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 Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in  On: November 07, 2004 21:13 PST
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Just a quick note to say that this chapter was great, very entertaining, amazing, funny, cute, and perfect all in one! Love your work! Take care---Aitu
 Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2004 21:12 PST
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Woo-Hoo!! I'm finally caught up!! I was gone a week and you posted 11 chapters, but I'm finally all caught up! I feel for Kagome, thank Kami I didn't start tossing my cookies the day after - but 8 weeks of it was enough. I also remember telling my mom with the first one - yikes!! We got a 'mom lecture' nearly like Mrs. Higurashi (I was also rather young at the time) So. What is InuYasha going to 'do' for a living??? He's got a soon-to-be-wife and 1.5 pups to support. I don't see him working for his brother - that would be bad. He hates the city - noise, stink, crowds - but wants the best for his growing family. He's in a tough place I think.
 Reviewed By: firehairedpixie - not signed on  On: November 07, 2004 20:44 PST
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:-) That was great!! The great and mighty InuYasha reduced to a twitchy puppy by mama! LOL! I feel really bad for Kagome, when my sister was pregnant w/ my niece she was the same way!! I swear you couldn't even THINK about food, she would know!! I wonder how Sango and Miroku are going to take it? And how long its going to take Shippou to say something. :-) Thanks for updating so quickly!!
 Reviewed By: ThePioden [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2004 20:11 PST
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For some strange, strange reason, this chapter seemed very, very short. This doesn't make sense, because it is longer than a lot of the previous ones. Hmm.... Ah, well. Excellent as usual. I want your talent. I would break into your house and steal it, but then you couldn't finish Chronciles, so I won't. :P
 Reviewed By: LeeLu  On: November 07, 2004 19:29 PST
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So after confronting Kagome's mother, InuYasha lives to see another day...er, chapter. YAY! I'm so excited! But is this doctor actually Katosan? Oh god, that will not go down well with both InuYasha and Kagome. Oh wait. I just realized...Sesshoumaru is gonna be an uncle. Bwahahahah!! I can see it now! "Uncle Sesshy! Will you play with me?" HAHAHAH! Uncle Sesshy...*shakes head* What is this world coming to? LOL
 Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2004 16:29 PST
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wow, you did it again. absolutly wonderful. i tell ya, you found a great song to mix her pain to. funny thing, its always been a song that i saw a part of the series fitting to. i don't know what got to me more though, Kagome's pain over the supposed death of her love or SEsshoumaru's pain. man...Inuyasha better get to SEsshy fast before he kills someone (not that anyone would mind). but hey, one question, how does both SEsshoumaru and InuYasha have tetsusaiga? SEsshy had it in the box...Inu had it on his hip. .....???? wonderful tear jerking chapters.
 Reviewed By: Wandsf  On: November 07, 2004 15:44 PST
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AAHHHHHHHH!!!! I knew you didn't have the heart to actually kill him off!!!! Wonderful chapter. Do we get more explanations next chapter?
 Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2004 14:44 PST
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Yaaay! Sneaky wench won one! Gods, am I dork. Anyyywayyy, I love how you're handling Inu-Yasha trapped in the future. I've read quite a few others in which he ends up trapped in Kagome's time and adapts a bit too well for tastes. Oh, and Kagome tweaking Sessy's AND Inu's cute li'l noses...priceless!
 Reviewed By: ShadowStar65656 not logged on  On: November 07, 2004 14:14 PST
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oooooo.... what is Kagome's mother going to say. She can be really scary, I with Inuyasha on that one.Update sooon!!!!
 Title: not longed on
Reviewed By: ShadowStar65656  On: November 07, 2004 14:11 PST
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 Reviewed By: Sozoteki  On: November 07, 2004 11:34 PST
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*wipes a tear from eye* That was beautiful.
 Reviewed By: inuashasfavegirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2004 11:14 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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whoa.....on the full moon!!!i hope u can make kagome graduate b4 her stomach gets bigger!!!lol....i love all your stories,love ya(as a friend),keep updating!
 Reviewed By: LeeLu  On: November 07, 2004 11:05 PST
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YES! It finally happened!!! I feel bad for InuYasha, though. He is so scared of what Kagome's mother will say. And poor Kagome can't even tell him about that letter. So now that Kagome's pregnant, does Sesshoumaru know anything about this? I mean he knew about everything else that would happen between them, and it seemed like he was predicting the future all the time. Maybe I'm just being stupid, but it just seems like Sesshoumaru knows something. Bah, I'm too into this story. LOL I can't stop loving it!
 Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in  On: November 07, 2004 10:54 PST
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Once again you seem to have out done your self Sue! *throws multiple awards at you!* Such beautifully shaped rhetoric.. I just loved everything about about this chapter. I think my favorite part was the symbolism with the rising pheonix somewhere in the middle of the story? I forgot where that part came into play but it just really caught my attention. YEY! A baby! hehehehe. Poor Inuyasha, afraid of Kagome's mother. Come on Inu-- you just beat death! hahaha And you are afraid of a lil' ole' Mother? Ah--- Once again-- absolutly fabulous job done with this chapter. It was greatly enjoyed! Keep up the great work. I don't know what other phrases of praise to offer you so if you think of any others-- pretend that I said those too! Take care! ---Aitu
 Title: wow
Reviewed By: Jade Catseye [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2004 10:51 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Words can't begin to portray how much I love this fic. I wish they had higher ratings on this thing, because you totally deserve a 50 on everything. Have I mentioned how I love these fast updates? Thank you and keep up the amazing work!
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