| "The Gohan and Fred Show" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats funny shit *is still laughing her ass off* *pounces up and down* can I be on it can I can I just make sure im my perverted self *is in a bikini*please im very blunt so yeah can i can i *while pouncing readjusts her bikini top* what after pouncing so much if you have c-Cup it needs adjusting so anywhay PLEASE CAN I BE ON and *coughs lightly* i am not a blond black hair bitches MWHAHAHHAHAHAHA and im obsessed with fire so if i could just have a blowtorch please but it is funny shit write soon or *gets out Bazooka* FACE THE WRATH OF ME MAWHAHAHHAHAHAHHA
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Reviewed By: UW On: December 06, 2004 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was some funny shit. But I must now address my attention to Gohan. You see Gohan, telling Kevin he's gonna get sued...(takes a bite of an apple)...that not cool. Gohan, you're not cool at all. (spits the apple in Gohan's face) Not cool like me. Carlito. Carribean. Cool. (Carlito's theme song hits)
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Reviewed By: J.Crown On: October 16, 2004 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
:5/6 souls:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA! very good kevin I beleave it is hilariuos and you know that the whole getting suddenly finding fanfics and likeing them is excalty how I got hooked on fanfics. well update soon our evil will be after you next after he's done with UW.
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Reviewed By: sugargamer15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 16:14 CDT
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CAT FIGHTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and this is great
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Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 18:30 CDT
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Funny. On your last chapter I couldn't tell who was talking. Fix that please. Are you gonna post your other stories from FanFiction.net? One other thing. Can I be on your show to? Oh well, update soon.
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 23:52 CDT
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 11:35 CDT
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BIG_DADDY: Okay, I'm a little more calm now that Kuwabara and I have sowed our revenge. Though it didn't last long I am now satisfied. But next time I won't go so easy on you. Kuwabara: You tell him BIG_DADDY. BIG_DADDY: Quiet you! One question though, do you know how to harness power of AUTHOR POWER? That's usually what gives me a winning edge but you didn't know that. Ah well, who gives a freak? Update soon.
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 11:09 CDT
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Title: I'll get back to you in 20 years
Reviewed By: Unknown Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice first chapter. Now just give a few years to read this whole sonbitch.
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Title: cool ch.
Reviewed By: sugargamer15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 15:10 CDT
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this is great. but hey where is the one witth me in it? YOU SAID!! i am sugarmaster15 from ff.net, remember? please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! here is some cookies (hands a plate of cookies)
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
The 9th chapter sucks. I hate because you killed Kuwabara. My all time favorite character of Yu Yu Hakusho. DEATH TO KEVIN!! MAKE SURE I FIGHT YOU TO THE DEATH IN THE NEXT CHAPTER AS I MANGLE YOUR CORPSE INTO A TINY BALL OF SMASHED ORGANS AND BROKEN BONES AND MAKE SURE KOENMA SENDS YOU TO LINBO!! (Leaves being pissed)
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, you are like the evil clone of Frasier. Your humor is very witty. I like that. (Tosses him a biscuit) Keep writing this. You are great.
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 23:19 CDT
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Hey. It's you. I read your fic "Just Don't" or something like that on FF.net. Glad to have you on the good side dude. I'll try and read it when I have the chance. Most likely when I'm bored which is most of the time.
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Title: it's sugarmaster15
Reviewed By: sugargamer15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 18:33 CDT
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hey, remember me. i signed on here so appreciate me! and the story is great, too. and on here my name is sugargamer15. and, this is great.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Neko Kay On: August 18, 2004 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good stuff, and I'm glad you decided to repost this up here after it was taken down from ff.net. Never reviewed over there but oh well, just know that I read your stuff, and keep updating often. Listen to me, you got a fan here...you don't want to mess that up now do you? Why are you still reading this? Don't you suppose to be writing...and posting? Don't make me come over there...
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