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 Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2005 15:27 CST
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awww - I'm going to miss them. You've made me care about them and what they do. LOL - Sess didn't blow an ass-gasket with the calendar like I thought he would - but his stunned reaction was even funnier! Thank you Sue!! You ROCK!
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: March 09, 2005 14:45 CST
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Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I enjoyed every minute of it. Mmmm, a new I/K story (wipes drool from chin). I always look forward to reading your work. Thank you for sharing.
 Reviewed By: Firedemon86(not signed on)  On: March 09, 2005 14:44 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your stories and this one has become one of my all time favorites. I hope you always keep writeing and I can't wait to read your next story. As well as read the rest of purity 3. Nezumi ( i hope i spelled that right sorry if I didn't) is like Toga becomeing one of my favorit charaters. I don't review often which I know I should do more of considering I'm a writer to and love to have reviews but when I do it's for what I consider the best of stories or the best of writers. Which I think you are, so I hope I might have giveing you atlest a little smile. I can't wait to read more of your stories. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!! p.s. just a side question how do you post so quickly i mean do you have your muses chained up in a room somwhere. Cause I know my muses tend to dissapear all the time. So do share your secret. :) hehehe
 Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2005 14:16 CST
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Congratulations on finishing yet another wonderful story! The ending was priceless. I can't wait to see what you plan on doing with Purity 3. Regardless of how the plot runs, it'll be a fun ride! Best of luck to you in all of your ventures, be they writing or otherwise.
 Title: Congratulations! Another completed Fic! (it's gotta be a fanfic record...)
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi)  On: March 09, 2005 14:02 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*snicker-snort-guffaw* Sess discovers the infamous "Beefcake" calendar!! LMAO! Well, we all knew he would not be amused. I really loved Sierra's observation about how her father-in-lsw always manages to blame anything wrong on InuYasha. That was too funny. --- Well, time to break out the sparkling cider and celebrate another successfully concluded story! I'm going to miss Toga and Sierra, *wipes away a tear* but you have Ryomaru to tease and torment us with, (God, I'm loving P3!) and possibly the future downfall of his slightly more serious-minded twin. *hint hint* -- Sue, your writing is addictive and your stories are a joy to experience. The only thing I can predict is that your 'fanbase' will continue to grow. I feel honored to have been a part of this wonderful circle of people from all walks of life and their colorful opinions, off-the-wall commentary, and the over-all zaniness that a shared obsession with our favorite anime has inspired. -- Take a bow! *Applause*
 Title: I signed in just for this occasion!
Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2005 12:40 CST
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awwww! cute ending! I like that you have enjoyed writing these. Your message at the end of Meta bothered me because this should be something you enjoy - not something you regret. *sigh* I will move to Purity 3 now but not before I write this paper ... if I start reading your story I won't stop - I know me and I know your stories. *must resist temptation* ;)
 Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2005 12:23 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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That was just freakin hilarious!! I can't get over the calendar thing, and you know, I was wondering just the other day, honestly, what happened with that whole thing and if he got out of there before those girls downstairs held him to his promise. Guess not. WOW!! I would have died to be an animated fly on the wall to see Sesshoumaru's face when he saw that picture. DEAR GOD…is the building in Chicago still standing??? …I shall reframe from wondering just WHY Sesshoumaru blames toga modeling halfway nude on a calendar to be Inuyasha's fault…though I'll say I would buy that calendar any day! Amazing story Sue, as always. I love Toga and the twins, they are just so much fun to read about! it worries me though, slightly, that Kichiro would think of something like that. granted he's a doctor but his extra circular activities bring questionable mental-stability to mind. LOL. Honestly, I don't think I've laughed this hard in a while at the ending epilogue. BRAVO and as always, a standing ovation to your work! I can't wait to read more of Purity 3…I have a feeling its just going to be wonderful! Great work!!!!!
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: March 09, 2005 10:22 CST
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Toga!You should have drank your juice you silly boy. It figures that Toga would have more problems than Sierra. I love that her mark is the family crest thing.
 Title: "You didn't drink your juice..."
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2005 10:18 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hehe, poor Toga; concentrating so hard on watching Sierra recover...he ends up passing out. Well, let's hear a cheer for Modern Science!! No more brutality among youkai/human newlyweds!! LOL And it figures that Sesshoumaru, with his infinite curiosity, would be more interested if the transfusion would work, ultimately benefiting all youkai-kind and their would-be spouses than being upset that there was a better way after having to use the old traditional method himself (as was speculated by another reviewer :P ) considering it wasn't an option way-back-when he did it. Now InuYasha on the other hand...him I can see throwing a fit! Except that he really didn't have to do it the 'traditional' way either. -- I love how you have turned such a popular...fetish (I believe that is the best term for it) among a lot of InuYasha fanwriters into something with a history and an actual purpose other than a painful 'marking territory' kind of thing. Giving it Medical Validation, as it were. An very intelligently done. -- Toga still felt very proud to see his mark on his mate...well, he wouldn't be male if he didn't! It's better than a ring...it won't get lost down the kitchen sink!! LOL -- Great chapter.
 Title: HI!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not signed in of course  On: March 09, 2005 08:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I haven't reviewed in forever, but I still read all of your stories and I still find them amazing. I knew you didn't like the markings so I was surprised when I was reading about it with Toga, but I love the way you had it done. I still think you are an amazing and talented writer!
 Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2005 08:54 CST
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I guess we know which of the twins got all the brains, huh? LOL Go Kich! Definitely a far more painless solution than the traditional marking process (Toga passing out had me ROTFL). And certainly much better than having to inflict that kind of pain on your spouse. Nice job. I can't believe this is almost over! WAH!
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: March 09, 2005 07:57 CST
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Ah, the marking worked. Much less barbaric than the old way. Congrats to the happy couple.
 Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2005 00:45 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL great idea!!. In all honesity though thats the idea i though you would use for when Inu had to mark Keg back in the first one.. I guess i wasn't that far off. Just a bit early. :) Keep up the good work
 Reviewed By: Kyonarai(nsi)  On: March 08, 2005 19:57 CST
Comment/Review:
AHAH! A blood transfusion! How brilliant, and how simple! That's really a good idea too. Go Kich!
 Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2005 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter, though I really hope Toga does it properly. What can I say, it's a right of passage. I mean, gods, I'm going to sound a prick on this: Sessy doesn't get his son with another demon, but geez, does he have to be unorthodox about the marking, too?!
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