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Title: Katosan
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 09:37 PST
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Haha. Inuyasha protecting Katosan...That was so funny to me. Why am I glowing? Heh
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar - Not singed in On: November 14, 2004 06:43 PST
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It's gotten to the big stuff now! I can't wait to see how Inu will act when he finds out. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ThePioden [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 23:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Er, I know I'm ruining the moment, but I might've spotted a plot hole, unless I missed somthing, which I probably did. Now, if we go back, waaaaaaaay back to chapter 24, Nibori says: "Aun-Kagome . . . ." How would he know? InuYasha and Kagome mated in her time, so how would Nibori learn beforehand? Unless... I misread or skipped something. I think it's probably the second one... I tend to do that. A lot. *cough* Yeah... Anyway, I would again like to say how great a story this is, and there are paradox inducing things!!! You have no idea how happy that makes me. *is ecstatic*
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Title: Chapter 95
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 22:53 PST
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Holy cow! …. There just isn't anything else to say
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Title: Chapter 94
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 22:52 PST
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Holy cow! …. There just isn't anything else to say
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Reviewed By: xXInuyasha_luvaXx On: November 13, 2004 17:35 PST
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WOW again such a super good chapter!!! BUT IT MADE ME CRY!!! that was so sad! had that happened i would be bawling my eyes out right now! poor inuyasha...i feel so bad for him...but..how did sesshy get Inuyasha to see what happened since it didnt happen???!?! me confuzled...
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 13, 2004 13:26 PST
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So does this mean that Chronicles has only a couple of more chapters to go? *pouts* Phooey. I wish it could go longer. Ah, but some things must come to an end. I'm surprised that InuYasha was able to remember everything that happened even though they didn't happen. Did that make sense? LOL
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Reviewed By: tessie On: November 13, 2004 12:56 PST
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omg. how awful for shessy. to feel all that pain. at least he had changed the past. thanks goodness. i love this story so much. it's the longest story i have ever read. and the best. tessie
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (not signed in) On: November 13, 2004 12:32 PST
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wow...Is all I can say. I'm a hard bitch, you know, and you can bring me to tears. Good god, this showdown is going to be frightening. Sessy and Inu-Yasha fighting together...is a very effective combenation. *shivers* Can't wait!
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Title: yea, we're bringing back the "NOT!!!" how fun will that be?
Reviewed By: Aitu- signed in.... NOT!!!!!! On: November 13, 2004 09:32 PST
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Ah, the genious that is Sue came shining through in this last chapter. Amazing my friend, simply amazing. I just love knowing all of the details that have been hidden for so long. And I only had to wait for like 90 chapters =P hehe. Well, great job with everything and I can't wait to read more from ya! --Aitu
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Title: *is in awe*
Reviewed By: ThePioden [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 08:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They need to make higher ratings than 10... Wow! another awsome chapter. I honestly don't see how you do it. *shakes head* Just... wow. Truly, truly amazing. I must say, I really loved this chapter. It was both angsty and informative. So, a perfect chapter, in my book. (no pun intended)
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: November 13, 2004 08:07 PST
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The plot of this story is amazing. That you could come up with it and make it all work with no loose ends or stretching of logic is ... astounding! *Basks in your greatness*
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 13, 2004 06:44 PST
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Cool revelation episode! I've got a bad feeling about Kagome and the baby following Inuyasha on his murderous quest. I certainly hope Sesshoumaru tags along. Inuyasha is smart so I hope he is finally figuring out that, while he is still a young and childish hanyou, Sesshoumaru has aged and matured for 500 years and is a different person than the brother he remembers in the past. I think he owes Sess a big thank you (and maybe a hug).
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Reviewed By: NordicaVB - wouldn't let me sign in! On: November 13, 2004 06:14 PST
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Not as bad as I thought...actually it was exactly like I thought it would be. But that's a good thing...I don't think I could have taken something really angsty. But I suppose to Sesshoumaru it was really bad since he actually lived it. I'm glad to see that the brothers are finally becoming real brothers. I love the way you portray their relationship. Well, great job...looking forward to the next installment!
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Reviewed By: rowan_lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 23:36 PST
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Wow...another incredibled chapter. I have a question (non story related)....the picture on your website and on your yahoo group site, what episode/movie is that from? Its a cute picture of Inuyasha.
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