| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 13:25 CST
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Aww, just when I was thinking that I needed that safety belt to keep me from floating out of my chair this time...Toga goes and cancels on Sierra. What a let-down. Hmm...I guess that Toga's just gonna have to make up for it! LOL ----On a side note, I came across a picture by 'YanaGoya' of a "Black-Haired Sesshoumaru" at deviantart - www. deviantart. com/ view/ 6426978/ (just cut&paste and remove the spaces.) I was thinking that this is kinda what Toga would look like. Mmm...yummy! ----Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 11:23 CST
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I can't believe Sess took that telling off without 'doing' something.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 11:18 CST
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OH NO!!! Something bad is going to happen. I just know, lol. Gotta love to hate all those simple misunderstandings, haha. Myabe Sierra won't find out about Toga having dinner with some chick who she doesn't know and there won't be some fight where Toga has to convince Sierra otherwise, haha. In other news, I'm surprised that the site will let me review again! Who knows how long that will take. Hmm, MAYBE Sexxhourmaru is setting this all up and when Kagara finds out she's gunna be pissed! haha Hmm, maybe Toga should get Sierra a nice pretty ring that comes in a blue box,in a Tiffany setting, hehehe. Just a thought. I think it would go over big. Anywho, fabulous chapter, as always, Sue. I loved it to death. Can't wait for more!!! Bye bye and happy christmas eve! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter, as always! Toga showed her his dog form! Yay! I got a complete visual of that! How terrific! Oh, but the absolute heartache in him when she confronted him was brilliant! Just wonderful! I wonder, will Sesshoumaru stand for Toga's 'willful' behavior? Something tells me he won't . . . he'll just pick the right time to deliver the smackdown, right? Keep it up! Merry Christmas! =Diane=
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 03:52 CST
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AAAAAHH, So, BakaYasha's temper has shown it's manifestation in Toga at last! Crushing the phone? LoL!! And he transformed for her... wow... I want a big black puppy to come play in my backyard... it's big enough. Does Toga want to visit me??? LoL, are we going to get to see a picture of Toga in puppy form Sue?
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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God I swear I am following this storie like a animal tracking dinner. Or, I guess, like Inuyasha tracking ramen. So Toga finally showed himself eh? Well thats good...but you left a cliffy...you MUST update soon or I'm going to DIE!!! Thyis story is still awsome and it still keeps me on the edge of my seat! GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: chichiwvu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 09:17 CST
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this is great.. I can see Sierra pulling out dog references whenever toga does anything now. hehehe "now toga, sit and be a good boy" ;) oh, poor toga. lol
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 20:06 CST
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Wow...I can't beleive he *did* that! Anyway, I have a really funny feeling the only way that Toga is going to get Sessy's respect is to actually fight him on this. After all, let's face it, Sessy didn't back off Inu-Yasha until he used the Wind Scar and therefore showed a measure of strengh rivaling his own. You notice, the only time he fought him after that was out of curiousity when Inu-Yasha was going all youkai-crazy. Still...though, I have a funny feeling things are going to get worse for Toga and Sierra before they get better....
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 15:53 CST
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Updating on vacation via internet cafe - Clearly you need to be given a laptop with wireless internet connection!! Great chapter - I'll eagerly wait for more: Sess's reaction to having Toga 'quit' being his son, and Sierra's getting passed this revelation that Toga is not human after all. I love that big-black puppy! Happy Vacation!!! Be safe!
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Title: Good doggie...nice doggie...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 11:42 CST
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I LOVED it when Toga called his father and told him off in no uncertain terms. Sesshoumaru shouldn't be surprised. Toga comes from a strong family, and the very traits he has instilled in his son are the traits that will NOT allow Sess to dictate Toga's life in the end. Kagura is SOOO going to lay into Sess, I'm sure. This is far worse than tearing up the backyard in a drunken contest. This is her son. ----Toga reveals all to Sierra...well, everything except what's under the towel! LOL!!! Her laughter when she realizes what Mokomoko-sama's purpose is was priceless. I have this kooky image of their home together, with a sign in the window saying, "Beware of Owner" - silly, huh? Hoo boy, now the dog jokes will be flying. "...Fetch!!" ---I wonder if she will make the connection about how bad a transgression it was for Toga, however accidentally, to kill her dog. Will she understand the level of personal shame...? ---Great chapter, as always!
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Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 11:04 CST
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Aweseome job! I think it's great how you really put the feelings in there for each of the characters. Seems like the only one he really relies on seems to be Kagome and her family.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 18:22 CST
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You never cease to amaze me! This is an amazing story! I love how you're not afraid to make Sessy a prick in this. There's a bit of a movement going around in IY fanfic to humanize Sessho-Maru (I'll admit, I'm among the offenders). Please update soon. The suspense is fucking deadly!
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 18:06 CST
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You have made this Sesshy fangirl feel hate towards The Fluff.... absolutly incredible. He was being a total arserag this chapter and somehow I get the feeling it won't improve for a bit yet. Sierra has to listen to Toga!He's too sweet to have his heart broken! So is she for that matter... I mean, maybe he should have told her sooner, but if I were him, I'd be scared about how to broach that subject too! They will make up relatively quickly, won't they? And will Sesshoumaru get the shoving that's coming to him? And whatever happened to Sierra's birth parents?
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Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru … oh, no you didn't! Oh, yes you did! Bad! How could he!?!?!?! I mean, I ADORE Sesshoumaru but this level of meanness is just wrong. *sigh* poor Toga. Poor Sierra. Now the question is, when he catches up to her, will she listen to him? I hope so. Just when you thought Sesshoumaru couldn't be any meaner … I hope that he will eventually see the light. This is his only son, after all. Awww… can't wait for your next update! Best for the rest of your vacation! =Diane=
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Title: it finally let me review!
Reviewed By: chichiwvu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 12:17 CST
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dang.. i wanted to mention how i loved how u have Lily at the wedding. As soon as i read the part about a woman staring sierra down, i knew it was our girl lily;) hehe... is there going to be drama? I LOVE drama. *muahhahahahahahahahaha*
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