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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 19:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it, love it, love it!
| Title: Woah
Reviewed By: Skinz....dont ask On: November 25, 2006 06:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..... Thats all i thought when i first read your story. its just a wonderful Story. Compared to others on this site this one is one of and is the best. I have read it 4 times since i found it and that was 2 weeks ago... Wow..... Your story has AMAZING personality and great charecter development. If was possible If it had come out in book form i definetly would have bought it.
| Reviewed By: MistressKari [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 19:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my sister did that to me once, asked me when she was going to be an aunt and i swear had my jaw not been attatched to my face it would have dropped to the floor
| Reviewed By: hend [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 06:13 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KEEP READING IT OVER AND OVER AND I NEVER GET TIRED OF THIS STORY..ITS REALLY GREAT!!!!
| Reviewed By: MistressKari [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG there should be a number higher than 10 ^ ^' i must say i love all your stuff, wether they be lemon or not and i especially loved this part: "Aw, Sango . . . isn't that sweet? Matching shades of `Purifying-the-Jewel'-red." Turning a speculative gaze on the woman beside him, Miroku blinked a few times before asking, "Say . . . you wouldn't have a jewel in need of purification, would you, my sweet? All for a good cause, you know." in this chapter i couldn't stop giggling, and it's 12.58am here at the moment and everyone is asleep so keeping my giggling quiet was hard to do. KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK
| Reviewed By: Twink2214 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 12:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. I loved it. I've actually read it a few times, hehe. I have a few questions though. I'M IN LOVE WITH NIBORI!! LoL! No, but seriously, I love him. He's mine. He is such a well developed character (so funny!!) that I don't think anyone can NOT adore him. Actually, I was wondering if you planned on writing a one-shot or anything on him. I would love if you would, tehe. I know you said that you wouldn't plan any continuations like you did with Purity, but I just had to ask regardless just cause I'm pretty much obsessed with Sexxhoumaru's eldest. My other question was about the well closing. I'm just wondering how that happened if Kaede was still in the past. I understand that the well only stayed open because Inuyasha had loved ones in the Feudal Era still. But that's what confuses me. Inuyasha loves Kaede as a friend and maybe even as some wierd part of his family/pack. Did she die or something in your fic and it just didn't register in my head or did you just kinda forget she was there? I've done that before in a story, haha. Again, great job. I won't go into detail because then I simply won't stop, but this fic is absolutley amazing. I love the comedic relief you've added in there (Monk-in-Pain red. LoL!), along with the loving fluff like the ear rubs and the secretive looks. The bachelor party was priceless, by the way. I also loved how you pieced everything together, with the diary and Inuyasha's accidental wish in the past. It worked out great, in my opinion. So yeah, I'm gonna shut up now, cause you probably got bored after the second sentence and aren't even reading this. I hope you decide to do a little something with Nibori in your free time, or at least consider it. I understand that you have your own life and family and you can't indulge in the wants of a stupid fangirl. Thanks anyways, and keep writing. My best wishes in any future stories or feats, Drey
| Reviewed By: inu_lover_4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 15:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
womderful story...thank you for writing this...was very surprised and intrigued as I read through this and i loved it...Thank you again and tata!!
| Title: Wow.......................
Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 19:55 PDT
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This took me a long time to read since school started weeks ago but when found this story, I fell in love with it. This has to be one of the GREATEST stories I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story made me laugh, cry, and wish for a sequel. It took me a whole week to have time to read this and I just got my internet two months ago (sad isn't it) so I couldn't read it right away it was updated but again, this is one of the greastest stories EVER and I've read a lot in the summer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are an author of great talent and soon I will read all your stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^
| Title: Oh and another thing...
Reviewed By: IYsMateKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 12:24 PDT
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i'm sooo sad the story ended.....i wish it still were continuing....but you cant change anything without the author,,,,,so please consider making a sequel i SWEAR i will review every CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!! but i still really enjoyed reading it!!!
| Title: Dang!!! i love ur story!!
