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"One Less Star, Book 1" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ]
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 Reviewed By: BlackDreamer9 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 21:58 CDT
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 Reviewed By: BlackDreamer9 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love it !!!! i hope you update soon. the lemon chappy was good. im just sorry about kagome.
 Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in)  On: September 19, 2004 13:44 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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That was evil! Please, please, please update soon! Are you actually going to kill off Inuyasha? I always thought of Kagome and Inu having a brother sister relationship, its sad to think that he might die.
 Reviewed By: sesshygirl3 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2004 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i finally found the smut! so happy! ok, lets change the subject to why i rated your story the way i did. style of writing: 10: it's perfect spelling and grammar: 10: it's perfect originality/creativity: it's perfect enjoment factor: it's perfect Overall Rating: it's perfect yea that about sums it up! keep it up! ciao sesshygirl 0(-.-)0
 Title: wow
Reviewed By: Missy Manda  On: September 16, 2004 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg i love ur story...its my fave:) keep writing please:) id really appreciate it :P update soon :)
 Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: The Black Kat  On: September 16, 2004 00:08 CDT
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Hey, this is different and I really like it. I am surprised that you don't have that many reviews. You certainly have put a twist in this story. I can't wait for your next update.
 Title: OMFG!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: AJ  On: September 03, 2004 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This is the most original story I've ever read, and that's saying alot. ^_^ Update soon, I can't wait to read the rest!
 Title: OMFG!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Aj  On: September 03, 2004 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This is the most original story I've ever read, and that's saying alot. ^_^ Update soon, I can't wait t read the rest!
 Reviewed By: Zillah  On: September 01, 2004 21:44 CDT
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This is excellent so far!! Your style of writing and wording is so great. I hope toy see another chapter soon!!
 Reviewed By: BloodAngel15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 01, 2004 04:01 CDT
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hahahahahahahaha. kagome's in love kagome's in love. i feel so happy now. LOL it was an awesome chapter once again and i can't wait for you to update some more. Kagome is so funny, she can't stop thinking about that hunk of a lord...well neither can i but thats a different story. lol. anyways it was an awesome chapter and i can't wait for the next one so update as soon as you can. Ja Ne
 Reviewed By: SailorPenguinz  On: August 25, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm really liking your story here! :D Very unique. ~nods~ A nice breath of fresh air from all the typical "Kagome catches Inu Yasha with Kikyo, is heartbroken, runs into Sesshoumaru, denies feelings growing in each of them, some life-threatening event happens, and they finally except their deepening love for each other" Sess/Kag fics. Yay! You deserve a cookie! :D I'm quite intrigued as to how the story's going to progress.
 Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in)  On: August 25, 2004 02:54 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Great chap! Is Kagome ever going to get rid of he memories of the other Kagome's...wouldn't it bother to have so many of them; of other peoples lives overlapping her own?
 Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 23, 2004 04:20 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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It's a great story! It's original, interesting and Sesshomaru/Kagome fic! I like it a lot and I cant wait for more chaps, please update soon!!
 Reviewed By: BloodAngel15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2004 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
what is wrong w/ people don't they know a good story when they read one ::snort:: obviously not. anyways it was awesome, kicked ass, and it was so original, u have so totally got to update this story as soon as you can. it was really good and i like it alot. please update as soon as you can. Ja Ne
 Reviewed By: ryoko imai  On: August 19, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I'm completely blown away. This is very original and I should know. I've literally have read hundreds of Sesshoumaru and Kagome fanfics. this is a first for me. Great job. I hope you update soon. I need to know what happend to Kagome and if she ever accepts Sesshoumaru, not to mention, if Sesshoumaru accepts being her guardian, protector, and husband? I need to know. Once again, WOW!!! When you finish updating, please send me a copy at ryoko_washu_imai@yahoo.com I will seriously appreciate a copy. Arigatou and keep up the good work. Ciao, Ryo
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