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Reviewed By: Yushi On: March 03, 2005 17:50 CST
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Wow!!!!!!!!!! That was the coolest! And you shouldn't worry about your grammar. You are better then some other poeple I've seen. *cough cough* Definitely good. But I think InuYasha deserves a happy ending after all he has been through. Maybe you could make a chapter where he goes to Kagome's time... *hint, hint*
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Reviewed By: Holli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 13:52 CST
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*claps* This is an idea I've never read before and I really enjoy what you've done with it so far. Inuyasha was very well written. I'll really be looking forward to an update!
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Reviewed By: inu-kano-kusa-momi(2 lazy 2 login) On: January 24, 2005 19:42 CST
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awww.... that was so sad...it was good but it was sad...neway..update....update....update
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Reviewed By: bigfanofyours On: December 27, 2004 20:18 CST
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that is so good and sad...update...update...cool I actually am the first I think to read this chapter...hehe..well..update..
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Reviewed By: inu-kago-kusa-momi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 17:11 CST
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that was awesome....update soon...you are now officially one of my favorite authors....update..update....
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Title: Mou Ichido Dake
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story alot good job so far.Keep up the good work.update real soon ok.
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know, you suck. Gomen, but its true. Anyway, i shall now do what i threatened last review...UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!! Ok, sorry, but still!!! I like it!! hmm...lets see...how can i make it so you get more more reviews?? *ticks off ways with her fingers* e-mail the fic to Rindesayu-chan, yell at Matt some more, e-mail the fic to Sashiko-chan, e-mail the site to Ian, yell at all my fans, put links in my fanfic, e-mail to Devan, e-mail to Olivia....WHAT ELSE??? Oh, e-mail to guardianofstyx...he still hasnt told me his name!!!! Oh well. I will do all of that, and you will get more reviews, I hope. Hmm...now i will read your other fic, and then i will go back to thinking about Trigun--especially Million Knives and the butterflies...*sniff* I HATE HUMANS WE SUCK!!!! WE ARE SO GODDAMED STUPID!!!!!!!!! GOD I HATE US!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is killing me, you know. "I remembered." ?!?!?!? grrrrr. I must find out more...must read next chapter!!! and then, even though i have absolutly NO RIGHT (I am apologizing ahead of time, and i will apologize again next review) i will be like all those reviewers are to me. I shall do something i try to not do very often. you will know what it is, because i will be yelling apologies after i do it. That is how you will know.
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*screams* I DID IT AGAIN!!!!! I WENT TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! BUT I DIDN' T READ A WORD I SWEAR I DIDN'T I AM SO SORRY PLEASE FORGIVE ME PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL TRY TO NOT LET IT HAPPEN AGAIN!!!!! ONLY JUST FORGIVE ME PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! ...i dont get it. I NEVER act like this. What the fuck is wrong with me, eh? Its your fic, i swear it. I just read about the butterflies!!! *tears well up* its so sad...i guess your story is just so god damned happy by contrast that i can't help but act like this. hmm...it will be tomorrow in nine minutes. eight, now. isnt that amazing? i should be asleep. I am sick. I should be resting. But instead i am glued to your fic, obsessed with making sure i review every single chapter. and when i am done with this fic, what will I do? I'll tell you. I'll be reading your other fic. but i will probably have to read it again, because by then my vision will be verry blurry indeed............
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
stoopid cliffy. ah well. I noticed i've been asking many pardons latley. None this chapter!! Only four left, and then i shall be waiting for the next chapter. *smiles* oh, and you might want to check out this site: http://www.linsdomain.com/Otherworld.htm
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrrrrr......YOU HAD BETTER MAKE SESSHOMARU-SAMA NICE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!! Oh!!! Gomen, gomen!! I should not try to boss you, i am so sorry!!!! Please forgive this one!!! Please???
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! I DID IT AGAIN!!!! I'm sorry!!!!! I really am. I am trying so hard to do this right!!! I have never done this before, most of the time i just read the whole fic and then review, i am trying!!! please forgive me!!! please?? i can't give you puppy eyes because Fenris Fenrir is a wolf god. I have pointy ears and a tail, just like Koga and Ayame. Actually, I dont have a tail. I have a tale, but no tail. I do have pointy ears though!!!
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha! This time, i did not forget. heehee, i can't believe it. Chibi??? Hahahaha!!! Oh well. i like the time-honored line, too. "May i touch your ears?" *giggles, then regains composure* Gomen!! I dont like ppl to see me giggle too often. I am not usually so happy. See what effect your fics have on me?? Now all my friends will be afeared to come near me, and it's all your fault.
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I CLICKED ON THE LINK TO THE NEXT CHAPTER WITHOUT WRITING A REVIEW BUT I DIDNT READ ANYTHING I SWEAR I DIDNT!!!!!!! Please dont be mad!!! Please?? AWW, you're so cool. ^_^
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Reviewed By: fenris fenrir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:10 CST
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Ach, so good. I wish i could right like you. I have more chapters on my fics...except the one for my cousin...but i like yours better. Ah, human nature. "I am my own worst enemy." NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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