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Reviewed By: tsuki_no_oni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 16:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya! i came here all the way from fanfiction.net, and I have to sing your praises for answering my question without answering me! ^.^ well, since you have completely failed in the killing of any certifiably main charecters thus far, I think that I can live without the fear of a sudden and random inu-type death. heh, for having so much fun killing off inu myself, this giant fic leading up to his demise would simply be slow torture...man, i have to read more horror/drama fics...all this romance is rotting my head.... gah, crazy sister sitting over my shoulder and asking random questions...::glares:: so if this story was not a giant bundle of chapters long, lots of people that I know would have been corrupted with it. you're like the author that sets out to write the gigantic story, but unlike the others you have not randomally disapeared yet! that makes me very happy...even though today has been crap. ah, updates are like the cyber-chocolate...^.^ i'm going to ramble until the little charecter meter reaches the '0'... it's kind of hard keeping up with your crazy updates, though, because i have ten thousand pounds of homework every night and i have to fight for the cable computer...hope your kids don't have teachers from hell like I do... i love this ficlet alot, and i'm going to corrupt lots of people by making them read it, because then i'll have people to ramble on with by me and I won't have to talk your ears...er, eyes off. hope you update soon! Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (not signed in) On: November 16, 2004 16:01 PST
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Wow...wow. Just...errr...wow. I'm freaking speechless. Yesterday I was surprised when Sessy was killed but later on a started thinking about what happened when Inu-Yasha died the first time around: The tetsusaiga no longer rejected Sessy's power. So then I added two and two together and thought, oh...Sessy is *so* not staying dead. I can't say I had an opinion one way or another, not to say I didn't like that you brought Sessy back rather...I wasn't gonna riot if you didn't. I'm a big believer in author's right to choose.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 16, 2004 11:32 PST
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I say we throw a party when you post the epilogue. LOL As long as everyone else brings food and beer, or uh, sake. HAHAHAHA! Hey, I'd go to it! You deserve a party after this story. I've never seen someone write so fast and so good. My friend is actually jealous and upset that he can't write that fast. Rub it in his face a little more! LOL
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 16, 2004 11:19 PST
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hehehehehehehe-- Yet another great chapter. Lot's of funnies-- I enjoyed. In addition to Kitsu Kurasei's ideas about the moat.. Why not strap laser beams to the pirahna's head? Dr. evil any one? hehehe. I can't believe that Chronicles is coming to an end-- it just seems like it can never end. dun Dun DUN! I guess all good things must end-- but at least there are more good things to take it's place. Great job on this story-- it's been amazing. Take care now--- Aitu
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Reviewed By: Brenda (aka babmidnight) On: November 16, 2004 11:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it's nearly over! :( but I've loved it every step of the way! I can't wait to read more. :) later for now....off to school I go. Brenda
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 10:46 PST
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It does. Thank you. I *think* it's a 'hmph' noise he makes sometimes, a very fussy/gruffy one. *shrugs* Now you see why I rarely use it in my own stories, I prefer not to than to do it wrong. *g* --- *grimaces* Good Lord, my grammatic and spelling goes to bed before I do. Sorry about that. --- About this second-to-last chapter, Aw. Loved. The new baby's name was very fitting, though I'm sure Miroku made the same arrangement IY and Kagome did because Sango would have put a bit more resistence. --- *adored* SS and his girls, that was just too cute. Good thing they haven't started to pull on hair... yet. Let's see if SS stays so calm then. He probably would. lol! --- IY bringing the boys to bed was a tender touch. I guess Shippou doesn't mind Kagome's 'strange' smell anymore, does he? *g* Sweet!
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Reviewed By: BK On: November 16, 2004 07:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is magnificent. The story is fun to read and you are so quick to update. You capture the characters perfectly and all your chapters flow together naturally. I am really sorry to see this story ending. I hope you write more in the future.
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 01:22 PST
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Finally. Took me two days to finish this. Now I'm free to go to some Laby fic. I sounds ike it's finished, the king was crowned and the dragon slayed, is there an epilogue or will you wok on a twist for another epic? Personally, I wouldn't mind the second. --- Told you since my reviews at ff.net, despites its shortish chapters, this story just sized me and refused to let go. Quite stubborn. --- As many have mentioned, it is difficult to find an UY that is close to character in longer fiction. At first I thought it was plagued by 'Keh' and 'wench', but even then I had to keep reading and the last chapters IY was more... IY for me (note: his famous 'keh' is something difficult for me since I watch the Spanish version and have never actually heard him say that.) --- Oh, forgot to tell you, thank GOD I/K's son is male, because toherwise the brothers would have been fighting for another millenium about whose little girl was that prettier. Lol!
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 01:06 PST
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Ch97. You didn't. - Did you? Oh my. -
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 00:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch94. Okay, NOW you've made me cry. I barely sniffled when you killed Shippou, but IY's desperation in the flashbacks of the first timeline is so tangible, it tugs at my heart. Incredible. Poor Myouga, to have found out like that that he wouldn't make it to the next millenium! Oh, and I love the last part. *g* Are the brothers in denial, or aren't they? lol!
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 00:24 PST
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Ch93-94. Ah. Cherchez la femme, huh? 560 years of angst and Izayoi was at its center all the time. Heartbreaking.
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 23:02 PST
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mid 87. I just remembered. Myouga was the one who insisted to search for the journal. Sesshoumaru will be more than happy to cover it." "I will?" Sesshoumaru drawled. Leikizu shifted her gaze to the side. "Yes, you will." His answer was a long-suffering sigh. LMAO!
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:54 PST
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Ch86. *sigh* Pretty. Fluffy is good. I don't know if I should be more amused at the prospect of Shippou being explained how his newest sibling came to be or at IY's fear at Kagome's mother.
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:39 PST
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Ch85. Now that final thought was funny. *G* Anyway, that was just evil. Poor Kagome. Poor Shippou. Poor Kagome. And we *still* don't know what happened in the first timeline. *taps foot against the floor* Oh, the injustice! The angst! The tears! Hm. Methinks I'm in love with you.
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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:31 PST
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Ch84. Oh cliffie. Pretty cliffie. *pets the cliffie* How is it that past-Myouga knows he won't be in the future? Good reason to make M/S move to the future, quite the bit of angst, though. I got scared there for a minute. Poor Kaede though. Oh well.
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