| "FAMILY SECRETS" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Title: Self-insertion
Reviewed By: AnimeJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 18:56 CST
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I know i said it would be a self-insertion, but if i did that then they might pull the plug....so i guess i should change that huh?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 09:43 CST
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yayness! you updated, I'm waiting as patiently as I can for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shawaazu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 21:19 CST
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I thought this was a self-insertion story.
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Title: New Girl
Reviewed By: KuramaLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS FIC IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've never read script style b4, but that's cuz it usually annoys me. but i guess the story is too good to let the script syle annoy me. update soon pweeeeeze.
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Reviewed By: YYH_RRK_INY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 15:01 CST
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Just wanted to let you know that the chapter pages of your story say you only have 2 reviews, but you really have 11 or something like that. it might just be my whacked up computer, but you never know!!! Ja Mata!
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Title: me once again!!
Reviewed By: Azar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 14:58 CST
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just wanted to say that i like YYH_RRK_INY's idea as well and it would tie in with the whole Youko thing, but I agree with anime_me11 in the whole, make more out of it. have fun writing and be creative!!!! Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: YYH_RRK_INY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 14:56 CST
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Oh, i forgot to mention how my idea would work with the bracelet thing: truth is...i have no idea how they would tie in together, but you know the story better than anyone so i think you can figure something out! Ja Mata!
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Reviewed By: TheFluffster0 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 14:53 CST
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I see you're getting some pretty good feedback and ideas so i guess there's no reason for me to rack my brain for ideas. anyway, awesome story, please update asap!!!!!!!!
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: anime_me11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, this is a really good story!!! Ideas? YYH_RRK_INY's idea is really cool and it would be awesome if you used it, but if you do I don't think that should be the only thing that you do do. When Youko says "Don't worry, my dear, you will." (I think that's right) he's being his mallicious self. Gwen could get a glimpse of Youko and Kurama's connection that way, but also, make sure lives up to his michivious instinct, don't make it boring like: 'Oh, you're that fox guy I saw, no big deal.' type thing (not that you would do that anyway). Anyway, that's my input, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Lord_Fluffy_Rulez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like YYH_RRK_INY's idea. that would be really cool, and very unpredictable. and it would be a cool way for Gwen to find out about Youko. Anyway, no ideas are coming from me right now but this is a really cool story please update soon!!!!!! you are doing an awesome job.
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Reviewed By: YYH_RRK_INY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What kind of new power? Let's see...does it need to concern the bracelet?...ummm...Oh, i know! some weird power that goes like this(the person's name is gonna be NAME, NAME is a girl): if NAME touches something or someone then NAME can see its past. for example: if NAME touched a person for long enough, or looked them in the eye long enough, NAME would start getting visions in her head of that persons past. NAME probably wouldn't know what she was seeing, but it's still cool. this would be a very interesting way for Gwen to find out about Youko...
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Reviewed By: Azar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, this is beginning to become a very good story, i can't wait to see what's going to happen next!!! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: DivineSpirit00 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, this story is getting really good!!! i'm know you're right when you say there are a lot of girls that wish they were in Gwen's position... Please update soon!!!
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Title: Me again!! ^_^
Reviewed By: Shio On: December 03, 2004 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Huge smile and starts cracking up* Hiei threw a vase at her. *laughs then sees the part in Koenma's office* Wow. Lots O' Info. Very informational for all you kids out there. *Nods head* Any who. Yay! Kurama-kun with out a shirt! *Evil grin and starts picturing it* Man I wish I were Gwen. Kurama is sooooo cute. *sigh* Okay Loving it still Like always *chibi girl giving the thumbs up* A couple of typos but not very noticable. Good job with Hiei and the vase. Loved it. I think it's just getting better and will only get better. *smiles* Oh and a little japanese: mai tattoi ru-bishie bushi... ¬_¬ *giggles* It rulz!! It means read haird knight. It was in a fanf fic with Kurama that has been deleted. I'm not sure if that is the accurate translation but I know it's along those lines and a saying for Hiei: Baka ningen. *sighs* Stupid Humans... fits him. Love the stories and Keep writing. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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