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Reviewed By: inulover33 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hum what can I say...... I thought I would never like a fic like this!! But I must say it was not bad at all. I laughed a few times at it and it was really well written. You have an nack for writing fics...keep it up!!
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Title: kakarotkit@lj.com
Reviewed By: Kiyoshi Kitana On: September 22, 2005 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee, I liked this a lot. While I'm more of a yaoi fan, the way you presented this threesome to me made sense, and made me love them together. Though I'll probably never read NaruSaku or SasuSaku, I'll continue to search for NaruSasuSaku because of this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: jounin On: September 02, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the greatest fic i have ever read please keep writing
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Reviewed By: Chimera_Zero17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed each and every bit of it! You've written the best Naruto fic I have ever read. Please continue writing.
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Meh_not_logged_in On: August 22, 2005 19:08 CDT
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THAT WAS AWESOME! Please write more fanfics like that^^ *clings to leg* PULEASE!
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Reviewed By: Wobbly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Such a great story! MY HEART ACHES WITH DESIRE FOR MORE! ^^ That's all I can say....*ashamed* cause I'm to lazy to write details of what I liked...=P But your story is really filling up some space in my heart ;) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Rod:TheBladeStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, ordinarily, I absolutely hate sex-based fiction, specifically M/M and F/F, or even what you did (3-way). However, this is amazing! The sex is there, true, as is the slight YAOI stuff, but it is very tastefully done, not at all, uh, what's the word... brutal like other such fics. You are very talented (that's what I believe, anyways) and I personally think you might have a future as a writer! I found just one slight problem: your mechanics (spelling/grammar) were not very up to scratch. However, such a triviality is easily overlooked. I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!! 48/50
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Reviewed By: Zab Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best Naruto fics I've read. Your characterization was wonderful, and I especially love the way you wrote Kakashi (the fact that he's a minor character in this story makes it even more impressive. Most people don't bother much with getting the personalities right for people who aren't main characters in the fic). The idea of a threesome with team seven makes a lot of sense to me, though I'm glad you at least gave a nod to the fact that Naruto could end up with Hinata. She's often overlooked by people unless they're pairing her with someone, which isn't really fair, considering she's the only child around Naruto's age in Konoha who has always liked and believed in him and didn't care what the adults thought.
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: akelevenjp On: July 19, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Wow! I love this story! This is certainly a combination of hormones I never thought of! and it works great! Thanks for putting it into words!
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Title: Woo-hoo!
Reviewed By: Fenikkusuken [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally enjoyed this fanfic...stayed up way too late reading it, when I was supposed to be actually working for a living. Reading your author's notes, I just can't believe that anybody would be crabbing about the levels of citrus, or your choices for pairings...lighten up, people...it's ENTERTAINMENT! I'm going to hunt up the rest of the Teamwork fics, and give myself retinal burn!
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Reviewed By: lizardlea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 14:27 CDT
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I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish I could write stuff like that. All of the things I write don't go on paper right......**weep..weep** o-well. I hope you continue to write good stories!! :)
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 01:42 CDT
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Wow I really liked this story! I put my IMs, Chats, everything on hold while I read it. Your grasp of grammar and spelling is quite good, especially considering that you do not speak english as a first language. I enjoyed reading about characters that were actually in character in a story that took canon into consideration. I don't think this story could have worked without the threesome. It wouldn't have had the impact. And I really appreciated that you didn't force the characters to go OOC for the sake of your story. I am going to have to nominate this one for featured fanfic, I think. After I get done reading your other stories first ~_^. I look forward to seeing more of yout stuff over here on Mediaminer.
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Reviewed By: Sasu/Naru Lover #? On: April 17, 2005 03:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh....My God.......... *spazzes* That was the most amazing fic ever!!! You wanna' know how great it was? Get this: I'm sick, I have a shit-load of homework to do b/c of all of the school I missed, my parents will kill me if they find out I'm not in bed, and yet I still snuck down here at midnight to read this.....and it is currently 4:23 am. So you can believe me when I say, with all certainty, that this fic absolutely, completely, and totally ROCKED!!! ^^ And if I appear to be a bit too wacky, you now know why. ^___~ Okay, I'm running out of "characters" -.- soooooo...... in short (yeah, right): great characters (expecially with keeping them...well, in character! Oh, and your portrayal of Kyuubi is wonderful -- i love it!!!), great plot, just plain great idea, well written, very funny/dramatic/angsty/sexy etc., etc., etc., you get the picture! Oh, and you have officially made me like Sakura, so congrats! ^___~ I'm gonna' go to bed now.......no, actually, I'm going to go read the sequel to this, or as much as I can 'til my parents wake up, lol. ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 14:27 CST
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I really enjoyed this fic. I *just* got into Naruto, and am trying so hard to find decent fics with Sasuke (i'm adoring him) that aren't incredibly spoiler-ish. Yours is the first that I've found that has really good writing and story and characterisations. Thanks (= I look forward to a sequel!!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 20:43 CST
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Yeeeeeeyyyyy, I love this so much. More give me more more more more more more more more I tell you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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