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Title: Nice Work!
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 05:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very unique - and very well done - piece. It was excellently done and must have been just a tad difficult to get Inuyasha where you want him to advance the story with a demon who doesn't talk and can't tell him anything. I enjoyed this story very much, though as a different person I always pictured Kirara a little differently, but your version of her is very realistic and well done. Awesome job.
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Title: OMG!! ur fanfic rules!
Reviewed By: kirara_purr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i loove Kirara! i am a cat fan!! i loved ur story, it rules!! can i do a fanart of it? pweaase? can i write 'the hunt for the ears'? pweaaase? can i humbly ask the great u to take a look at my meager fanfic 'Off-set Life'? pweaaase?
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Reviewed By: Lady Bloodaxe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked this! Very creative!
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Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an okay story, but that last sentence made it all worth while. (just kidding!) I love this fan ficcie, I love 1st person, and I love Kirara!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 01:44 CDT
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now i feel i need to write more. but it was amazeing. the discription and detail! and you did stay incharacter normally i would ask to write the follow up but i doubt that i could write half as well as you. i am a detail freak so this story was like a breath of fresh air. so many people no-longer honestly write time comsumeing awe-inspireing detailed descriptive talented stuff any more. you on the other hand write that well and a non-dangerous bag of chips. Ja Ne! ( would you be willing to once-over my fic [pain don't mean a thing]?)
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was wonderfully writen. perfect detail and i think it was perfectly in character. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: misslady [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 19:00 CDT
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This is my altime favorite story hun!! Very well written! You got the characters down good too!!
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Reviewed By: Aila On: July 04, 2005 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I'm LMAO!!!! Kilala is soooooo funny at the end of this fic, how did you come up with the idea to write something from her pint of view? That was really good, I hope you can write more stuff that cool in the future. I'll be looking forward to it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kireiko On: July 02, 2005 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story indeed. Loved how you portrayed Kirara. Wonderful impersonation of her character. You did well, keeping her in perspective. I loved how you portrayed your story. Seemed heartfelt and nicely descriptive. I also loved how you had Inuyasha interacting with Kirara. Barring a few typo's and syntax, it was a well written piece, you should be glad. It was a truly enjoyable story. Keep up the great work. ~Kir
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 23, 2005 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing! I love Kirara. She doesn't get nearly enough attention.
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Reviewed By: Misty_and_Ash On: June 10, 2005 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it I'm young but can tell when those who have talent and you are one of them!
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: tears_of_sapphire On: June 02, 2005 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! You're a great writer! Keep up the good work. I can't wait for your next fic. It truly was amazing. It made me realize that Kirara really was a very smart cat. ^^ 100000/10 If I could rate it that, it'd definately have been rated that.
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Title: ryokoyuy1@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Ryoko Yuy (offline) On: June 01, 2005 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you did a terrific job; I can't remember the last time I read such a well-detailed narrative such as this. I couldn't move from my seat the entire time I was reading this; it was captivating. ^_~ Kudos to you!
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Title: ffrg review
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 11:55 CDT
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I have read this before now on a recommendation of a friend, a very interesting piece of work. Thanks for submitting for review! You have so much freedom and fun to explore with Kirara and I agree that she is likely a very intelligent creature. You gave her a distinct character and you stuck to it and that's probably the most impressive thing you did. Your descriptions are good, as is your action if I recall correctly. I don't mean to sound like I'm belittling any of your writing, because I'm not--I really enjoy it, but your ability to keep Kirara within the boundaries of the characterization you created for her is just wonderful. You spelled violet wrong the first time you used it... a bit of an after thought there, sorry. Anyways, thanks for sharing your piece and good luck in your future endeavors.
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Title: Ch 2-3
Reviewed By: Aquamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 20:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
(And now I'm just going to review the rest of your fic as a civilian.) Not only was this entertaining and suspenseful, but the characters also grew a little bit. (It's not everyday Kirara gets some character development.) Both Kirara and Inuyasha seemed to come out of this with a little better understanding and respect for one-another. This story makes me wonder why I haven't read more Kirara-centric fics. This was awesome. I just have one suggestion. You might want to fix this from Chapter 2: "I had to get to camp; my mistress needed warned. The camp needed roused." I think you mean, "My mistress needed to be warned... needed to be roused." Other than that, I didn't notice anything that needed fixing. You're a great story teller! ~ Aquamarine
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