| "Unbalanced Pendulum" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Title: hmmm...
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: December 03, 2004 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I must say that i rather liked the story. I just loved the way that you portraid (oops i don't think i spelled that right!) Kuramas emotions at kuronues death, very nice. keep it comming!! here a rose for you @---^--
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, although short. For what its worth, I think you made the right decision to end chapter 4 where you did (more impact). Wonderful description of the mixture of emotions and shock that Kurama feels, and I loved the description of Hiei perhaps masking his curiosity by attempting to appear bored. Honor v. throwing away his love's sacrifice, what a heartbreaker. Please, please hurry back soon with more.
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Reviewed By: Youko_Akira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 16:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I like your story, but did you really have to kill Kuronue? I liked him. *Sniff* Oh, well you had best make up for it later.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NIce!!Hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Foxrose On: November 25, 2004 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very firgurative good lemon..pretty language u use ..luv the story continue please.
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