Reviewed By: IYsMateKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 12:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i am amazed at your writing abilities. your stories rock, this story had me wrapped around it's finger in such a way i read it all in less than 3 days!!! i love it!!! i'm thinking of writing a story, can i borrow your "nose twinkling" idea??? i hope u do let me borrow it..... well PLS e-mail me (my e-mail is in my profile) if you do let me borrow it, well have a nice day!!! hope to keep in contact... PS: i cried in chapter 94-95, my brother and dad (at different times) came into my room and had a what-the-hell-is-wrong-with-YOU??? look because i was crying soooo hard!! lol i was really embarrased!! well PLS continue writing the great storys u write U'LL ALWAYS BE IN MY FAVORITE AUTHER"S LIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (i also cried when sesshy died) Font Color
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 07:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was just... the best IY fanfic I have read to date. I am kinda sad it it over. XD I am gonna go read the rest of your stories now.
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 07:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Uncle. Nice. I wonder who his mother is? I'm hoping you didn't pair him up with Rin, but then who else could it be? And I thought that Tenseiga was at the museum, not Tokijin? At least that's what you said in chapter 23. It's not important, but I was just wondering. Well, I have to say, I have read the first few chapters of this story about three times. Each time I couldn't get past the second chapter. It just seemed... boring. Now I'm glad I kept reading! ^_^ Though I'm not sure what the fascination is with Izayoi's journal and what it could say that's so important (besides the things she may have meant/wanted to say to Inuyasha), but I'll go for it. It's different. I AM wondering who this new bad guy is. And what's his connection to Sesshomaru, Inuyasha, their father and Katosan? Is his hate for their 'love' of humans his only reason to try and kill them? And where does he live? For that matter, where does Katosan live? It might be easier to figure out where this bad guy is if you'd included that (since you said Waku was 'far from home' and Waku, presumably, lives near Katosan's territory). Well, since they have to find Izayoi's diary (I doubt you'd bring it into the story just to have it mysteriously disappear), is it possible that this guy that Waku hates so much could have it? Hmm... I'm sure Shippou'll get his as soon as the deals are off. That should be funny. And I hope you have Inuyasha and Kagome get past this almost-kissing thing. It was cute the first few times, but now... ><
In any case, if you couldn't tell from my rating, I really like this story. Glad it's so long too. All of your stories are long. *gives you a cookie* Onward! ^o^ ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
| Reviewed By: toastyann [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 23:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sure you've heard this a lot, but you're the best IY fanfiction writer I've read. I particularly liked Ryo's story and Chronicles. Anyway, the strongest quality of this story is the way you portrayed the innermost feelings of the characters. Even Shippou, who I probably wouldn't give the time of day if ever I write an IY fanfic, was given ample time in the spotlight. I really liked how there are other themes in the story besides the romance between Inuyasha and Kagome, such as the idea of what a family truly meant. Nice. One thing though, the idea of Shippou calling Inuyasha 'Father' felt a little awkward to me. I think Inuyasha and Shippou share the typical brotherly relationship--you know, Inuyasha's the older brother who bullies Shippou who's the pesky younger brother. Lengthwise, it was a bit daunting. 103 chapters? Whoa. I felt there were some things you could have done without, but the engaging way you narrate your story alleviated that. That's pretty much it, I guess. Keep up the good work! PS If it isn't too much trouble, would you mind reviewing my stories as well? I'd really love to hear what you've got to say about it. Well...if you're familiar with Rurouni Kenshin and/or Fire Emblem 8. Hehe. Thanks. :)
| Title: well, well Sueric, you've done it again
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 17:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have a VERY hard time putting my feelings and reactions into words, even pictures wouldn't help but here i go: ever since the jewel was purified, every time there was a scene with Shippou, i would start bawling all over again. and then the image of that poor baby in Kagome's sweater with the little stuffed dog they got him, that was my breaking point. ironic thing is i read that chapter AT WORK!!! AND THEN when Shppiou was *glup* killed so to say, i swear from when i read that chapter and until the end of this one, i couldn't stop crying this just goes to show that u Sueric are an awesome writer. so awesome that i havent read teh work of another writer since i started the Purity series, in fact im still reading your fabulous work!! cant wait for the Purity 6 updates!!! oh and when exactly is Shippou going to tell his new family everything?? and will Miroku and Sango be able to get thru the "well"?
| Reviewed By: Sayo124 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 03:21 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm. . . I decided to read Chronicles next and (though it took me a long time) I finally have. It\'s a really good story with a thick plot and some humor, angst, suspense, etc. all mixed together. It was hard for me to pick my favorite of your works. . . And in the end I ended up not picking at all--LoL!
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