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Reviewed By: Yin Yang Child On: June 27, 2005 13:46 CDT
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I've been reading your story for some time now. It's very well written and captivating. I look forward to the next chapter. ~Darkfire~
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 12:33 CST
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Okay, Miru is like a spoiled little kid that wants what she wants when she wants it? At least, that's the way I see her right now. And Hiei trying to go through what he does and doesn't feel for Kurama ... made for a good chapter ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 16:52 CST
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yet another awesome chapter. i really like this one with all that we found out. & Miru's power is great!! that was a great idea to use that! i love how you get into the minds of each character in order to write what they feel & think among other things. it makes this story all the better. so, keep up the good work! update soon!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 22:20 CST
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WOOT! Updates! You've taken the story several steps farther with these lsat updates and it still makes for a good read. Keep up the good work! btw ... heck of a place to end that one ... just starting the fight =\
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 07:47 CST
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Man ... I hate catching up with authors! Read this all night long ... just could not get away from the keyboard without finishing this story! FYI ... there haven't been THAT many stories that have grabbed AND held my interest THAT MUCH, and I've been reading these things for ... several years now. Great story. I'll be glad to see the updates on this one!!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 (too lazy to long in) On: January 28, 2005 23:08 CST
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great chapter. really, i loved it! Hiei finally got through to Kurama & they found out about Miru. add that to getting a clue to where everything will really begin, this chapter accomplished a lot. oh, & i loved your little gingerbread man thing. it was really cute. can't wait 4 your next chapter. this story just keeps getting better.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea, another chapter! Another kind of fear for Kurama, Hiei's really gotten himself fully entwined in his own web of almost deceit, while the two remaining detectives detect. All does not always work out happily, and there has been much foreboding throughout your marvelous story. I, however, will still hope for the best, and more chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 (not logged in) On: January 19, 2005 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter for you. i've surely been waiting to see Yusuke & Kuwabara's reactions to Hiei & Kurama. and i for one am happy with the shounen-ai-ness of this story. it's not too much for the story to get all lovey-dovey & lose the plot, but not too little that it's barely noticable. keep the level just the way it is. oh, & update soon.
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Reviewed By: kikira-san On: January 18, 2005 22:18 CST
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I'm insanely scared out of my mind now. I want everyone to be happy now. sniff. Gah that last bit with Kurama and Hiei and then the stuff with Yusuke and the authors note! the authors note! my toes curled! you're going to do something not happy aren't you? *cringe* Why does this have to be such a good story that I can't stop reading it?
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Title: w00h00
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 10:14 CST
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EXCELLENT EXCELLENT CHAPTERZ!!!!...KEEP'EM COMIN'!!!! ^o^!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hieis Shadow (too lazy to sign in) On: January 09, 2005 19:04 CST
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I love this fic very much! I would have commented a long time ago, but MediaMiner was being a butt! Anyways, awesome story! I especially love the Kurama and Hiei interaction
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 16:37 CST
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One thing...in the summary six years were mentioned. That means that none of them would still be in school unless Kuwabara and Yusuke went on to graduate school.
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Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have been reading this fic for the past cupple of hours or so and i must say i just cant stop reading it, tho i cant help buh wunder "where is the realtionship for kurama and hiei?" about 19 chapters into it i start to get a feel of it, but yet it is still very friend to friend. When kurama asks do you love me and he agrees, i am not sure wheater to take it as a freindly liking or not, so mayb yu can help me out here? other than i wish for their luvv (it sed yaoi ryte lol) to come about, i enjoy your fiction very very much and itd b wunderful if yud update =] i am dying to find the ending to this all = Fox
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 19:17 CST
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another great chapter. Kurama is really starting to freak me out now. he's seemed to come out of the mood swingy stage, but now he's in a 'the-real-world's-a-bitch' type phase. very warped world you've created here. i love it! :) i really hope Hiei can finally get some answers out of Kurama next chapter. i'm sure we'd all like to know what's really going on with him. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. i've been reading it on e-fiction.org at first, but now i'll start reading it here. it's kinda scary, actually, how Kurama is losing it. he's always so stable, it kinda throws everything else out of whack. but i love how Hiei is taking control when it's needed. even Yusuke's learneed enough to make a good diversion. they've all grown so much *crying* (just joking) but great story, update soon!
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