| "A Grim's Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 118 ] |
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Title: Roguesmile
Reviewed By: Smiles888 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hi so I am an avid lover of crossovers and this fic happens to be a prime example of what I look for. It takes two universes which have almost nothing in common and molds them together as if it had been that way all along. I can't wait to read the next chapter when you get it up.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 13:33 CDT
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O_O; Nightseer disappeared. Where'd she go? Disappointed... wanted an update if she felt up to it. OH well. Will just have to wait.
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 00:28 CST
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great chapter, wonder what yusuke's energy will do to harry, any unforseen side affects or major alterations. why would genki be troubled that harry is having trouble with only him in his mind and not the link to voldemort? to what extent will this harrys powers have grown by the time he gets back to school at hogwarts compared to the original book harry's powers? when he gets back to hogwarts how many of the special things will he be taking? how much wandless magic will harry be using on a regular basis once he gets to hogwarts? GREAT CHAPTER, but what took you so long to update, lack of ideas, waiting for the new book to come out, a serious infection of the hands, or *shiver* school?
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 10:16 CST
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Most amusing thing. I opened up your fic to the new chapter and down at the bottom was an add for "Half-blood Prince"! Poor Kurama! He still has pink hair. And, yes, that is a wacky dream harry had.
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 01:16 CDT
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sorry man haven't been reviewing a lot lately but, i came, i saw and i'm getting more interested about what is going down. have you considered taking a leaf or two out of the new harry potter book when it hits the shelves some time soon. but dude keep writing you'll get to the malfoy bashing sooner or later, i can feel it. p.s. Harry needs something extra to give him a more realistic feel, i think its getting close but something is missing.
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Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 14:54 CDT
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Woo! You updated! ^^; Wonderful chapter! ^^ And writing a Hiei/Kuwa fic isn't all that brave, I've read some good ones. And I managed to finish my sequel... >>; Now my reviewers are badgering me for an update on my Koenma/Kuwa fic. Ne, anyway good luck with your finals (I've already had mine *cringe*) and I'll be waiting for the next update. ^^
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh ^_^ On: May 11, 2005 19:17 CDT
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LOVE THIS!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 16:24 CDT
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I don't have much to say. I like the fic, and update again soon. I don't really have any probs at the time or questions, so, I guess I'll go before I start rambeling. ja!
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Reviewed By: khaosfire (not logged in) On: May 11, 2005 16:20 CDT
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Heya. Interesting story. I do have a major nitpik I want to point out. You're doing very well, but there are things that a spell-checker can't fix - like to vs. too. Sometimes your sentence structure is very awkward. For example: "Whatever happened couldn't have been bad or she would've heard about it yesterday but the fact that his scar reacted at all was alarming" Phew! What a run-on sentence! Try breaking it up, maybe like this: Whatever happened couldn't have been bad. She would've heard about it yesterday if it was. Even so, the fact that his scar reacted at all was alarming. Or even: Whatever happened couldn't have been bad - she would've heard about it if it was - but the fact that his scar reacted at all was alarming. You might want to read it out loud as you proofread it. This helps to point out silly mistakes and awkward writing. Also, do you have (or have you considered getting) a beta-reader? Nope, no problems with the pairing. Great story. Keep writing as you will!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Huh ........ I'm guessing that the bad reaction was simply because Yusuke is part demon? It makes sense, because Harry is completely human. Isn't he? Sooooo ...... who's gonna go? I guessing Kurama, seeing as how Kuwabara is not the type to be able to keep his mouth shut properly. So if Kurama take the job, he'll still be able to visit his mothe regularly, what with botan and all. Though I must say I would have LOVED the idea of Yusuke as a teacher. After all those times he skipped schooll!!!! And no argument here on the Mother-hen thing. Heh heh Kurama with PINK hair, send me a picture PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 14:00 CDT
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Altogether now ... "WE LOVE YOU NIGHTSEER!!!!!" An update!!!! YAY!!! *sobs* I'm just soooooo HAPPY!!!! GREAT! GREAT!! GREAT!!!! GREAT!!!!! GREAT!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay i think you get the message now........^.~
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Reviewed By: DevilKitsune^-^' On: May 09, 2005 18:47 CDT
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I love the story, it's hilarious. Please, PLEASE hurry up and update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gets annoying after awhile!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes, I always do this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! Signed- DevilKitsune ^-^'(they know me on ff.net)
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Reviewed By: DevilKitsune^-^' On: May 02, 2005 17:26 CDT
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I love the story, it's hilarious. Please, PLEASE hurry up and update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gets annoying after awhile!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes, I always do this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! Signed- DevilKitsune ^-^'(they know me on ff.net)
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Reviewed By: MikoStar(nsi) On: March 24, 2005 23:42 CST
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I have to tell you that you will lose at least one reader if this goes slash. Which is a shame, because it is really the best YYH crossover I have read -- ever. What is it with women wanting to write about men getting it on with other men? I just don't understand it.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 10:57 CST
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*Huggles NighSeer* That was great! I can't wait for you to update. you have opened my eyes to a whole new world of ficdom. I never tried a nonanime crossover before this. So I will be checking out other fics to see what there might be. Thank you muchly!
