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"What Friends are For" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Koreangirlme [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2005 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahhh... I love Boys over Flowers! I wonder what the pairings will be XD.
 Reviewed By: Cliodhna Glen [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
Even though it was shorter, I enjoyed the first chapter better. There was more description and development of the scene involved. The second chapter, being largely dialog and one-line sentences, felt flat and undeveloped. There are quite a few grammar mistakes in both chapters, mostly involved with the quotations; a good grammar-oriented beta reader could help with that. Rather than having the dialog do all of the expression, try generating more emotional tension through description and character introspection; I think that will give a more powerful effect like you were looking for. This is a rough start, but it has potential to be developed. :)
 Reviewed By: Queen 4  On: November 11, 2004 10:44 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved you 1 chap. I'm happy to see a Boys over Flowers fic. Please update soon.

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