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 Title: OH NO!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 17, 2005 03:09 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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At the cab part i went AAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGG OH NO OH NO OH NO OH NO SHE DID'T aaaaagggggg SHE DID!!!!!! thanks for stoping my heart LadyOrion
 Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2005 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Boy, I'd love to hear some of the arguements that Inu-Yasha and Sessy are having. They must be glorious! LOL. Beefcake calender *covers face* By the gods, I'm blushing for the poor dear boy. Well, at least they'll have one pretty month (I've found that most beefcake calenders are a bit too...beefy....).
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: January 16, 2005 14:41 CST
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Nice picture. I'm very curious about the missing files. Seems like someone is setting Toga's c-worker up to fail. Is it to force him to help her out, corporate espionage, a personal vendetta against her? Can't wait to find out.
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: January 16, 2005 11:10 CST
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"..blow an ass gasket.." LOL, I love that saying when it is as Sess expense!
 Reviewed By: Sari15 NSI  On: January 16, 2005 08:49 CST
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Wow....when they fall, they fall don't they. I can't believe he might just let her take the picture for him....and he was just so sweet to her trying to get her mind off of everything. She's had a rough time with all of the stuff going on with her biological parents. I only hope that everything turns out okay, it would be hard for anyone to deal with meeting them.
 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2005 00:31 CST
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Did I hear right? He has offically agreed to do the calendar...hehe. Sierra has used her powers of persuasion for the good of...drooling fangirls! LoL --- Jeeze, much as I want to just dismiss the seemingly conniving Kari, it looks like someone is sabotoging her at work. Once is bad enough and can look like an accident, but twice is more than coincidence. Now the question is "Who?" and "Why?" And how far is Toga going to be dragged into it? --- Great chapter.
 Title: =( I did too review the last chapter... look below =)
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2005 23:54 CST
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Poor Sierra... she just not getting her happily ever after is she? I'm glad she gets to do the photo shoot for Toga though, I bet that'll be tons of fun!! Aunt Gome called... I wonder when Daddy is going to make a reappearance...
 Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2005 11:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Such a hard place to be. I cannot claim to know what Sierra is going through specifically, but I do know that having that much emotion bottled up within oneself is hard... very hard. Toga is being wonderful support for her and that's all she really needs for now. She's too emotionally unstable to think about forever, ne? Ahhh, the beach... AND a camera... I'm sure Sierra will be nicely distracted in the next chapter or two. I wonder what's going on back in Tokyo? What's Sesshoumaru up to? And how are the twins misbehaving? And isn't Huntington's disease a genetic disorder?
 Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2005 17:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Now I'm lost again.. or maybe it is still. It is still early in this "Meet the Parents" thing. I'm sure more will be discovered. I see that you have a book in your story again. Books in your stories always seem to provide the answers...
 Reviewed By: QamarNoor [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2005 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
This has become one of favortie fanfics, i literally drink them in anytime I see a new one! lol I really love toga and sierra, they are excellent characters! I really wonder what is in sierra's past...or when toga and her will actually become 'mates'.
 Title: ha ha i mock you mmorg by not signing in =)
Reviewed By: angelfish007  On: January 12, 2005 16:16 CST
Comment/Review:
::wallows in the angst:: ahhh i love the angst as much as the fluff =) poor Sierra... i can understand her mixed and hard emotions... i can't relate directly bc i'm not adopted, but i can understand her feelings, it has to be hard... you know, i'm sure Toga could find MANY ways to get Sierra's mind of things =) ::hehehe, petting the puppy! chasing the cat!:: =) ... how long will it take Sierra to get to reading that book? i am really interested about her past ... also, will she see her parents again? is this disease genetic? ahhh sooooo many questions! lol cant wait until next chapter! (this one wsa terrificly written as always, especially capturing Sierra's emotions) =)
 Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2005 16:01 CST
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Very sweet, very sad. I love how you do that in your writing, mix sadness with beauty....
 Reviewed By: aitu-- not signed in  On: January 12, 2005 14:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm. In response to Toga's final thought.. I know a few things you could do that would keep Sierra's mind off her adoptive parents... *wink wink* The questions is: will you take my advise and do them???! Oh i love this story, yes I do, and I am back to singing, in my review. Can't wait for more! Take care SUUUUUUUUEEEEEE!!! ---Aitu
 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2005 14:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Sierra has a heavy load right now and Toga is taking the perfect stance...lovingly supportive. Her Rock. *sigh* Yeah...I think Toga on the beach with lots of skin showing will be a big distraction for her. If that dosen't get her mind off of things, she's brain-dead. LoL, great chapter!
 Reviewed By: Akihanah(too lazy to sign in)  On: January 11, 2005 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww, kawaii. I think Kari is out to get Toga. She may be a good person, but she has the tendancy to kill any romantic anything going on between Sierra and Toga. I think its funny that Sierra want s Toga to go onto the beefcake calendar. Most girls i know would have serious issues with their boyfriends doing something like that. I've never had a boyfriend, so i can't really say. I think the people in this story are just really really really hentai. That, or I'm just sheltered.
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