| "One Less Star, Book 1" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: September 01, 2005 06:10 CDT
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Please update. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's such an amazing story, you're so creative. Very original. I love it.
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Title: One Leaa Star, Book 1
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 14:08 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 19:50 CDT
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Whew. That was gorgeous. . . I can't wait to see more. . .*whine*
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Title: One Less Star, Book 1
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 22:51 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: PuckRG [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
W00t! That last chapter was...*Fans self* You know, when I read your review I thought I wouldn't like these pairings. I've never liked InuXSango. But I think you're really making them work. Your plotting is excellent and the idea of the "thousand Kagomes" and her destiny is very intriguing. I really didn't like Inuyasha at first, he seemed so OOC in a way. But now, I'm beginning to see where you're going with this and I really like it. Miroku and Kagura were another interesting pairing but totally believable in your story. I really like how you've portrayed Kagura - she's so interesting! Please keep writing - I can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: sesshygirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cheers* Awesome!!! Smut galore! e.e ehehehe... Anyways, very good chapter, this story is progressing well... hehehe... I love it. :)
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Title: One less star book 1
Reviewed By: Junie On: January 27, 2005 20:28 CST
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please email me when u post more chapters!!!!!! i love this story!!!! my email is whispering_willow_fairy6990@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Delu (not logged in) On: January 26, 2005 23:18 CST
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What a wonderful story! The grammer was well done, the actual writing content, the style, everything was good. The story idea was interesting. I've come to really like Kagura as a character. I'm not altogether fond of Inu/San pairings, but you've done a good job writing it so far, and I'm here for the Sess/Kag pairing anyway ^_^ I absolutely adore your fic and will be waiting for more!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: January 26, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about sexual frustration being satisfied! The last few chapters have been great! I do hope Sango is able to knock some since into Inuyasha. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you update soon!
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Title: One Less Star, Book 1
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 17:22 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Unbelievably good!!!
Reviewed By: oneechan25 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I had the smidgeon bit of talent that you, I would consider myself a lucky girl...this has been an unbelievably good read...with just the right amount of tension to leave a person wanting for more...it amazes me how I became so engrossed with the story so quickly and how well written Inuyasha and company are that I ALMOST forgot that these characters were not your own (forgive me Takahashi-sensei)...but its good, so very, very, very good...so please continue on with this wonderful story... Oneechan25 ^_^.
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Title: z
Reviewed By: oneechan25 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 14:27 CST
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Title: One Less Star, Book 1
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 21, 2004 23:25 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: you need to update, PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: fizzywig On: November 19, 2004 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE this story!!! i have been reading it since it started and i've been waiting for the next update. i can't stand it any more you need to update please!!!!!! i really enjoy this story... sorry i haven't reviewed before...i suck at reviewing. hopefully this one will make up for the ones i didn't. if you update i'll promise to review for every chapter you post...PLEASE!!!!
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Title: One Less Star, Book 1
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 04, 2004 01:29 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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