| "FAMILY SECRETS" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Title: LOVE IT
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen - i cant log in On: April 15, 2005 10:51 CDT
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GREAT ( THUMBS UP WAY UP ) THIS IS GREAT VERY GREAT VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY....I like the top and the bottom of the chapter I do that thing a bit ( holds hand up and shakes it a bit in an 'ifie' way ) VERY VERY VERY GOOD
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Title: Oh..so Kawii!!!!
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that japanese too..what a language to learn.^^ This was such a passionate chapter Aj. please write more soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Guardiangirl624 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 21:42 CDT
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Hahahahahaha!you Really Out did youself!splendid! 'Hiei stop drooling on the carpet'is right!does he have any pride?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 22:14 CDT
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If I hadn't learnned the common Japanese phrases from reading fanfiction, my reaction would have been the same as Gwen's. "bless you" I'm sorry but that was too funny. Kurama's mom's name is Shiori, thougut you'd like to know. and Koenma's the prince of Reikai, not Makai. Well, I still luv ya and want yas to update again soon.
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Title: suggestions
Reviewed By: Aliah (not logged in) On: April 02, 2005 03:07 CST
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i think that she should, and it should be huge, like the fangirls have this great plan like in fruitsbaskets(dont own)... So yeah, i spose that'd be cool.... And the coupon. Does that mean theyll have another date? And why havent they kissed... for real!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: aliah (not signed) On: April 02, 2005 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story!!!! I love it to death!!!! lol and the rabid fangirls... heh..heh, just kiss him in full view of them and hopefully they'll go away.... also, i hope you update sooooooooooooonnnnnnn!!!!!!
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Title: ROCKIN'
Reviewed By: KitsuneCuckoo On: March 30, 2005 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so cool!!! The romance is so......romantic. LOL Keep it up. and plz update soon.
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Title: (didn't log in)
Reviewed By: me On: March 30, 2005 17:05 CST
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suggestions.....well, i think it would be cool if Gwen had to mess with the fangirls again, but just make sure that the same doesn't happen that's happened before. in other words, make sure that when you are repeating events like this, it has to be interesting enouh for us to remember and recognize it to be different and better than the last run in with the fangirls. but i have n doubt that u cane make this more interesting than our wild imaginations!!!! yay, hurry and update!!! ciao for now! (wait, that's ur line...see, i'm rading so much of ur work that ur starting to rub off!!!)
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Title: Suggestions...
Reviewed By: AnimeJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:21 CST
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do u think Gwen should fight the fan girls at her school or not?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 20:31 CST
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man, Nano sure put Yoko in his place. I know for sure that Hiei is older than Yukina, Don't quote me on the twins thing, but I'm almost positive that they are. so, update again soon. I luv your chapters so long as they're more than one page long. k then, bye.
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Reviewed By: AnimeJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:53 CST
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i'll be working on the next chappie this week. i'll do my best to post it before friday.
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Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man..this is a awsome chapter..you must write more. I can't wait till the Youko Nano talk and will Kurama say i Love you? just awsome girl^^
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Reviewed By: Meepity On: March 27, 2005 20:09 CST
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Yay!!!! You are a really good writer, I wish could write half as well as you, lol. Almost no flaws, I'd only say that the "Don't own it" sidecomments get a bit disturbing, I mean, after a while, they're not all that neccessary (most likely spelled that wrong) Anyway, rock on!! {insert norm, "I love this fic, updates soon, here}
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Title: chapter 16
Reviewed By: AnimeJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 17:55 CST
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I'll do my very best to put the next chapter up before the week is out :)
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Reviewed By: MeggyBoo On: March 27, 2005 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok this is tha coolest chapter eva!!!! frig that this is tha coolest fanfic eva! lol o and if u want to get rid of the rabid fangirls make a REALLY convicing Kurama clone hopefully they'll fall for it ne? lol until next time :D update sooon pllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleas? lol bye
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