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Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thank you! *glomps NightSeer* Oh Thank you! The little images of Yusuke and Harry were starting to get annoying... Especially when I'm trying to plan out my next Hiei/Kuwa fic. *grumbles* Anyway, yes I enjoyed getting a glimpse of what the others are doing. I found it especially funny that George decided that Hermione was cute when she was mad. ^_^ And I'm really curious as to what Hiei and Kuwa did. Update when you can. Later!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 20:21 CST
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^-^ Ah! Cute chapter! At least.. Yes, it was quite cute. Is that going to be one of the pairings? George/Hermoine? Or am I just reading too far into the 'she's cute when she's mad' thought? Eh, I probably am. I have the oddest feeling George is really getting a kick out of apparating people with him. As long as they don't expect it. Heh, the latest prank spree? I can't wait to see who is the cause of that and all the effects there were. ^-^ 'Till next time!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234(nli) On: March 04, 2005 19:18 CST
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ooohh! what did kuwa and hiei do?! you must tell in the next update!
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Reviewed By: khaosfire (not logged in) On: March 04, 2005 15:06 CST
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Great story, fun to read.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh didn't log in On: March 04, 2005 14:07 CST
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I also agree with Shakeval!
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh didn't log in On: March 04, 2005 14:05 CST
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Please! I want more!!! (By the way... May I assume that it was Kurama who Lupin was talking to?
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 02:59 CST
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this was a pretty good chapter but i was wondering when harry would be going back to hogwarts and shocking everyone with all his new abilities and powers that make him look like some super wizard or even classified as a nature mage or some thing like that i want to see surprise i want to see violence and pain delt to malfoy and all the twits that have a go at harry. come on i know your a good writer, show us what you got. p.s. hope this finds you in good health
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh never logs in On: March 02, 2005 16:33 CST
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NO!! NO NO NO NO NO!!! Don't ruin the fic with a Harry/ Kurama romance!!! It's fine how it is. But I do have a suggestion... If you really want to have K/H... You could do a second version where they do have something going on. That way you please both the pro H/K and the anti H/K viewers!!!!!
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Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 22:31 CST
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Now you've got me worried... Just what are Hiei and Kuwa up to? And I'm just as curious as Kurama about the roses. Hmm... Any pairing you eventually come up with is fine with me. I just enjoy reading the story... But that doesn't stop little images of Yusuke and Harry from dancing around in my mind... An active imagination is not always a good thing.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 21:50 CST
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Moron Hill? Sounds fun! Hm, I can't wait to read more. SO I'm curious now, what was so important about Botan coming? Their obviously was something important, as Kurama said something about him regretting missing Botan... or something... ^.^ 'till next time! I have officially given up on the quest to find out Harry's spirit animal, or soul form... or whatever. I will wait till you reveal it. Patience is a virtue.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas Gurl (not logged in) On: March 01, 2005 17:40 CST
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Yay!!! I hope you can update again soon. I can totally forgive you for taking a long time to update, cuz I'm still recovering my computer. I failed divination so...
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 03:12 CST
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this is a pretty good story i'm looking forward to some more chapters, maybe some malfoy beating in the next couple of chapters. keep going your doing real good with this story
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 19:17 CST
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YOU MUST UPDATE! I MUST READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!
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Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If not a fox, maybe a cat? I can see Harry as a cat. And I have no problems at all with a slash pairing... It tends to be one of my obsessions. *sweat-drops* Anyway, I think my favorite part of this chap was when Hana was trying to attack Kurama. Yep, much cuteness. Until next time.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 19:16 CST
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Fine... You forced me to this, but I'm randomly choosing an animal. Cat. Why not? It seems to fit him, and I dunno... *sigh* Frustarating and amusing at the same time. Hm... if you're gonna do a pairing, I dunno... That's it. I'm curious, was I the one asking if you were gonna add another series? I was just playing my favorite game- spot other anime influences in a fanfic. It just amuses me. Can't wait to read you next update! After all, Harry's learning how to manually pick a lock... which I find amusing. d a
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