| "FAMILY SECRETS" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kali Alorien [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 23:39 CST
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omg girl, this iz great, poor kuwabara...well sorta newayz, please update soon, can't wait 2 read the next chapter!!!
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Title: ...!
Reviewed By: TheFluffster0 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 13:02 CST
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oooh, a new power! yay! please hurry and update soon.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 21:42 CST
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oh, i love this fic, goin on fav list, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 19:13 CST
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You updated again. Keep the updates coming! Before it's too late! ok, no too late, but I felt like being a little dramatic ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 19:13 CST
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You updated again. Keep the updates coming! Before it's too late! ok, no too late, but I felt like being a little dramatic ^_^
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Title: Self-insertion
Reviewed By: AnimeJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 18:56 CST
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I know i said it would be a self-insertion, but if i did that then they might pull the plug....so i guess i should change that huh?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 09:43 CST
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yayness! you updated, I'm waiting as patiently as I can for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shawaazu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 21:19 CST
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I thought this was a self-insertion story.
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Title: New Girl
Reviewed By: KuramaLady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS FIC IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've never read script style b4, but that's cuz it usually annoys me. but i guess the story is too good to let the script syle annoy me. update soon pweeeeeze.
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Reviewed By: YYH_RRK_INY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 15:01 CST
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Just wanted to let you know that the chapter pages of your story say you only have 2 reviews, but you really have 11 or something like that. it might just be my whacked up computer, but you never know!!! Ja Mata!
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Title: me once again!!
Reviewed By: Azar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 14:58 CST
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just wanted to say that i like YYH_RRK_INY's idea as well and it would tie in with the whole Youko thing, but I agree with anime_me11 in the whole, make more out of it. have fun writing and be creative!!!! Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: YYH_RRK_INY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 14:56 CST
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Oh, i forgot to mention how my idea would work with the bracelet thing: truth is...i have no idea how they would tie in together, but you know the story better than anyone so i think you can figure something out! Ja Mata!
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Reviewed By: TheFluffster0 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 14:53 CST
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I see you're getting some pretty good feedback and ideas so i guess there's no reason for me to rack my brain for ideas. anyway, awesome story, please update asap!!!!!!!!
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: anime_me11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, this is a really good story!!! Ideas? YYH_RRK_INY's idea is really cool and it would be awesome if you used it, but if you do I don't think that should be the only thing that you do do. When Youko says "Don't worry, my dear, you will." (I think that's right) he's being his mallicious self. Gwen could get a glimpse of Youko and Kurama's connection that way, but also, make sure lives up to his michivious instinct, don't make it boring like: 'Oh, you're that fox guy I saw, no big deal.' type thing (not that you would do that anyway). Anyway, that's my input, update soon!!!
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