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| "_Teamwork_" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] | | Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Reviewed By: Byakugan_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i am blown away by this story you just don't understand! I have never seen anyone else make team seven so close as a squad (Not even Masashi Kishimoto!). I am so mad that it ends though. And for the people that doesnt appreciate a story like this... then the hell with them! I dont seem to understand why people would complain about someone elses story because they dont agree with the character pairings. This is YOUR story and if they dont like it then they dont need to read it or they need to make their own story that suits them. It makes me so mad when people complains because the story dont have this or that. I mean constructive critisism is different but bitching and complaining is a whole other thing... Lol im Rambling so ima gonna cut this short. Another thing i liked is how you presented the characters... They weren't OOC at all. The way you made Sasuke care for sakura and naruto in his ice princessy way (expecially Naruto) really made me laugh, i really enjoyed it. I hope that you do make sequels to this of Sakura having the baby and who the biological father actually is. Anyways great work!
| Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 00:09 CDT
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I just read this story again for the 5th time. I love it. I hope you write more on Teamwork 2 soon.
| Reviewed By: Lady Renyel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, no matter how many times I read this, Team Work 2/3 or one of the side ficlets, I cannot believe how well this fic is wriiten. Normally, I abhor (did I spell that right?) narusaku fictions, mostly because they're horridly written. Your's is narusaku, and absolutely wonderful. It's also narusasu(bwee, rabid yaoi fangirl moment) at the same time, and I would fail so many times over if I even attempted to try and match your greatness. I adore your fics, and I am now going to go (re-)read TeamWork 2 and 3. Have a nice day!^_^
| Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is really good, i wasn't sure at first but i can truly say that i really like it!! This is the best Naruto fanfict that i have read so far.
| Reviewed By: LunayaWolf On: May 02, 2007 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far my favorite Naruto fan fiction that I have EVER read. It is very well written, the characters personalties are captured and detailed, sexy, creative, and fun! I love it and recommend it.
| Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 13:03 CDT
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I have to say I usually don't read yaoi stories (don't know why but...). I really like this story however, it's very well written, and possibly the best story I've read in a long time. Awesome job. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to read the sequel.
| Reviewed By: DriaAY On: February 02, 2007 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Normally I wouldn't read a story with that pairing, but I'm so glad that I'm not close-minded , and I gave it a shot. I LOVED the story! You made a great tale with a lot of emotion behind it. Keep up the good work!!
| Reviewed By: rainmakerslurve On: December 22, 2006 06:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, I'm pretty much in love with this fic. A friend pointed me in the direction of this fic and I'm ridiculously glad she did. To be honest, I don't usually like fics with Sakura in them, or fics with pregnancy. This, however, is simply amazing. You keep the characters realistic while still giving them emotional depth. I mean, Sasuke being tender? You make each of the emotions they express unique to their character. In the first chapter, I was a bit wary with where you were taking this - the Kyuubi in rut, affecting the other two, all that. However, it would make sense that if they all care for one another, if the Kyuubi is playing the phermone game, humans (as animals) would be affected as well. I also really enjoyed the parts where Naruto (and/or others) were communicating with the Kyuubi. Very interesting. This might be the first fic I've read where the author explores that relationship. Very dynamic. The manga goes into the balance the Kyuubi and Naruto have with one another, and this fic only builds upon that. I'm glad to hear that you have sequels to this fic, as I'm eager to read more from this storyline (not to mention all your other fics as well, especially if they display as much IC'ness, depth, creativity, and correct grammar/spelling as this fic). Great work!
| Title: Reply to Syrus from the author...
Reviewed By: Asuka Kureru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 14:40 CST
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Thanks for the review, and i'm glad you appreciate my fic, but, err, no. One: Sasuke's house IS small. When you look at it from the street, it's narrow and squeezed between two neighboring houses. I'm assuming that it's a lot longer than it is large, but that doesn't make it huge, just a decent size. It's certainly not an estate. O_o It's a classical japanese townhouse, in a street that contains at least three or four identical houses. Just look for the floor plans and you'll see. From screencaps, the garden in the back would take at most ten long steps to cross, and a good third of it is almost full with said pond. It's really not as huge as you seem to imagine. I know that's a prevalent misconception in the fandom, but Sasuke was not some nobleman with a castle at his disposal; his family was high-middle-class at most. Two: I'd think Sasuke has a hell of a good reason not to want to consider living in his house ever again. He even has several, and they're debated right and left in the sequels. It would not make sense at this point of his development to even mention the house -- and it wouldn't make sense either for Sakura and Naruto to assume that of course they're going to live in his old house, when they both know he's the most private person ever. u.u Besides, I thought that this scene illustrated their intent to make a life all together in a clear symbolic way. It certainly wasn't about realistic housing possibilities. D:
| Reviewed By: Syrus On: December 19, 2006 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, interesting story plot. Although that thing about Sasuke's house being small; It isn't. He lives in the Uchiha estate. It's a huge feudal-style mansion (palace) with a large mini-villa. There is already a garden and a pond. (with those cool bamboo fountain things that fill with water then tip over and spill it out) watch the anime episodes where Naruto and Sasuke fight at the vally of the End and beat the living shit out of eachother. The first one or two of the sequence are about Sasuke's childhood told in flachback. Around #129 on animefever.org Sasuke's house is tight! Anyway, keep up the good story writing.
| Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
| Reviewed By: Zadya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very entertaining fiction, nice work out of character personalities! I really liked the pairing and dialogues.
| Title: Nice Work!
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not normally a yoai, threesome, or Naruto reader, but I honestly loved reading this story. Very nice job on not using the 'heat' business to create a never-ending NC17 fest. ^_^; It had a very nice plot. The only 'complaint' I had, if you could call it that, was the use of a heat in the first place. Anime fans LOVE 'heats' for their hentai work, so it's very over-used, however, old cliches can be turned original if done properly, I know I LOVE taking an idea that's so overused most people groan when you mention it and twisting it into something completely different. I don't always succeed, but you definitely did here. It didn't drag out the story with long sex scenes, which is usually what the 'heat' is used for. Not that I mind steamy sex-scenes. ^_~ So awesome job, and keep writing!
| Title: Fair
Reviewed By: Ash_Night [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a big fan of the switching every chapter thing, but over all, a pretty good fic.There are a few things that could be worked on, but the characters were, for the most part, believeably in character.The humor level was fair, so the whole thing wasn't a sappy blob, like many on here.Really good.
| Reviewed By: AshNight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good, but...where were the threesomes? oh well, i'll keep reading. This is a good pairing.
| Title: Why'd I give you a 9 out of 10...?
Reviewed By: Advanced_phish On: January 06, 2006 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Probably because it was 5AM...
| Reviewed By: Advanced_phish On: January 06, 2006 05:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really amazing. I sat up all night and read it. Good job.
| Title: naruto
Reviewed By: kouga On: October 30, 2005 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did a good job. you put in the characters like in the books and tv shows.. i could see it in my mind *whoa* well good job!!!^_^
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