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Reviewed By: elisea On: December 08, 2005 14:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please continue. i reall yenjoy your stories
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Title: KOnnichiwa
Reviewed By: Inu hanyous 4 ever On: December 08, 2005 05:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH AWSOM CHAPTER I LOVED THIS ONE ALOT POOR IBNUYASHA TO THINK KAGOME DOSN'T LIKE HIM IT'S SO SAD...
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyous 4 ever On: December 08, 2005 05:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH AWSOME GREAT THE BEST EVER WOOT I LOVE THIS STORY TO NO END
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyous 4 ever On: December 08, 2005 04:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEHA GREAT CHAPTER I OVED IT SO CUTE AND FUNNY ! ^_^
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Inu hanyous 4 ever On: December 08, 2005 04:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH AWSOME CHAPTER WOOT I love this strory so much your an awsome writter!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 04:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM! PE Stinks lol great chapter btw your awsome!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 03:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH AWSOME CHAPTER I LOVED IT WOOT!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou's 4 ever On: December 07, 2005 05:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah awsome chapter I loved it, go Shippou I just love it when he teeses Inuyasha about being jelous I just think it's so KAWIIA!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: inu hanyous 4 ever On: December 07, 2005 04:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH NICE FIRST CHAPTER, I heard this was a really good story so I desided to check it out, looks good so far ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 11:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great, i love this story
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Reviewed By: ReasonedTomcat On: November 27, 2005 14:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic, this is the best fanfic I have ever read. I didn't think anything could top Metamorphosis until now, I know you got a lot of flak over that fic it was a shame people were so closed minded about it. I'm getting off topic though, your lemons are good too, i'm not a hentai i mean that when other people put them in there fics they don't always work and as far as i'm concerned there is a diference between sex and making love. Anyone can have sex but instead of fullfilling the fantasys of some strange people you add to the plot. Your writing style is amazing as well everythig fows perfectly and your story lines are original. Anyway I just had to send in a big review for two fanfics instead of this one, since you asked not to have Metamorphosis mentioned I believe... read it long time ago months ago... authors notes are foggy anyway hope that you start another big project soon i'm off to check out your other stories.
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Reviewed By: Shikon no Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 13:52 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I loved your story, it was so well written and you had so many great ideas. I especially loved when Inuyasha said something to the effect of the day Sesshoumaru turns nice is the day I die, and he had no idea how close to the bullseye he was hitting. I know its too late now, but I was so sure you were going to have Kagome and Inuyasha have twins b/c they mated twice on the full moon and they kept arguing over girl vs boy, I thought it would be girl and boy fraternal twins. Again, I love this story, probably the best fic I've read yet. Keep writing! (I know you will.)
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Title: Lol !
Reviewed By: elvinah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 13:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sigh* It continued to log out when i tried to write it on the other Story so it ended up here O.o
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Title: Wow..
Reviewed By: elvinah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg Sue.. I don't think there are other authors who REALLY has captured my interest with a story until now (no offense) i LOVE this story :D It's so cute ^-^ Loved the description Cain made about the peanut butter thinggy ^^ Can't wait to hear more about the 'hanyou-hater' Will he meet Gin? Cain in action maybe? Dunno, but i'm sure what ever you write it will be fantastic! :D It's also nice we won't have to wait many months for a new chapter (again no offense!) Thank you for writing FANTASTIC stories Sue :D ~ Elvinah
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 08:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! This story is....in one word...amazing!! You're writing style is definitely one of a kind. I love your usage of Time and balance...I've only read a handful of fics that achieve this. Your ability to draw on certain emotions kept me captivated the entire time I was reading this...let me tell you..I've been late to work on a number of occasions because I had to finish a chapter...teehee. I'm a huge fan of your writing. Chronicles is definitely my favorite...wow!! I especially loved how you kept each character true to themselves, but weren't afraid to dive deeper into them and find out what makes them tick...again, not too many authors do that, in my opinion it makes the story lack when you don't fully develop a character, but you seem to have achieved that aspect of writing as well. I'll definitely have to look into more of your stories!!
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