ON can't I TRY tempting you in the story at LEAST with MY crazy sex frenzyness ^-^ Come on IM A DETERMINED PERVERT that will drag you to another room for "fun" purpose's *gigle's insanly* SOOOOOOOOOOOOO anywhay WRITE SOON PLEASE LOVE YOUR STORY ^-^
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Title: I don't drink
Reviewed By: UW (Carlito) On: March 07, 2005 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. Unknown Wanderer doesn't drink. For a 15 year old, that not cool. Not cool like me. (Takes a bite out of an apple and spits into Fred's face) Carlito. Carribean. Cool. (Calito's music hits)
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 14:30 CST
Comment/Review:
About time! my head really is on fire, but that's cuz i got whacked in the head with a pool cue. Wow. Are we really running out of ideas? if ya need ideas ask. Good chapter, and happy birthday! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:30 CST
Comment/Review:
so... you left us out. okay... not that I mind or anything. hehehehehehehe... the hemorrhages to the head have messed with me... damn table/cardboard tube/dogs/horses/little brother! I thought the chapter was pretty good, and at least you gave a plausible reason for not having us. Well, see you next chapter. Mom, isn't it time for my medications? (sedatives, tranquilizers, anti-depressants). Bye!
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 13:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah, now THIS is quality gameshow hosting. An idea just hit me! Put everyone on a plane to Antarctica!!! ANd we crashed, in antarctica. With the penguins. See if that even works... Keep posting or I will fry you alive, feed your organs to sharks, and put the charred remains on e-bay!! ^_^ keep working!~
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ Thas me alright I can actully see me doing that I LOVE IT PLEASE PLEASE WRITE SOON *hugg's auther in the new outfit she got it's sheer fabric Black with jewel at tip of c-Cup chest and a small Jewel At her warmth ANd the "dress" Is Barely past her ass* PLEASE HURRY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *huggles and Kisses auther* YEAH Write soon or *Simple smirk and Is blowing Thing's Up randomly*
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 20:48 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ LOVE IT!!! hehehe... I'm so....me-ish. I really liked the cookie scene. reminds me of when my puppy ate my dinner, and i looked at him. He threw 20 minutes later (was that even relevant to this?)) Keep Writing, or I'll sic my dogs, my horse, my little brother, and my stuffed blue penguin after you!
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