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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please tell em thats not all of the story you havent updeated in so long that i i think it is. if so its been a pleasure reading it if not please updeat soon i would love to read more
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Title: Shihiko
Reviewed By: Fierian Ra [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an incredible writer. I truly enjoy the amount of detail and research you put into you story. Even though I haven't reviewed this very often, i can tell u that this story is easily one of my fav. Yuyu hakusho fanfics.
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Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 08:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I,really think this story is interesting,and creative in its own special way. Its like nothing I have ever read before. I seriously cant wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 23:20 CDT
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very nice. i really love the way you write in their POVs. you manage to get right into them and show what they are really feeling and thinking without making them seem out of character. i really loved the way you wrote the tale of Hiei's life, the beginning anyway. i've never read a version that was so emotionally charged as he told it, yet not at the same time. it was like he was just reliving it, but still trying not to show weakness. i also liked how you had them reacting to each other this chapter. their physical and emotional reactions to each other's stories and Youko's fate were exceptional. great job and update soon! by the way, i don't know where you got that name from. care to share?
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Reviewed By: Shadow Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 15:27 CDT
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As I read this chapter, I found myself marvelling at how great it's written. I mean, the plot is kind of confusing (I just need to go back and reread it... all the emotional/mental conflicts confuse me), but this story is just written so well... really effective in conveying the two characters and their relationship, persay... At least, that's what I think... I'm trying to be more critical... Instead of just "GOOD CHAPTER OMG UPDATE SOON BYE!" Right. So, I'm just gonna kindly vanish off into the shadows of mediaminer until you update again... ~SJ~
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as amazing as ever. i really loved your use of allusions in this chapter. the Hansel and Gretel story fit perfectly after you twisted it a bit. and no, unfortunately, i didn't even catch Karasu as the crow. it should have been obvious given what his name means, but i had really forgotten he was even a part of this story. you re-introduced him wonderfully, though. great chapter!! wonderful job!! update soon!!
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Title: kitsuneluvuh@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh didn't log in On: September 04, 2005 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You are the best writer in all of Yu Yu Hakusho fandom-- nay, all of the fanfiction writers ever! Your work truly captures the spirit of writing, using beautifully structured and incredibly original analogies! Your writing is passionate, deep, and leaves the mind longing for more! It perfectly portrays the uncertainty of the soul, and the emotions that twist a person's fate! *sigh* your work truly is enlightening to the soul, as well as bringing out my poetic side. =^_^= Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! that chapter was so awesome! the leading parts in the beginning just hinted at some sort of climax happening. you wrote that so well. i liked the way you added their thoughts into the mix of things. it made it seem better somehow. and i really loved that last line by Youko. it was exceptional! great job! update sooooooooon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 02:26 CDT
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interesting. i miss your style of writing from you not having updated in so long. this chapter seemed exceptionally well written. i like how you have the Jagan somewhat forcing Hiei to give in to his desires. it's pretty cool, in a way, & i'm sure Youko enjoys it. great chapter & update soon!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, you're back! Terrific chapter, filled with depth of description, emotion, and the deepest of conflicts. I love this story, and am anxious for more.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 02:58 CDT
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very nice. wonderful imagery in that chapter. and, yet again, the way you got into their minds astounded me. i don't know how you do it, but keep it up! update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: AyaSnake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im not sure if ive reviewed your fic b4, so if i havent: AWESOME! and if i have, AWESOME! ur fic is AWESOME! but, i have one teensy little question. what does "grandiose" mean? hehe! i tried to use 'context clues" but it didnt work..lol! thankies!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 04:39 CST
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interesting. very descriptive on the death of The First. i liked that. you gave him a soul like everyone else & even made me feel a little sad for him. he wasn't just an annoying ghoul in his death. great chapter. keep up the good work & update soon!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:24 CST
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*crys at the sheer beauty of it* T_T I'm so over emotional today... that was so sweet! How can Hiei hand Youko over to Karasu? No! I shall not allow it! I shall save you Youko! *jumps into the fray, before realizing she has no weapon and the fact its during a battle scene, ends up getting ehr soul sucked out* Er... I think I'll leave you to your own devices... Yet at this moment, I'm hoping a bolt of lightning will randomly strike down Karasu... or something. It was a great chapter, and I can't wait till the next one. But I will, as this one was so great. 'till next time!
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Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 18:22 CST
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WOW, YOUR STORY IS WONDERFUL. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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