| "The Gohan and Fred Show" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just call me Angel ^-^ i think thats easir come on dont i get to kiss the auther *pouts* WET T-SHIRT CONTEST i wanne be in it please lets have one please please please that was cool i have been tied up before for sexual pleasure damn was she good with her tongue *shakes head* anywhay that was cool dude write soon please or *gets out bazooka again* FACE THE PURPLE ARMY WRATH (im the new general MWHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHHAHA) so hurry up or *points Bazooka at random prep and fires not even dust left of the prep* YEAH HURRY *huggles auther in a crimson (blood) red bikini see through black shirt and see through black mini skirt* write soon
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 18:49 CST
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AWESOME!!! ^_^ I think you even SOUNDED like me... wait, that's creepy... oh well. however, im a WEE bit more insane, (aka: i try to drown people/ suffocate them with brussel sprouts) but hey, that was still funny! Keep going and if you ever yse my name again, call me Hanami. its a WHOLE lot easier. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 15:06 CST
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YEAH I WAS ON *huggles auther is still in her black bikini except she has a sheer see through skirt on that is really short* i wanne be on again i wouldnt run though i woulda Kissed you then i woulda said can i be the co-host i dont do friend speeches those are stupid and i didnt get to see any fights *pouts* owell FUNNES write soon that was cool you actully read my profile or you woulda never known i was bi as they say best of both worlds baby now then WRITE NOW OR *gets out bazooka again* I WILL BLOW YOU ALL UP MWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHa
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 19:16 CST
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^_^ I loved the witty humor! I loved all of the fights, even the catfights, but im a girl, so thats kinda wrong.. (im NOT gay!!) oh well. please keep writin! If u would have the time and patience to try have me maybe guest star, i would like that! Keep writin!!!!!! Or I will be forced to attack u with MY stuffed animal. And believe me, she got issues.... Ja NE!!! ~Hanami
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats funny shit *is still laughing her ass off* *pounces up and down* can I be on it can I can I just make sure im my perverted self *is in a bikini*please im very blunt so yeah can i can i *while pouncing readjusts her bikini top* what after pouncing so much if you have c-Cup it needs adjusting so anywhay PLEASE CAN I BE ON and *coughs lightly* i am not a blond black hair bitches MWHAHAHHAHAHAHA and im obsessed with fire so if i could just have a blowtorch please but it is funny shit write soon or *gets out Bazooka* FACE THE WRATH OF ME MAWHAHAHHAHAHAHHA
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Reviewed By: UW On: December 06, 2004 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was some funny shit. But I must now address my attention to Gohan. You see Gohan, telling Kevin he's gonna get sued...(takes a bite of an apple)...that not cool. Gohan, you're not cool at all. (spits the apple in Gohan's face) Not cool like me. Carlito. Carribean. Cool. (Carlito's theme song hits)
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Reviewed By: J.Crown On: October 16, 2004 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
:5/6 souls:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA! very good kevin I beleave it is hilariuos and you know that the whole getting suddenly finding fanfics and likeing them is excalty how I got hooked on fanfics. well update soon our evil will be after you next after he's done with UW.
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Reviewed By: sugargamer15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 16:14 CDT
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CAT FIGHTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and this is great
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Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 18:30 CDT
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Funny. On your last chapter I couldn't tell who was talking. Fix that please. Are you gonna post your other stories from FanFiction.net? One other thing. Can I be on your show to? Oh well, update soon.
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 23:52 CDT
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 11:35 CDT
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BIG_DADDY: Okay, I'm a little more calm now that Kuwabara and I have sowed our revenge. Though it didn't last long I am now satisfied. But next time I won't go so easy on you. Kuwabara: You tell him BIG_DADDY. BIG_DADDY: Quiet you! One question though, do you know how to harness power of AUTHOR POWER? That's usually what gives me a winning edge but you didn't know that. Ah well, who gives a freak? Update soon.
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 11:09 CDT
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Title: I'll get back to you in 20 years
Reviewed By: Unknown Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice first chapter. Now just give a few years to read this whole sonbitch.
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Title: cool ch.
Reviewed By: sugargamer15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 15:10 CDT
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this is great. but hey where is the one witth me in it? YOU SAID!! i am sugarmaster15 from ff.net, remember? please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! here is some cookies (hands a plate of cookies)
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
The 9th chapter sucks. I hate because you killed Kuwabara. My all time favorite character of Yu Yu Hakusho. DEATH TO KEVIN!! MAKE SURE I FIGHT YOU TO THE DEATH IN THE NEXT CHAPTER AS I MANGLE YOUR CORPSE INTO A TINY BALL OF SMASHED ORGANS AND BROKEN BONES AND MAKE SURE KOENMA SENDS YOU TO LINBO!! (Leaves being pissed)
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