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"One Less Star, Book 1" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ]
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 Title: FABULOUS!!!!
Reviewed By: playing with demons [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2008 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story....will you be continuing it? Your world and character development is sublime!!!
 Title: When is more coming?
Reviewed By: alaskandarkangel [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2008 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I can't wait until you update to read the rest of this fic. I really enjoyed your plot and the way it was written. Keep going!!!
 Title: Who needs real life?
Reviewed By: swasdiva [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2007 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
When you can get swept up in a fic like this? Ho-ly....HO-ly....Well...HELL. Sweet magistrate of Moldovia...this...fic...IS...AMAZING@!!!!!!!!! And the fact that I've been betrothed to it for the last 5 hours is actually highly ironic. You see, I was goofing off at work and came across a lovely rendition of Takeshi by...someone...on deviantART. Then I farted around some more, and through various and sundry links, arrived at this fic, where I didn't realize until I was knee-deep in SessKag grandeur that the Takeshi of said artwork was indeed, the one and same Takeshi of said fic. Destiny, I tell you....Destiny. Actually, it was "A Thousand Years" that got me here, now that I remember correctly, as I was equally spellbound by that story. Truly, I'm about as smitten as Kagome is with Sesshoumaru...yeah, it's bad. But sadly, since it's been two years after your last update, I'm afraid this fic won't be continued, and at such a pivotal point, no less. I don't really have much upper body strength, and this cliff you left me dangling from is getting more lofty by the minute. And yeah, I also don't have some uber-hott demon sex machine to wisk me out of the clear blue sky as I plummet to my demise...still, I hate pressuring people, as that defeats the purpose of writing stuff you don't get paid for. I just hate to miss more of your writing, as it's some of the most professional writing I've come across in a long while. This is publish-worthy, I tell you, all legalities and infringements aside. You have an amazing way with the cadence of your plot and sentence structure, and a mastery of bringing to life intangible emotions through carefully chosen words. I've been reading S/K for a looooooooooong time, and it's hard for me to become as engrossed in other S/K fandom as I've been with this story. I've skipped dinner, my favorite TV, my friends. Hell, I'm desperately in need of a shower, but I just forced myself to deal with the funk until I made it to the last available chapter. In all honesty, if I can convince you to return after a two-year long hiatus, I'd be pawing at your fanfiction back door....which sounds oh so wrong...but feels oh so right. This fic is beyond words of praise. Please continue!
 Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 02, 2007 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! Really good so far...I hope that you haven't complietely abandoned this story...
 Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2007 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Are you going to continue the story? I am very interested in it
 Title: WOAH
Reviewed By: sesshyluver17 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2006 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOAH! I REALLY LIKED IT! Ooops, capslock is on...heh heh anyways... i really liked it and hope you update soon, oh and for Sessh's uncle... 'What the fuck?'
 Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 01, 2006 12:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I read it again to be sure I was right. I am. I forgot to mention however, how much I enjoy the dialogue you have written. The voice of the characters is true and quite funny in spots. Anyway, it's wonderful.
 Title: 10 of 10
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 01, 2006 09:45 CST
Comment/Review:
This is easily one of the best stories I've read, and I speak with some authority when I say that. I look forward to reading more of your work. It is well thought out and I love your use of language. Some people may have trouble looking up the big words, but they should probably be reading something more at their level if this proves too difficult.
 Reviewed By: RaggieRonie [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2006 05:26 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Lucient wouldn't say it, so I will. Your fictions blow. There is zero dimension and depth to your characters. No one speaks like your characters do and the descriptions are lackluster at best. You're too full of yourself to be a good author. At least he is open to suggestion. You still need alot of work yourself and I'd go as far as to say I like him better because his work is clever and fun. These are just the writings of an old bitter fat bitch.
 Reviewed By: arazan [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2006 22:17 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome story! but i hope you update soon >.
 Title: One Less Star, Book 1
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2006 08:59 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
 Title: supersailorfanner
Reviewed By: super_sailor_fanner [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2005 15:20 CST
Comment/Review:
omg. omfg. omgomgomg!!! this is the best fanfic i've ever read...inuyahsa seemed a bit harsh...but of course one can't keep the charaters excatly like they are.....but they still sound like themselves....it's so believable! except for sango and inu! bleck! haha, lol jk! this is so good! i hope it doesn't end here.....keep up the good work! ^^
 Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 27, 2005 06:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Weird how that happened. I was commenting on someone else's entry. Sorry bout that. I think it happened because I was going to read your fiction, but I didn't have time to, and when I logged back in to comment on Kiki's fic it took me here. Go for the removal request.
 Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 27, 2005 06:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I refuse to read anymore of this fic if he keeps calling Kikyou Kiki. I'm not fucking kidding, I don't like it. I don't see how you could stomach it! lol. I knew that shit was gonna happen, but I thought Inu would spy her in the cafe with suikotsu. Damned angst. If people would just say what they mean, I mean, god. lol.
 Title: kitty_girl
Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 21, 2005 21:15 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Can you update soon.
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