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Title: oh my goodness!!
Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 23:14 CST
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no matter how many times i read this, it brings tears to my eyes. why, though? how does something so simple bring out all these emotions? i can't quite grasp it, but, alas, who can? I wish that there were words to describe the intensity of your words, but i guess that i can describe it as color, uhm... it's hot-neon-pink mixed with glowing-emerald-green and fire-engine-red with a tweaking of shimmering-sapphire-blue but there is that streak of pure white that runs through the heart of everything. that is the best way i can describe it. color. everyone understands color, right? i can figure out by the numerous adjectives the intensity of the feelings that this causes. and even the title, Even Immortals Fall, that is power. that is the raw power of emotion. revel in it's glory, for it may be short-lived. one of my favorite quotes that seems to describe this is, "The Lady cries, and the world weeps with her, for sorrow is short-lived" the Lady being Earth. but you get the message. anyway, i'm rambling, see what you've done to me? ~~~~Starlett~~~~
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Title: Beautiful!
Reviewed By: Hopeless Romantic2 On: January 30, 2005 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely stunning. And I don't usually even read Sess/kag fics!! You actually made me cry a few times in there. ^^ Lovely writing, well done indeed.
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Reviewed By: EternusLemures On: January 29, 2005 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am purely speechless. That was so incredibly beautifully written. I just...wanna...cry...T_T. It was so happy, I wanna cry. Damn you and your heeart wrenching stories. And yeah, you would have broken the flow if you put it into chapters for there's no perfect place for you to break it off at. Astounding. ~EL
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Reviewed By: The Red Dragons Order On: January 14, 2005 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly loved this fic. You have a flowing style that would make anyone envious, and so few spelling/grammar mistakes that it isn't even worth mentioning. This is also one of the most original fics of this kind that I have ever read - actually, it's the only one of its kind I've read, but that's another story. I really enjoyed it, and although it was filled with Sesshomarou's thoughts and feelings and very little conversation, I didn't miss anything. You truly possess the art of writing. And who cares if it's a slightly long one-shot? Makes it more enjoyable in my opinion, no chapters to worry about. ^.^ Keep it up! Fellow author in crime, The Red Dragons Order www.fanfiction.net
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: chewies_lover On: January 12, 2005 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It captured my attention from the first sentence and that is something really hard to do. I could hardly stop reading it once I started. I loved the flow of the story and how well you kept them in character. I didn't feel you went OOc with them, because I agree taht people do change. But in short, it was amazing and I really loved it. It's definitely one of my fav.s that I've read from you. Keep on writing.
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: ChocolateEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 04:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was truly beautiful. I was crying through out the whole story. You have a way with words. Not even Shakespear could have written something more heart reching, but beautiful story. You truly are a writer at heart. I wrote a poem on Sess/Kag I would be honored if you read and reviewed it. It's called Why? Well I must go, but please continue your writing. Do not waste your talent. *Bows head in respect* I am not worthy to even lick your shoes! Ok I will stop butt kissing. :-)
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is sooo sad and good and awww.... I loved the line from The Last Samurai. Wonderful job.. I cried it was soooo good and sad... good luck
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 04:51 CST
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Someone please pass me the tissues!! :Picks up one: K, thanks!! There are no words to do this story justice. Majestic-might touch on it; Heart-wrenching- maybe; Beautiful-Absolutely. Wonderful job, really and completely. Thanks for making me cry :)
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!!!!!!!!i cried all the way through!!! this is the best kag/sess i have ever read and all in a oneshot!! ::still cries::i will always luv sesshomaru!!!
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Title: God you're too good a writer!
Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKay, This is my second time reading this and it's all because of you. I went through all your pictures and found your latest one posted and had to go back and see if I was thinking of the right story you wrote, and guess what, I was. May I take this time to tell you that even though I knew what was to come next, you're just too dam good of a writer, that I have actually shead tears twice ( the first and second time I've read this Fic ) because you're too good at writing about the emotion. I totally understood all you wrote about Kagome, her affections and such. And everything. I'm really surprisd that I didn't write a review for this Fic yet so I just have to say, I enjoy reading your work and I hope to see at least one of your fics updated.
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Title: mary.seay@mac.com
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: December 13, 2004 02:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I mentioned in an earlier review that I would read this masterpiece over and over again. Tonight, I did just that, and I couldn't help but reiterate how much this breathtaking fic means to me. I love this work, and I always will. I just got to see the glory that is your related artwork, and it is just as beautiful as the story. The scene is perfectly captured and their expressions are hauntingly beautiful. You are so talented, Yume. Thanks for sharing your gifts.
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Title: 'Catch a falling star...'
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: December 12, 2004 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stunning....One hell-of-a One Shot. Deeply emotional. Sesshoumaru's soul searching takes on a new meaning when you have 500 years to accomplish it. ----Take a bow!
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Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*twitches* Well, what can I say? I balled my eyes out for most of this story. I'm still quite sniffly as I write this. I'm glad Sesshoumaru found Kagome once more after five centuries. To wait so long for her is just... *sighs*
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Reviewed By: Leslee On: December 05, 2004 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there Yume, just thought I'd drop by and tell you that this is my favorite one shot...hell this is my favorite Story!!! You are one of my favorite authoresses.... Anyways great, great great story dear.....well until we type again.....ttfn........IMB
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Title: MissyManda
Reviewed By: MissyManda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im not sure if i've reviewed this story before....but yeah....this is the fourth time i've read it and everytime its made me cry close to the end....i dont know how anyone can write such a touching story...just thinking of it makes me want to cry. you, in my opinion, should be a proffesional writer.well best wishes on any new fics you might decide to start :')
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