|"Cliches" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ]|
| Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 04:58 CDT|
I have one on someone. It's the 'be careful what you wish for' one: 'Be careful what you wish for, what you wished for will shove you out of your office window'- Gozaburo Kaiba. Update PLEASE!!!!!!!
| Title: Hi!|
Reviewed By: Sylvia Viridian On: December 09, 2004 22:01 CST
Hey! I reviewed this on ff.net, but I forgot to mention something in my review: on deviantart, in my signature, I have the slogan "when life gives you lemons...read them!" Hee hee hee! Anyway, I've read this to my sister, and we both agree it's amazingly cute!
| Title: Must . . . help . . . progression of . . fiction!|
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 10, 2004 21:06 CST
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Very cute this time. Hopefully the suggestions I'm about to make will be useful (nope, that's not likely -_-;): "Now that's the pot calling the kettle black.", "Things aren't always what they seem.", "What goes around, comes around.", "To each his own.", "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.", "An apple a day keeps the doctor away.", "Power corrupts, and absolute power corrupts absolutely." (Can't remember where this one is from, but a famous parody of it is, "Corruption empowers, and absolute corruption empowers absolutely."), "You can't teach an old dog new tricks.", "You can lead a horse to water, but you can't make him drink." That's all I can think of for now. Until next update!
| Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 19:37 CST|
Overall Rating: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
lmao!!!! this is hilarious!!!
| Title: Drat that other Site|
Reviewed By: MotherCHOWGoddess On: November 01, 2004 09:21 CST
Did you even get to read my 'looney tunes' review before the evil FF'ers booted you? Pffft! Go Yami! Hit those lemons with a Penalty Game! Bwhahahahaha! (pulp, seeds and fragments of peel go flying... um, just how DO you go about Mind Crushing a piece of fruit (oh shut up, Pegsy! *gets out the duct tape*)
| Reviewed By: OrigamiBlaziken On: October 31, 2004 20:29 CST|
That made my night. XD Very amusing, and everyone's reactions are perfect for them! Maybe you should do the cliche "A penny saved is a penny earned." >:3
| Title: ROFLMAO!!!!!|
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 05:49 CDT
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
OMG! I was laughing hysterically from Yami's line down. Go, make more Clichés, I'll try to think some up to help. But dear Ra that was funny as hell. . . Penalty gaming lemons *Falls over laughing again.* "Beggars Can't Be Choosers", "If Wishes Were Horses, Then Beggars Would Ride" (granted there are some more cynical versions of this one.), "Haste Makes Waste." I wish you good luck with continuing your stories. *Gives optional huggle*